Short story: Love and Regret - Page 4

Dekho dekho mujhe bataya nahi.... 🤢

The one day that changed the lives of Jay and Bani...could have been avoided but call it destiny or impulse....it just didn't..the consequences were unexpected...that was able to land both of them in a repent of not getting the love for a lifetime, with Bani living that time much less than Jay! His surprise, shock and sorrow mixed up with that fatherly touch to his being..was sad..whatever has happened in the past...overlooking that, what he was facing...was painful...his last words to his daughter in the form of the letter was his true reflection! Liked that his daughter didn't curse him or did something like that for being her father....Simply another feather to your cap!

Very touching... 😭 sad but lovely...
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Hi Sabsj,

That was beautifully penned story. I was in tears reading it. Life was just unfair JB and their daughter.

Kiran

OMG...You made me cry... 😭 Such an emotional story... 😭 Really, beautifully penned down... 😃 Awesome job... 👏

Well done once again... 👏

Awww, what a sweet story, saby!! You made me feel all soppy!!

Loved it, as usual!

-- SR

Saby, you made me cry with this awesome story.

Very touching and engrossing. Loved the way Jai identified the characteristics in Krishna and recognised her.

What a fate! While he was alive, he could not consider her as his own, and even after his death, he could never come to know whether he had been forgiven or not.

Very touching. 😭

Thanks a lot for this gem of a story.

Awwww...simply loved this ff 👏 👏 ...very emotional. Jai found out he had a daughter but could never tell her he was her father. 😭 That letter part was very touching. Bought tears in my eyes. 😭

Beautiful written sabs...just beuatiful 👏

Tazoo! 😊