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Part 10

Before I claim her lips she pushed me back and gave an angry glare
"I know you very well so don't try your luck"

My sherni was awake now I have to be careful and tried to concentrate on studies. After half an hour she called me and I had a hope that may be I will get kiss but my hope didn't last for long.

"Before you think in other direction I want to clarify that kiss is not going to happen until you will answer my questions."

Really now to get a kiss I have to play KBC having no other option I agreed.

"Will you be with me always or it's just a time pass for you?? Please don't feel bad because I want to commit in long term relationship."

I was shocked to hear her first set of words but next words gave me relief before I could say anything she continued

"Maan I have always dreamt of spending my life with my Prince Charming who will be with me in all the thick and thin of life, who will love me and will give me my own family I don't have big dreams but simple ones I want to take care of my husband my family I want to live a simple life which will be full of love so I just want to confirm for that."

Well when I first saw her I never ever thought that Geetika will be like this I thought she wants a hifi life but this confession made me realise that how much wrong I was and finally it was my turn to talk so how can I leave this opportunity.

"Geetika I will not lie and yes same as you I want to be ours long term relationship and I want to give you all the happiness and I want our relation based on trust and truth so I want to tell you something from my past but please don't leave me after hearing this"

Yes I had a past though it was not that much dark but it made an impact on my relation with my father. And I feared about Geetika's reaction but she assured be through her eyes to go ahead.

"As you know that I'm from IIT I enjoyed my life there with my friends Adi and Arjun we were always together they both found their love Pinky and Annie I didn't had sisters so they became my sisters and I met Sameera who was their friends she started to chat with me in FB and after some time we use to talk and I thought I was in love with her and proposed her."

When I saw Geetika I was sure she was planning to murder someone who it was I don't know never mind I will ask her later.

"And I had my 1st kiss with her."

"Wait a minute only one kiss or many kisses like us and only kiss or more than that??" she asked me in cold tone

"Believe me Geetika only one kiss that too under alcohol effect and nothing more if you want ask my friends"

"No it's fine I know you from many days and I trust you" she gave me a smile which assured her words

"Days were going fine one fine day she came to me and told that her father is searching boy for and asked me to talk with my dad. I didn't wanted to lose her so I decided to talk with my dad though I didn't had much good relation with my dad but I wanted to try. But all my hopes were shattered when my father straight away refused I didn't feel bad for that Geetika but he started to abuse and he even started to beat her I somehow managed take her away to my room you know my mother who played role of both father and mother in my life when this man was busy drinking."

She gave me a hug to comfort me which was enough to give me some relief. Then I continued about how I was broken by the girl whom I thought to love me the way I loved her

"Next day I decided to Sameera and tell that we would marry in court and then to inform our parents but I got biggest shock that Sameera agreed to marry the guy whom her father selected when I asked her about this she told me that she loved me because she thought I'm some Richie rich but when she came to know about my status she just left me."

"But how she didn't know that you are from middle class family did you hide from her?"

"No Geetika I had told her about me but she had seen my mother who just loves to show off her saris and jewellery in every parties which attends and I have to attend one of such party with my mom there she saw me."

"But how come she thought that you are Rich as per I have seen you are simple and never show off except the kiss this morning u gave me."

"Kiss was because I was not able to see that guy holding your hand and I guess I have told you that earlier and about Sameera thinking me Rich credit goes to my mom one of the aunty asked about my being simple thing to mom so she told that I want to find a girl who will fall for me and not for my money and Sameera started her plan to woo me and I was got trapped."

"Then how she came to know that you are not Rich?"

"It was her mom who told her about my mom faking her status though her mom didn't know about me and her you know women gossip it was like that only and to confirm her doubts she asked Annie to my address and she reached my mom before my college and confirmed it.

"Wait wait I'm confused she told you that her dad is searching boy for her then you talked with your dad and now you are telling that she visited your house before you could reach does she have the power to fly or something?"

"See she met me before college though I wanted to talk with my dad but he will be at home at night only so having no option I attended the classes and Sameera is from other college she had a day off that day and her mom told about my mom and all when she went back and she visited my home during afternoon."

"Ok now I got it then what you did?"

"What to do I decided to let go off this matter if my father comes to know then there will be a war again and I'm happy because I didn't cross my limit with her."

"In my opinion you should have kicked her never mind but why your is fond of showing off?"

"She is from rich family Geetika and my dad is from middle class it was love marriage and mom tried her best to adjust but relatives from mom's side started to show how much low my dad is and due to this dad started to drink and ignore us though he gave money to mom but he was not there when we both needed him you know Geetika my dad was best he use to spend time with me when I was small and use to teach me many things but everything ended. What was my mistake Geetika I lost the persons whom I loved my dad went away because of mom's relatives Sameera who never loved and just faked only because she thought I was rich money is everything in life na there is no space for love, emotions, care, honesty and truth. If you also leave me and go then I will be not able to survive Geetika I will"

Before I could complete my senses she made me shut by kissing me.

AUTHOR(mishtypie) NEEDS UR OPINION- PLZ RESPOND

Guys again I'm really sorry for being late but I want to ask you something is money matters that much in life?? I mean to survive Ofcource we need it but money has more importance that love, care, truth and honesty??? Please do answer this question because some people might have been faced this and I'm one among them

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