Sahir Arzoo FF | Love, law, inter alia | Chapter 20: Pg 91 [COMPLETE] - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
how come she is married
nonono
what will come of saaz now?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey continue soon
i wannna read more
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Posted: 11 years ago

What an update! the wait was so worth it!

Entire chapter was beautifully written
You have put your soul in this update. There are so many emotional moments that had not only touched my heart but literally forced me to imagine the pain experienced by Sahir

Hema you really know how to hook your readers.

Waiting for the next update to know why Arzoo's husband is back with her and how Sahir will deal with the situation.

Edited by Tajon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG ! i don't feel well after reading this chapter, i have a knot in my stomach. I feel bad for Arzoo. This monster called her ex-husband is back and plus he presents himself as her husband, i remember very well that Arzoo had said that she was divorced. I think he wants to manipulate Sahir by blackmailing Arzoo. I think he wants that sahir believes that Arzoo is a happily married woman for moving Sahir away from her life and thus being at his mercy without hoping the help of anyone. Isolate her for possessing her better, typical of this kind of individual. I'm glad that Sahir has felt that something is wrong because it is not the attitude of a person who showed so much attention for him after the decease of his mother and then disappears like that... I'm sure this monster threatened her, to kill sahir or something like that... Fortunately, Sahir doesn't seem convinced, he learnt to know her and he knows when she is pretending... Listen to your heart and go Sahir go to save our Arzoo, your Arzoo from this psychopath ! And Arzoo please, please don't give in to his blackmail because people like that are like dogs they bite only when we show them we are afraid... And please please for once Arzoo accept Sahir's helping hand !

Sorry for having focused on worst things... Now, let me go back to good things, i loved the fact that Sahir has realized his true feelings for Arzoo and this even after having known that she is a "married" woman... I loved also the fact he didn't turn around and stayed to ensure that Arzoo is fine but what i loved above all is that Sahir would do anything for Arzoo's happiness, he is as fanaa for Arzoo as she is for him and this confirms they are humsafars.

Thank you for sharing this magnificent story with us and showing us your real talent as writer. Take as much time as you need ...

Ma chere Hema je ne sais pas quoi te dire si ce n'est que j'ai juste envie de te prendre dans mes bras et te serrer tres fort !
🤗🤗


Edited by ikhlass - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Before I make a post about the last two chapters let me just say that hema..Thank you for arzoo and sahir in this avtaar...
whole reading the chapter about sahir ammi I had a thought about what his mum my have been thinking while laying there in the hospital bed...and hence while I was away for work in decide go pen something about his mum for all of you to read...

As u said before this story is as much ours as it is yours and I would like to take the chance and tell you what I imagined while reading the chapter...

Please enjoy the post and let me know what you think...

I will post it shortly within your story... I like say before I post it that I have no intention of taken the story away...its just a image I had I my mind for serval days that I wished go share...

Enjoy razia
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mera Sahir...Mera Beta...

I lay in the bed noticing the hours,seconds and minutes pass by one by one, confiming that I am nearing my end. My eyes feel tired yet show hope of recovery and show willingness to live... I see my husband sitting besides me holding my hand praying silently to himself for my recovery knowing full well that recovery is far off...I touch his hand with mine and look into his eyes...He simply signals and says it's time... I look at him and close my eyes to signal in agreement and with that he walks away leaving me in deep thought with the echoing creek of the door... sortly after a nurse enters the room and checks my pulse and monitor, fills in the documentation and walks away to the door and before leaving simply says please rest alviraji...I smile and close my eyes...

I see a boy sitting in the room looking at me holding my hand calling for me...ammi is all I can hear... and this is when I see my boy sahir sitting on his bed just like I left him all those years ago stretching out his arms for me to pull him close and hug all his worries away...

I sit there rocking him back and fort saying beta it will be okay and with that he fads away and I open my eyes and say "sahir"...

Low and behold my son is sitting infornt of me like a prayer answered.. A chance for redemption a chance for forgiveness is all I can ask...I see him leaning in closely and saying it's okay... tears leaving his eyes just like the river nile just like the ones I had shed when leaving him all those years ago...

I feel my breath leaving my body slowly...feeling that the end is close...I hold his hand and look at him and say "beta everyone needs there humsafar"...and with that I know it's one of the only live lessons I can give him in his present situation... I feel proud as I look at him all grown up...

I see his longing eyes saying it will be okay but I know my time has come and pray that the girl he had left in the corridor holds his hand and repairs his broken heart like I did all those years ago when leaving sahir abbu...

I feel proud at this moment being surrounded by the once I love my husband and beta and with that I take my last breath and feel my hand losing his grip and the one of my husband...

the monitor in the room starts blipping in silence showing that she is no more a line indicating a ending of a journey and signalling for one to start...

Yet at that moment the scene is so idelic like that of the sun showing the start of the night... a son is left hold his mum in his embrace wishing and hoping for his ammi to return...

The room is left with the sound of his voice "ammi please come back..."...yet they know she is never to return...

Just one of the thoughts I had while rereading the chapter...Thanks hema for giving us the chance to meets sahirs mum...hope you liked it...

Razia

Edited by raaz19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for sharing Razia! It was heart-touching 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ikhlass

Thank you for sharing Razia! It was heart-touching 😭


No problem the review will only make you cry more...hope you have your kleenex ready...😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raaz19


No problem the review will only make you cry more...hope you have your kleenex ready...😛



I'm ready!😆

i loved sahir's mother's thoughts btw😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a mind blowing chapter!!
Sorry that I didnt repy for previous one too nut both of them were fantastic and this one especially makes me to reach out to Sahir!

Thank you so much and please update soon...😊

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