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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Part 1

I'm now even more curious , Maan seeing Geet's photo so does he know her , his family has chosen Geet while he thinks she is low class
I know I'm missing something
Maan dreams about Sameera he is totally in love with her so than where is she ...she just disappeared

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --mittu--

Lovely update!!
Dadi and vicky ;)
Grr...when will this maan come out of SameeraLand
Maan's dad..i thought it must be some business thing.. 😆
ab ayega asli mazza 😉
what will you do maan 😆

can't wait for the nxt part



Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: deep002

wonderful update dear

Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: diyadecember

Y this much angry maan?
Oye gv big updates


Bichare ka dill is going to break na so🥺
Thanks for reading! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 1

I'm now even more curious , Maan seeing Geet's photo so does he know her , his family has chosen Geet while he thinks she is low class
I know I'm missing something
Maan dreams about Sameera he is totally in love with her so than where is she ...she just disappeared

For the first time let me clear ur doubts too😆
U didn't miss anything!
U have read what I've written that's it... so thanks for reading! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Part #2



What the hell is happening in his house n y aren't anybody back yet!

Good I hate this. .. sitting in his room he thought flipping the channels randomly. .. fuming with every passing second. .. that's when one of his servant knocked the door ... if looks can kill poor him would have been ash my now!

WHAT??

Wo bade sahab is here...

Not even bothering to answer the poor shivering servent who was still at the door he made his way to his dad's study knowing well that is where he would find him

Dad wo... he ate his words when his dad raised his hand to stop... while he continued to talk with his client I suppose. ..

Yes son?

Dad we need to talk...

Hmmm really even I feel so ... It's been long isn't it! So did u see the stock market report today what do u think about it

Huh!

Maan?

Hmm dad its good we are stable for a while anyway dad I wanted to talk about this low class girl u picked up for me...

He said throwing the envelope across the table...

I mean dad she doesn't even respect us what does she mean by sending that childhood pic of her to us... How dare she make fun of khuranas...

Hold on. .hold on... what are u talking about let me see... oh so the pictures might have got exchanged but she looks cute doesn't she?

Cute dad with that pink oversized frock overflowing nose n lolly pop in her hands. .. yuck!

Maan what is your problem with geet if it's just the picture it might have got mixed up or something I'll get her new picture..

No dad I actually. .. umm.. I love someone else. ..

This is ridiculous maan we have given u all the time in the world to find someone for ur self but all u were interested was business at that time now when we fixed ur wedding u say u love someone else

We being ur elders know what we are doing so stop ur nonsense n get ready to marry Geet!

But y that girl she is...

Enough not a single word against her n y do u keep calling her names as if you know her from ages. ..she is going to be a khurana soon n i wont tolerate this kind of behaviour towards her...

I think u should leave now... I've got other important works

He was left gaping at his father who got himself busy with some random file...

Defeated he walked back to his room knowing his dad has already given his verdict

On reaching his room he found sonu nigam(singer) singing on top of his lungs...

Kyun aisi umeed ki maine
Jo aise naakaam hui
Door banaayi thi manzil
To raste mein hi shaam hui

Ab kahaan jaaun main
Kisko samjhaaun main
Kya maine chaaha tha aur
Kyun kismat me aayi - tanhai, tanhai
Jaise andhero ki ho gehraayi


He knew his anger was in peaks n poor sonu nigam had nothing to do with it but who explain this to his heart which was breaking with the thought of loosing his love even before getting it!

All this is because of that stupid girl Geet! How dare she comes in between him and sameera. .. there is only one way out of this mess

This lollypop backing out of this wedding. .. n Maan Singh Khurana would make sure she does by hook or crook. .. he thought with a evil smile setting on his face

Tanhaai, tanhaai
Milon hai phaili hui tanhaai
Tanhaai, tanhaai
Milon hai phaili hui tanhaai
Tanhaai, tanhaai, tanhaai, tanhaai...

Yaar sonu stop it u are spoiling the whole mood I've created. .. he thought throwing the remote control across the room n walking to his balcony. .. planning his next move




To be continued. ...



Hey pep ...
Dekha it's proof I never go against ur wishes. ... this part is 6 words more than the previous one😉

Enjoy reading!😃
Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
seriously childhood pic with lolly pop dont know where u find such idea n his father is very strict lets see how he will make geet back out from this marriage n again dont be angry i want his incomplete story to complete with geet :-) nice part n that song the way u used its awesome thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

seriously childhood pic with lolly pop dont know where u find such idea n his father is very strict lets see how he will make geet back out from this marriage n again dont be angry i want his incomplete story to complete with geet :-) nice part n that song the way u used its awesome thnx 4 update


Wo kya hai na...
My mom says I used jump over trees n walls in my childhood so ... I guess I've hit with something😉

N the song!
One of my favourite!

But in a serious note I suggest u study😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Wow Geet toh bindhast type hain..
seems she loves bajaofying his band every time...
Childhood photo and the description of the photo..😆

sahi photo bheja hain Geet ne ! 😉
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: spoorthi28


Wo kya hai na...
My mom says I used jump over trees n walls in my childhood so ... I guess I've hit with something😉

N the song!
One of my favourite!

But in a serious note I suggest u study😆

I still remember jumping walls and climbing trees at my grandmom's place when I was a kid..😉
Well to be frank i still do that sometimes..😛😆

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