ArHi SS: The Promises Ruin *COMPLETE* [Note + EXT TS PG113] - Page 8

Interesting. Waiting for the next part

oooh, really interesting start 😛 am kind of curious as to where u take it and hoping its not too painful though ur title suggests otherwise. there were some parts of the sheetal track that gave us some beautiful arhi moments but on the whole they could have done so much with it but chose not to. so am sure u'll do a better job than the writers did, waiting to see what happens next 😃

Originally posted by: stg1

oooh, really interesting start 😛am kind of curious as to where u take it and hoping its not too painful though ur title suggests otherwise. there were some parts of the sheetal track that gave us some beautiful arhi moments but on the whole they could have done so much with it but chose not to. so am sure u'll do a better job than the writers did, waiting to see what happens next😃

You just made me nervous with your comment. Hope I wont mess this up lol

That's a good one .I hope khusi don't see arnav and sheetha again in his cabin

Super awesome update..
Waiting for next part soon..

i like this strong khushi...i liked her attitude regarding sheetal...she knows that she is arnav's wife and she had that power ..but arnav is here typical man he thinks that every thing is fine he love his wife and she should not feel jealous about sheetal or any body else...but he should not take khushi for granted and nobody should be interfere in their private time...lets see how he feel about his own baby...one thing is right he is being too much friendly with sheetal no wife will tolerate that

at last...I been stalking..hehehhee..omg..cute start..half way thru it went down the drain but the ending is beautiful but my heart is going dhak dhak dhak dhak...hmmm dun know why...please update soonerrr...

HOPE SHE DOESNT SEE SHEETAL WITH ARNAV KEEPING FINGERS CROSSED

it's getting interesting
waiting for next