TaaRey OS~Hamari Adhuri Kahani~

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Hey Guys!!Back with another OS!😊 I know I had promised to write a happy OS,but I had written this before promising you guys that.😛 So please read it!Agli baar happy OS pakka!😃 And since I don't know how to embed a song..please its a request listen to the song Humari Adhuri Kahani as you read it.😊

A TaaRey OS - Hamari Adhuri Kahani.

Swayam's POV:

Its been a year now.A whole Freaking year!A year..without her cutely weird antics,her addictive energy and smile,her presence,everything!A year since she has spoken a word..a year has passed with her in that condition..How could you be so cruel Krishnaji?How could you?How could you do this to her?How could you do this to Rey? I failed to control my tears..but Rey..

"Swayam? Please calm down." I heard Sharon telling me.She held my hands in hers..wiping away my tears.

" How can I Sharon? Ek taraf my sister is in such a condition since a year now!And Rey? Its been a year since he has shed tears sharon!

"Swayam.."

"Woh ek zinda laash bann chuka hai.A body without a soul.Eyes without tears and a heart without emotions.And a face without a smile." I wept out my frustration..

" Swayam..hum kya karein? Kitni koshish karein? He hasn't been able to cope with the shock.Uss Vishesh ke life imprisonment ke baad bhi..kisey chain pohochi hai Swayam? Uss din Rey usey jaan se maar deta agar hum nahi hote toh!Par jabse Taani coma stage mein chali gayi hai..

" Will she ever be ok Sharon? Will Rey ever be ok? Vishesh has gotten what he deserved for raping my sister.Aaj uske wajahse Taani ki yeh haalat hai.Par Rey yeh kab accept karega Sharon? When will he let out his sorrows?When will he come to terms with all of this Sharon?

" Aayega Swayam.."

I looked up at her with faint hope in me.I went to the ICU ward where my sister lay..I wish I could make things alright.That bloody Vishesh!Even today I wish we could kill him! Why do these rapists get life imprisonment? Why not a death sentence?? I wish I could strangle him to death!Because of him Taani was in a coma stage and Rey..woh toh chalta firta laash ban chuka hai.The day vishesh had raped her and hit her on the cerebral part of her brain..resulting in her going into a coma state..Rey had still not been able to cope with it.When will he come out of this shock? I felt totally lost..I felt guilty for not having been able to save my sister..though we were successful in pushing her rapist behind the bars..but then when will she awake to see that? Or will she ever ??

With Rey:

Serene waves lapped at my feet..some of the water wetting my face.A year had passed.Exactly on this day a year back..she had gone into a coma state..and its been a year since those machines have been helping her live.The wave of emotions passed through me again.Rage at that bas***d Vishesh!The bloody rapist!Even today I wanted to kill him with my bare hands!Yes I had hit him like a maniac..had my friends not stopped me I would have killed him then and there!Pain and guilt overtook me again..because I could not save Taani.I had not been there when she needed me the most.I could blame everyone from the weak laws in India to that bloody Vishesh but.. Two years ago I myself gave her to Vishesh.I bloody hated myself for that!! I had promised to be by her side forever..yet today somewhere I was responsible for her condition..I hated myself but not more than I loved her.And the emptiness within me..which had turned me into a living corpse.I went numb again.That Vishesh was in jail..but atleast he was alive!That bloody rapist and murderer was freaking alive!But my Taani?She was supported by some set of machines!!And anyday she could..NO!My forehead throbbed as these thoughts struck me.She had suffered that day..and she was suffering till today.And I was JUST HELPLESS!! Something inside me finally snapped..the emptiness increased but my face was damp.I realised I was crying..the pain and the guilt, the rage within me,the hopes of seeing her smile again,the unrequited love..everything got me finally..! I closed my eyes..which were beginning to hurt and burn.My entire body shuddered with the pain in my soul.Soul?The day that doctor announced due to damage to her cerebrum..Taani had entered a coma stage..I lost my soul.The day I failed to save her..I lost the will to face myself.The day she lay in that bed..not moving..not smiling..I lost the will to live,to smile.

*music*

I was crying my heart out..the pain taking over completely.I wish..she would awake and wipe this pain out..I needed her..she was everything I have ever wanted!

Paas aaye dooriyan fir bhi kam na hui..ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi.

Those moments when she came close..when she made me smile..yet today.She was far..will she ever come back?

Aasmann ko zameen yeh zaruri nahi..jaanle..jaanle. Ishq sacha wahi..jisko milti nahi manzilien..manzilien.

She was my life.My soul.My sole reason to live.The moment she left me to live on..our story would never reach its destiny maybe..but the love we shared..was pure and true..just like her smile,her eyes which contained depth..which were the mirror to her soul..

Rang the,noor tha,jab kharib tu tha.Ek jannat sa tha yeh jahan.Waqt ki rek pe kuch mere naamsa likhke chod gaya tu kahan...hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani...hamari adhuri kahani.

My life had been so colourful..when she was in my arms,beside me.The comfort in those hugs..the warmth of her arms and the happiness of her soul..she had made my life a heaven.She had been the sunshine of my life.I looked up recollecting those memories..realising she wasn't there by my side.I realised she wasn't even aware of my pain..of my love.She was oblivious to the world..my eyes burnt due to the tears..my heart screamed for love!It screamed for its other half to complete it.

*music*

Our fights..her love and care..the moment I gave my soul..my everything to her.Her cute blushy face..and now she was just..struggling to live??

I stood up only to collapse again.My feet refused to even support me.

Khushboo se teri yunhi takra gaye..chalte chalte dekho na hum kaha aagaye.Jannatein agar yahi..tu dikhe kyun nahin..chand suraj sabhi hai yahan!Intezaar tera..sadiyon se kar raha!Pyaasi baithi hai kabse yahan..

Hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani. Hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani..

Her unconditional love,her smile,her cute antics..everything led me to fall in love with her...truly and deeply!As the myriad of images..passed through my mind..I tightened my fists..her memories,her companionship were heaven to me..yet her presence was denied to me.What wrong had we done?We loved each other truly..when everyone had the right to love and be happy..Then why were we denied this right to live together?Why was Krishnaji so oblivious to my pain?Why was he turning a blind eye to my yearning..to our love?Why was he making her suffer?Did he not love Taani?Why couldn't he end her pain?My soul was being ripped apart brutally..my heart still awaited that beautiful feeling called love to envelope it..but all it got was pain and yearning.It yearned and thirsted for love..for love from that one girl it truly loved!

*Music*

I dragged my feet to the hospital..which has been her home since a year now..my vision was blurry yet my mind's eye was cherishing all those memories we had formed together..I had to look at her..I needed to be close to her..

Pyaas ka yeh safar,khatam ho jaayega.Kuch adhura sa joh tha pura ho jaayega.

As I neared her ward..my memories went back to our days of togetherness..those days when we were blissfully happy in each other's companionship.My heart dared to hope again..

Jukh gaya aasmaan,mil gaye do jahan..har taraf hai milan ka sama..doliyan hai saji,khushbuien har kahi..padhne aaya khuda khud yahan.

I looked at her through the door of the ICU..tears unstoppable as the memories of the day we confessed..the day we became one..the day Taani and Rey united as TaaRey..our dreams,our eternal love..those days when we saw happiness everywhere..her bubbly positive self..we had been united by Krishnaji himself..and today though she was far far away...our hearts were still in love with each other and my soul belonged to hers..

I entered in the ICU not paying heed to SwaRon's calls..

Hamari Adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani..

I kissed her forehead and held her hands in mine..my heart started to hope again..though I knew the chances of her recovery were less.I somewhere realised..our story,our love may remain incomplete..but I would love her till eternity.I will love her till my last breath and beyond that..I will always live for her..and die for her.Our love was eternal though we may not make it to the end together..but then that is true love right?It never stops loving..neither does it stop hoping.

*Music*

"I love you Taani..I always will love you." I whispered into her ears..not sure if she had heard it..I wiped off my tears..and rested my head on her hands..and closed my eyes..determined not to lose hope..as Swayam and Sharon left me there..to hope and TO LOVE.

"A True Lovestory May Remain Incomplete..For It Never Ends!"

So before you all come and hit me..I am running off!😆 If possible..silent readers do comment and Hit the Like button guys!Chappal mat maarna!😛 *runs off*

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Nicky-nish thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Luvly os...
Emotions were written beautifully...
Swayam nd rey's pain nd anger ws shown so nicely...
I luv d title nd d song its my fvrt these days...
do write more
Bt nxt tym try write happy one...:P
Thnx fr pm
Edited by Nicky-nish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please aysa maat likh bohot rulata hai tu
but the os was emotional and beyond description
loved it
but truly cant bear the pain
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful os
I am speechless
It was really very emotional
This is indeed true love
Could only wish taani to wake up soon for her rey
Thanks for the pm
Do write more
Next time happy os pakka?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Can I get something to wipe my
Eyes please girl this was beyond
Emotional taani in coma she was
Raped that bloody V rey living just
In a small hope to see taani getting
Up 😭 you made me cry and pls yaar
Don't writer this emotional Os it hurt Ree
That heart feel all the pain pls thanks for PM and now please happy Os pls _/\_
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Posted: 10 years ago
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soo emotional 😭
pls happy TR os soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pd786

Beautiful os

I am speechless
It was really very emotional
This is indeed true love
Could only wish taani to wake up soon for her rey
Thanks for the pm
Do write more
Next time happy os pakka?


Thanks yaar!Next time happy Os pakka promise!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Luvly os...
Emotions were written beautifully...
Swayam nd rey's pain nd anger ws shown so nicely...
I luv d title nd d song its my fvrt these days...
do write more
Bt nxt tym try write happy one...:P
Thnx fr pm


Thanks!😃 Ab pakka ek happy OS hi dungi!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: raddhi

Can I get something to wipe my
Eyes please girl this was beyond
Emotional taani in coma she was
Raped that bloody V rey living just
In a small hope to see taani getting
Up 😭 you made me cry and pls yaar
Don't writer this emotional Os it hurt Ree
That heart feel all the pain pls thanks for PM and now please happy Os pls _/\_


Ab toh main happy OS hi likhungi!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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