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Oh...Dhivii...dont cry dear...sorry again for being late lateef ... I have UNRES my post 😃
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PART XXVI

"The naga princess ??" I exclaimed.They saw me strange.

"yes" she smiled.

"Matha!! How do you know us?" he intrigued.

"Son!! Everyone in this aryavarth knows your father and his wives."said The naga princess with a glint of pride on her eyes.

Oh!! Where my life stream is floating me to?? Why should I meet Arjun's son here??

The ambiance was dumped in a silence as we all forgot all the words.Still its raining outside! Uloopi is engaged in preparing dinner along with her maids.Irvan is very cautious about the position of my strained leg and the medicines in time.He is so lovable and kind.The love of this forbidden child for his father is really surprising!

"So"...

He raised his head!!

"soo...!! haven't you seen your father at least once in your life?"I asked

He paused for a second and said "yes"

"please don't mistake me!! Then how could you love him??"

His face became dark but it was just for few seconds just like clouds hiding the sun.soon his face became bright with a grin..I wonder did he born with this grin?

"yes!! I never saw him..but that cannot be a reason for hating him.My mother is a naga princess.and he obliged to my mother's wish.We cannot expect more from a prince of a vast dynasty.He has his duties as a son I have to respect his duties."

"but son!! He could have met you in these years if he really wished"

His grin is ceased!! Oh!! Uruvi you rude devil!!! When you are going to change your arrogance?? But he didn't lose his patience.

"you are right matha!! I always craved for my father and his love in my life.but till now i didn't get any.but as a son what I gave him to expect something from him?? First I would like to give something to him to claim his love and care"He smiled innocently with sparkling green eyes.What a brave and clever answer??how brilliantly and clearly he expressed his pure love!!!

" so far I didn't get any opportunity to show my love to him but now I got a golden opportunity to prove my love to him.I just want to say him pitashree!! Your son is here to do anything for you"

His eyes were filled.He turns aside to hide his tears!! My eyes also became moist.He continued

" i would just hug him and ask what is his wish?? What he wants me to do??whom I have to slay?My father being a great archer doesn't need anyone's help but I would say I am his slave and slay whoever may be for him!! I would slay the demon Duryodhan and his brutal brothers..the old elephant bheeshma..the mighty Guru drona..and also the mad ferocious tiger Angaraj!!"

I sat erect!! A sharp knife made of icicle ran inside my spine.

"Angaraj"??I pronounced slowly.

"yes!! The only powerful arch enemy of my father.Either I would slay angaraj for my father or I may die in the duel!! But cannot sit simply here anymore hands tied"

My heart is palpitating!! Oh!! Yes he is arjun's son..Arjun and pandavas has so many wives and sons!! Everyone would be longing to slay his father's enemies..so every nook nad corner of aryavarth is getting ready for the war.no doubt the war is going to be a great disaster!! Kauravas may have army strength but pandavas are fighting fo their existence and revenge!! So they would be more powerful..moreover vasudev is with them.My body is shuddering ..He covered me with a thick blanket .

"what happened matha?"

"nothing son!! I was thinking about the war"

"shall we think after having our supper! Uloopi approached us by carrying a plate full of foods.The maids were also carrying some plates.I really felt embarrassed to see so many dishes served as dinner.

"will you have such a grand dinner everyday?"

"oh!! Your's is very simple!! Today i asked to prepare some toothsome and grand dinner for you.Ma!! where is the milk sweets I asked for" He searched among the plates.

"here it is son " she stretched a plate where i found the cones of milk sweets which is my son's favorite too

"why are you straining much for a stranger " I felt shy to have such foods!!

" you are not a complete stranger for me matha!! I have seen you many times in the nearby temple in these three four days..and let me also have some delicious foods by saying your name" he winked.He tasted a bit ..closed his eyes and enjoyed the sweet melted in his taste buds.

" I would be blessed if my mother make use of her special hands to prepare foods daily" he blinked innocently at his mother.she rapped him in his head by her knuckles and laughed.I wonder is this the place which was rigid just before some minutes!!

"I just love this sweet but i get rarely"

"why son?"

"This is one among some common facts in a fatherless house" he said suddenly in a husky voice.Uloopi downed her head.

The shadows of lantern fell on the walls of the caves as a big monsters.Irvan is standing outside the cave with his sword fixed on the ground.He left just now after speaking a lot about his father .He asked me to sleep peacefully!! I chuckled.The word has been ruled out from my mind for more than thirteen years.what would panchali be doing now?? Could she sleep peacefully??How horrible it would be for a queen to survive in woods and a maid in some strange kingdom!! No wonder that panchali and pandavas need war!! Vasudev as a divine soul he chose a right way to stop the disaster..no wonder pandavas obey him..and no wonder in yuvraj's behavior who lost his conscience completely and prefers war with the guts of owning angaraj for him. One thing is very clear from Irvan's words..the enmity and revenge of pandavas on kauravas has grown huge and enormous in these years.

The sky is clear now when the sun spread its yellowish rays.I stood up slowly.

matha!" I turned back.He is standing at the threshold wearing clean fresh clothes and ornaments.

why are you straining much??why can't you take some more rest?'

"son!! My leg is quite alright now.Thank you for your care and attention.Now!!! It's time for me to leave!! Everyone would be searching me in my house"

"Alright ! I would take you to your place"

"no son I can walk"

" sure?"

sure" I smiled.

He bent down and touched my feet.

"Bless me matha!! Bless me that I should fulfill each and every wish of my father"

I got stuck!! My hands are shaking!! How can I give him such a bless??

"putr!! I cannot give you such a blessing"

He raised his head and furrowed his brows.

"This blessing would be a curse for me..Do you know who am I?"

He shook his head in all directions confusingly.

"I thought you are a pilgrim"

"yes I am but if you know my real identity you won't prostrate me"

what??"

"I am uruvi!! Angarani Uruvi"I stood silent leaving the rest to him.

He stepped back at once

"what"

It was for a second.Then I see the normal grin on his face!!He joined his palms.

"matha!! It is a real shock for me.I never imagined that I could provide shelter and care for angarani the wife of my father's foremost enemy.But I am cultured enough to respect you!"

"yes" interrupted uloopi.

"men may have rivalries..but I don't have any enmity on you.After all you are also in my condition."

" I hope that we treated you in a best way!! If you found any inconvenience in it then please forgive me.I spoke my wishes and dreams..if I hurt you by my words I apologize for it.please forgive me and bless me whatever you feel apt for me"

My heart melted for him.

"Let your wish of fulfilling your father's dream may come true soon son"

I placed my palm on his head.He stared at my moist eyes and exchanged a sign of approval by a small grin.suddenly all my escorts entered the cave and finally they spotted me.

Can anyone in this world believe that I am walking again to the caves with a basket full of milk sweets for him? I myself cannot believe that i am hurrying to meet arjun's son again in the same evening.!!What is driving me?? What makes me to love him??why I prepared foods for him? Unfathomable love and sympathy is breaking my heart and a feable voice says he is the man who is going to give answer for your question.I stopped .What is this I see completely contradictory of this place!! A white chariot..the most elegant and highly designed one standing in front of the cave.Who is this???The next moment I saw three of them coming out of the cave!!! I cannot believe my eyes!one is Irvan.the other two whom i see is true or a dream??Is he vasudev?? And the person standing left to him dressed in white is Arjun?? Yes!! No doubt he is arjun. my heart is filled with happiness!! At last the child's dream has come true.Finally he met his beloved father.That day has dawned to him.now,I am the most contradictory person standing in this place.I hide myself behind a huge tree.

Vasudev clasped his shoulders.Irvan nodded his head.Then father and son embraced each other.Irvan stood with joined palms and soon the chariot left the place.I slowly approached him now.He got jerked first.He never expected me again there..but regained soon

"matha!! Your blessings are very effective"

He grinned

"yes!! I saw your father and Vasudev!!i am happy for you son!God bless you.so your dream has come true..when you are travelling to join the army?"

He stood silently with his arms crossed his chest.He blinked his tears and said me in a firm voice

"matha!! I am not going to join any troupe!!I am going to sacrifice my life for this war.My father wants me as a human sacrifice to our Goddess which is a common ritual before starting a great war."

I am completely speechless!! What a human sacrifice!!!

" son!! What do you say?? You are going to die???" the words got evaporated..

"everybody is going to die one day matha and so many are going to die in this war"

He said.

" but there is a lot of difference between dying as a warrior in a war and committing suicide!!"

"This is a ritual performed for a grand victory matha"

" All the rituals may go to hell!! But you wished to fight for your father..You wished to be with him."

He sighed deeply."yes matha!! I wished to fulfill my father's wishes and this war is essential for him.I would definitely sacrifice my life for him.i feel proud that I can do this for him.I am happy that he remembered me at least for human sacrifice and by this he accepted me as his own blood" he smirked.

"but son..you cannot die..how could you..think of your mother"He looked inside where uloopi was sitting motionless staring at the roof.

"I accepted my father's decision whole heartedly!!nothing could change me"

I caressed his arms and shoulders..I cannot control my tears..this Angarani's tears for him would be strange for him.

what is that in the basket matha.."

He bought it from me and saw the sweets..suddenly his eyes were filled

"Thank you matha for providing me the last sweetness in my bitter life"

Then he joined his hands

"matha!! Tomorrow morning I am leaving!! I would never return.Bless me that my soul rest in peace." He smiled.A divine spark reflected in his deep green eyes

What kind of war is this!! I don't understand this war concept.Why should this young man die for a humiliation done by some one to some one.why should this innocent boy sacrifice his life for a fight between the cousins for some kingdom ruled by some one.some wants kingdom..some wants revenge what is that connected to this young man who was abandoned my his father and lived the whole life in the hope and belief of meeting his father and with a desire to live with him.??how cruel?? And why did he accepted the death?? Can anyone accept the death willingly..knowingly???

Thousands and thousands of people are gathered in front of the huge elegant gates of the fort.The huge gates are closed.The soldiers are standing evenly on the top of the fort walls carrying their weapons.all the instruments such as conches ..drums..dumaru are ready to be played.Straight in front of the gates..an young man in standing beside a bamboo stick fixed in the ground.who is he?? Irvan!! Why he is standing here with his sharp sword!!some of his hairs were took upside straight from the middle of the head and tied to the one end of the bamboo stick.The stick is completely bent now.what!! what is he going to do..son untie your hair from the stick..if the stick is stretched straight then it will pluck your hair..hurry up..come on!! He didn't hear me because conches are blowing now..suddenly the crowd started shouting and instruments were played.The drums were played aggressively.It started squeezing all the nerves of our body.

The palace gates were opened wide and some chariots and horses rushes outside.Irvan eyes were searching for a person and he found him.He paid obeisance.Then the next moment he removed his sword.The crowd started screaming more!! The drums and conches are tearing the ear drums.A divine smile is spreading wide in his face.No!! no putr!! Don't do this!! No!! My voice is inaudible in this crowd.He placed his sword in his neck..and the next second the bent bamboo stick went upwards and stood straight with the oscillating head of Irvan.The hot and fresh blood from him headless body sprinkled all over the crowd and the men in the horses.All the sounds were stopped except a constant buzz in my ears..What happened!! Where is Irvan!! Did he lost his hair?? What is hanging on the top of the bamboo stick!!! I..rvaaann..what the hell of pain in my guts!! Now the crowd shouts hara hara mahadev"

Apart from the noise i can clearly here one voice separately followed my the music of flute.

" In this war some has to die some has to be protected..some has to sacrifice their lives.some one is killed because they are need to be killed.some deaths are mandatory.those deaths are glorified.if we need light then wooden sticks has to be burnt"

I can see the golden crown with peacock feather in it.slowly I get my answer.

Now,The crown is turns as the golden crown of angaraj!! He smiles at me.I am suffocating!!

"devi!! "he joins his palms.."I am leaving!and never return ..pray for my peaceful death" no aaryaaa! what you are saying..He turned to his friend yuvraj.He removes his crown and casually removed his head too!!!

NOOO!!!!! Why I can't scream!! The head spoke!! "take it mitr!! This is my contribution for your victory"

All the nerves in my body got cut one by one.."n..noo..nooo"

I screamed..I am drenched in sweat.a dream!! Was it a dream???? Slowly i regained ..This my chamber ..I am in my bed ..yes it must be a dream.but what i see as Irvan's death may come true and now my husband's position is the same as Irvan.I got my answer.some wooden sticks has to be burnt..only those sticks can provide light by burning itself!!

My my chamber door is opened and charu mitra came running with a message

"maharani we received this letter just now from messengers..They searched for us in many places and finally brought this"

I saw it it was from vrushali jiji.I acted fast!! The letter was very precise but the substance is very heavy..the real thunder of my life which made all other thunders as just a passing clouds..!!! What !! what I read!!!! Is he the son of Bagwan Surya Dev and and who...who...matha kunthiii...!! the letter slipped away from my hand.I stood as a statue!! So many thoughts are thrashing my heart but standing still externally.I turned my head and saw Bagwan surya dev!!! He is slowly hiding behind the mountain..

"don't ever show your face again to me" I murmured.The next moment I decided what to do.

"charu!! We are travelling to hastinapur now!! Make all the arrangements soon"

She was shocked and standing motionless.

"can't you hear me"

maharani! Is that true Are you going to your husband" she grinned.

" yes!! He needs me now!! I want to see him at once!!!"

And there is an another important person whom I wish to meet immediately".

Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi


Oh...Dhivii...dont cry dear...sorry again for being late lateef ... I have UNRES my post 😃

hemu dear😃 it's ok dear!! I saw ur comments ..thank u so much!!! I brought Irvan in this stroy for a purpose!!! I don't know how it works..read my latest part and say ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am waiting eagerly for next update when Uruvi will meet her hubby I know I m gonna cry then😭
Plz upt soon nd yeah this one too ws very well written😊
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Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

I am waiting eagerly for next update when Uruvi will meet her hubby I know I m gonna cry then😭
Plz upt soon nd yeah this one too ws very well written😊

thank u sansi!!! 😃 yes that day is very near
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Hi di! Sorry for nt being here in the previous chapter..bt read them both even twice...they are both excellent updt..very well written as ever... So so so beautiful updts...very eagerly waiting for the next part...waiting for their meeting eagerly. Once again sorry obviously for being late.

no u r not late actually!! u r very regular to comment me here..so don't ask sorry and all..and thank u so much..i ll update it soon
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Oh Dhivii ... so many different emotions came over me while reading this single update. It was simply brilliant.👏 ⭐️

Uruvi's, Iravan's & Uloopi's revealation of their identities, the bonding betwn Iravan & Uruvi, the maternal affection Uruvi felt for this long forgotten son of arjun, how the simple gesture of bringing in milk sweets filled in joy for both of them. These moments were so sweet and touching 😳 and u have penned very😳 nicely Iravan's longingness for his father, to join him, to make his father proud.

And then I got the shock 😲 I almost choked while reading the part...Arjun asked Iravan to sacrifice himself...human sacrifice... How can a father asked such a dreadful task from his own son, the son who longed for him for his entire life 😭 and Uloopi how must she have felt, completely shattered 😭

And the terrible sight of Iravan swishing his sword to behead himself, the sacrifice his father wished for him 😭 ... god it gave me chills to imagine such a sight 😭😭... and later when Uruvi dreamt a similar sight for Karna... god Uruvi must have been panic stricken.
I loved these lines... and how these are realted to the dream

" In this war some has to die some has to be protected..some has to sacrifice their lives.some one is killed because they are need to be killed.some deaths are mandatory.those deaths are glorified.if we need light then wooden sticks has to be burnt"

And later the message by Vrushali... revealing Karna's lineage...Now Uruvi will meet her aarya after so many years and now with the knowledge of who he really is... will me get a scene of Uruvi giving scathing remarks to Kunti in the next update??

From my POV I always found Uloopi & Iravan characters an interesting study for human psychology...there is lots to ponder over these two characters 😊
I would have said more on this topic but I have already written long wala comment... so I won't bore u much 😆

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@ hemu!! always I love ur long wala comments..😃 regarding Irvan..yes it is a folk lore believed in southern sides!! the Story goes like this..first Duryodhan wanted a person as human sacrifice..he approached Irvan..but krishna some how cheated dury!! ans approached Irvan by saying he shud sacrifice his life for his own father!! while reading this I felt very bad..there was no one cared to brought up him..but a fight to kill him..then he accepted krishna's wish but he demanded two conditions..
1.he has to get married before he die..so krishna himself came as mohini and married him...since krishna took a female avatat ro marry a man..Irvan is the God of all eunuch..and they are addressed as aravanis!!
2.he asked to watch the war ..so he was granted that his soul can watch everything in the war including viswaroop darshan and geethaupadesh

I find a strange similarity btw this Irvan who voluntarily sacrificed his life with karna who did the same..that is the reason I bought this character here..thank u so much for ur sweetest comments dear

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