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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
RESS
unress

oyye hoyye part was super awsume...

thank god armaan ko kuch ni huaa...
aur yeh dekho...
car me se kon nikla...a
arre apne Rahul aur atul...aur kaun...


tu bhi naaa.

tujhe ni pata kon nikla...

hhahahaahahahaha πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


bu  chal ab gupta house chalte hain...
sab tension me honge naaa...
ke Armaaan kahan gaya...

aur yeh lo...
yahan toh sab sach me tension me hai...
ehheheheh 


chal ab sab mil liye...aur sab function bhi shuru ho gaye...

arre yeh kyaaa...
Riddhima ki mehendi kharaab ho gayi...
voh bhi sirf vahin ki...
hjahan sid lka naam likha hua tha...

hehehehhee...good,...very goodd...

i luv it,... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜› 

achha chal ab next jaldi upsdate kariyo...

aur haan AR ka childhood gift also i loved very muchhh
iske liye
tuh=jhe...
kiiisssiii :*
<3

luv u muaahhh :*

Edited by megha_kajen - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Kash riddhima ko armaan ka love jaldi pata chalna chayiye😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Finallyyy
U updated
Yohooo
N i'm commenting too
Well acha hua is bar fb me hi sahi but bola to
Warna is bar bhi na deti comment :p
Just kidding...

chal back to comment...
Actually not back start with the comment

Mujhe to laga tha abhi armaan pohch gaye hospital but
Teri karam se wo nhi hua
Dhannya ho balike
Then armaan ki is halat sirf pyar k liye hi hua na
Yeh sochte sochte mujhe ek gana yaad agaya

Pyar hai ya saza
Ay mere dil bata
Tutta kyun nhi dard ka silsila
Is pyar me ho kaise kaise imntehaan
Yeh pyar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
Dilbar pe ho na koi asar


Then armaan asked na dusra kaha hai to yaad aya

Janam dekhlo mit gayi duriyaan
MAIN YAHAAN HOON YAHAAN HOON YAHAAN HOON YAHAAN


Then sab se sab mil liya
Aur riddhima ki mehendi sunke yaad aya

Mehendi haan haan mehendi
Tutke dali se hatoon bikhar jati hai mehendi


But then sid k naam hat gaya
Hmmm
I've some guesses let's see kya hoti hai

Then last wo bd gift wala part i loved that
over all loved it whole
lv u :*
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
hey awesome part ayu
loved it
thank god armaan is fine usko kuch nahi hua
loved the leaf nd stone story
its beautiful
so destiny is giving indication to everyone first sid name is remove from her nd all that masiha n all
superb well written
now eagery waiting for more
continue soom
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
hey aayyuu...

updates were super rocking..
part 3

sabse pehle sory for being late...
bt u know na my examz..

AR ki convo babae se ini jda emotional..
tu mereko rulake chodegi sachi...😭😭

agyya kamina sid... AR ke pyaar ka dushman..
ridhma is tensed coz of armaan..

ye sid kya bolne aya ridhima se...  **suspence...**

ridhima indirectly apne ap ko hi pagal bol rahi hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 
finaly ridhima ko armaan ke changed behaviour ka pta chala...

armaan kitna zda upset hai.. he is imagining all that stuff ridhima n sid together...😭

AR ka chidhood part was mst.. chocolate sharing...πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ

ye end main kya tha..??? accident hope armaan thik ho...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
now part 4

such a relief armaan ka accident hai hua...😊😊

kya entry hue rahul ki.. armaan ko dnte hue... πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
atul bhi agya...πŸ˜‰

armman kisi se bhi apne feelings share nahi kr raha...

atul n rahul ka melo drama.. was fun..kaise bacho jaise bol rahe the... πŸ˜†πŸ˜† (humari koi value hi nahi hai...)

ye fights na dmg ki main sabse jda miss krti hn...
hahaha.. bechare modi ko bhul aye...πŸ˜‰

are ye kya hua.. ridhima ki pure mendhi sahi.. sid gul hogya... thatss soo gudd...πŸ‘πŸ‘

haye mother daughter's senti talk.. this is the part jo mujhe real life main bhi nahi psnd..

Riddhima - par maa ek ladki hi kyun aapna ghar chode... ladke kyun hain chodte...---------- ye ques hamesha mere mind main bhi rehta.. y always girlsss

awww leaf wala gift is soo sweet...😳

update next soonn

love uuuπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome update :) why doesn't anyone understand that the girl Armaan loves is Riddhima
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58




LOVE GETS ITS DESTINY - AR SS -
Part 5



In evening
Riddhima was sitting on a stole in front of the big long mirror And few beauticians helping Riddhima
putting up the make up And doing hairs making her wear jewels... Riddhima was all the time blushing
thinking her life with Sid...
Soon Riddhima was all ready just putting the dhupatta over head was left when girls arrived all ready for
the D-Day...
As soon as they came near Riddhima.. Riddhima's phone buzz...
before Riddhima can pick up her cell phone And see who the caller is... Nikki picked up Riddhima's cell
And saw Sid calling...
Nikki - oh hooo dekho toh.. kitni bechani hain JIJUUU ko...
Riddhima - Nikki de na...
Muskaan - Nikki bechani toh isse bhi ho rahi hain ...
Riddhima - guys please na...
Anjali - bilkul nahi Nikki tu utha...
And before Riddhima can resort Nikki picked up the by Info"> call and put on the loud speaker... And Anjali put
her hAnd on Riddhima's mouth t prevent Riddhima from speaking anything...
Nikki - hello jijuu...
Sid - hello... koun...
Nikki - arye jiju aapki saali bol rahi hun ...
Sid - oh.. Nikki vo please Riddhima ko phone dena...
Muskaan - bilkul nahi jiju.. aAbhi toh aap Riddhima se koi baat nahi kar sakte...
Sid - please girls mera baat karna jaruri hain...
Anjali - we are sorry jiju par jo bhi baat karni hain aab vo shaadi ke baad...
Nikki - hain aur waise bhi phir toh Riddhima aapke saath hi rahegi hamesha phir karna jo baat karni
hain...
Muskaan - hain aAbhi Riddhima sirf hamari hain toh hum usse aapse baat nahi karne denga jiju...
Sid - girls bus ek baar... vo mujhe...
girls cut him in between...
girls - WE ARE SORRY JIJU... saying this together all the 3 girls giggle And Nikki cut the call without giving
Sid another chance to speak...
Riddhima - kya guys... ho sakta hain kuch baat karni ho usse important karne deta na... pata nahi koi
problem nahi ho usse...
Nikki - awww baadi chinta ho rahi hain Riddhima...
Muskaan - awww.. hogi kyun nahi.. aakhir unki(Sid) baat hain...
Riddhima - guys tum logo se toh baat karna hi bekar hain...
Anjali - hain hain aab hamari baatein bekar hi lagegi tujhe Riddhima... aab hum hain hi koun...
Riddhima - di aisa kuch nahi hain.. .
Nikki - hain dekha humne aAbhi...
Muskaan - hain baat nahi karne di toh humse baat karna bekar ho gaya...
Nikki - hain ye hi dosti thi teri Riddhima...
Anjali - ye hi tha pyaar...
Riddhima - guys stop ur melodrama...
And girls giggle And hugged Riddhima And Riddhima too responded their hug with all smile...
Anjali - i gonna miss you my little sis...
Riddhima - mein bhi aapko bahut miss karungi di...
Nikki/Muskaan - we gonna miss u too...
Riddhima - me too guys...

After an hour later it was time for the baarat to come...
Girls were sitting in the room with Riddhima. When Padma called them. Anjali And Nikki moved down
stairs leaving Riddhima And Muskaan to talk. Padma saw them coming.
Padma - anjali jaa kar jara thali le aao pooja ki... baarat aati hi hogi...
Anjali - ji maa aAbhi laati hun...
Anjali turn around to go And bring the pooja thali...
Anjali - chale Nikki...
And both of the girls moved towards pooja ghar to bring the thali from there. Talking the thali with them
Anjali And Nikki when back on the door way And saw Padma And Shashank stAnding there with boys...
All keep waiting for the baarat to come...
Initially every one was waiting eagerly...
But as the time passes they all started to get worried..
Padma - Shashank ...
Shashank - hmm...
Padma - Shashank jara phone karke dekho na aab tak toh aa jana chaiye tha...
Shashank nodded his head And dialled their number but no one picked it... Shashank tried number of
time but no result...
on other Side
Riddhima - Muski dekh na kya ho raha hai niche...
Muskaan - kyun baadi jaldi ho rahi hain tujhe..
Riddhima - Muskaan please dekh na...
Muskaan - aacha baba jaati hun rukh...
Muskaan herself was by now got worried as its 3 hours passed since baarat arrival time...
Muskaan went down And saw all sitting here And there waiting for baarat And boys And Shashank
where taking care of guests And there dinner but there is no sign of it anywhere or anywhere near...
Muskaan went up to Anjali And Nikki..
Muskaan - guyies kya hua tum log aise kyun bethe ho...
Anjali - Muskaan aAbhi tak barat nahi aai...
When they were talking
someone approached Padma
person - bhAbhi ji... vo hum chalte hain.. beti ghar mein aakeli hain...
Padma - arye bhAbhi thodi der rukhiye na baarat aati hi hogi...
when other person came...
person2 - bhAbhi ji humein jaana hoga... bahut late ho gaya hain... aur maa ji ka bhi khayal rakha hian...
Padma - par bus thodi der rukhiya na... Aap log itne dinner kar lijiye tab tak vo log aa jaenga...
And every one started to leave after have dinner..


suddenly there comes a boy..

boy - excuse me.. Mr.Shashank Gupta...
Shashank - ji mein hun...
boy - ji vo ye aapke liya diya tha kisi ne..
Shashank- kisne diya hain...
boy - pata nahi .. ye de kar chala gaya ki aapko de dun..
Shashank - dhanyawad...
Boy went away after giving that letter to Shashank And a box too... everyone gather around Shashank...
Shashank read the letter And it feel from his hAnd. Seeing letter falling from Shashank everyone have
somewhere guess the situation. Armaan picked up the letter that have fallen from Shashank hAnd And
read the letter...
Padma - kya hain letter mein Armaan... aur kiska letter hain
Armaan - maa vo Sid ka letter...
Anjali - Sid ka... kya likha hain ...
Armaan - likha hain ki vo ye shaadi nahi karna chahata... usne batane ki kai baar koshish ki pehle par
baata nahi paaya.. aur sorry likha hain letter mein... aur ye bhi ki vo ye sheher chod kar ja chuka hoga jab
tak humein letter milega...
Padma And Shashank sat there with thump. Like a lifeless body falls on down they fall on the couch kept
near by. Anjali moved towards Padma to hold onto them. Armaan too moved towards them to support
them..
Armaan himself have tears in his eyes.
but Armaan hAndled Padma And Shashank very calmly...
Armaan - Muskaan - please jara paani le aa...
Muskaan nodded And brought water for Shashank And Padma...
Armaan made them have little water.
Nikki - Riddhima ko kaise...
Armaan looked towards Nikki And then looked towards Padma.
Armaan - maa...
Padma - mein nahi jaa paungi Armaan... mein nahi dekh paungi aapni bachi ko tutte hua... mein nahi jaa
paungi...
Anjali - buri tarah tut jayegi Riddhima...
Shashank - uss kaayar ke liya kyun tutegi meri baachi... acha hua shaadi se pehle hi bhag gaya... nahi toh
meri bachi pata nahi kya sehti us kayar ke sath.. itni bhi himat nahi hui ki khud aa kar mana kare.. aur
samna kare...
Rahul - mein aur Atul uske ghar...
Armaan - nahi Rahul vo aAbhi tak ja chuka hoga.. aur jaa kar bhi kya hoga...
Muskaan - hain aur waise bhi aab uss kaayar se baat karne ka koi fayeda nahi hain...
Anjali - par Riddhima ko ...
Shashank - mein baat karunga...
Shashank got up from his seat And moved towards Riddhima's room. Anjali moved towards Padma
holding onto Padma And Nikki sat there supporting both of them.
Muskaan stood there with boys only there is nothing to say..
Armaan saw Padma And Anjali supporting each other And he knew others too are there for them.
Sensing the need of time Armaan slipped from there And moved towards Riddhima's room...


Riddhima's room.

Shashank - ri.. Riddhima...
Riddhima - papa...
Riddhima looked at Shashank
Shashank - beta..
Riddhima saw Shashank with teary eyes. Riddhima smiled a little thinking Shashank must be teary
because of her going away.
Riddhima - aww papa.
Riddhima moved And hugged Shashank.
Riddhima - papa aap please roiye mat.. mein kahin nahi jaungi papa. Hamesha yahin rahungi aapke pass.
mein Sid ko yahin rahene ko bolungi
Shashank - vo toh tab bologi na Riddhima jab vo yahan aayega.
Riddhima - matlab...
Riddhima looked at Shashank face after getting away form him.
Riddhima - mein kuch samjhi nahi papa.
Shashank - Riddhima Sid nahi aaya.
Riddhima - toh Abhi thodi der mein aa jayega votab bolungi.
Shashank - vo nahi aayega.
Riddhima - arye aayega kaise nahi aaj uski bhi shaadi hain.
Shashank - nahi aayega vo kaayar chala gaya vo ye shaadi thod kar... darpok ki tarah ek letter bhijwa
diya hain usne bus ki shaadi nahi kar sakta...
Riddhima - papa.. ye kaisa mazak hain...
Shashank - mein mazak kyun karunga Riddhima..
Riddhima - toh aur kya hain papa.. Sid mujhse pyaar karta hain..
Shashank - Riddhima vo tumse pyaar karta toh aa jata aab tak.
Riddhima - vo aayega papa.. aur shaadi bhi hum dono ne mil kar plan ki thi na..
Shashank - kari thi Riddhima par aab nahi aayega vo.. bhag gaya vo..
Riddhima - papa kaisa mazak hain ye...


Armaan enter the room
And heard last words of Riddhima..
Armaan - Riddhima..
Riddhima - Armaan.. *Riddhima moved towards him.
Riddhima - Armaan dekho na kaisa mazak kar rahe hain papa.. bolo papa ko ki aab majak chod dein..
Armaan hold onto Riddhima's shoulder - Riddhima uncle mazak nahi kar rahe... Sid nahi aaya.. chala
gaya tumhe chod kar...
Riddhima - nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.
Armaan - aisa hua hain Riddhima...
Riddhima - mein nahi maanti...
Armaan - Sid ki writing janti ho na tum...
Riddhima nodded her head in yes And seeing her nod Armaan moved out of the room And went to bring
that letter by Sid And came back into the room And saw Riddhima haven't moved a step. Armaan put Sid
letter in front of her
Armaan - ye dekho.. ye bheja hain Sid ne..


Letter
Riddhima. mein ne bahut koshish ki tumse baat karne ki par kAbhi kar nahi paya.. kAbhi tum busy thi kAbhi mein.. Riddhima mein ye shaadi nahi kar sakta.. mein tumse pyaar nahi karta mein ne kuch aur
chaha tha hamesha par vo kAbhi kar nahi paya... mein ne aapne dosto se shart lagai thi tumhe hasil karne ki... mein ne kAbhi tumse pyaar nahi kiya.. mein ja raha hun.. meri bet puri hui mein jaa raha hu
aapni family ke pass. aapni tammy ke pass alvida.. aur mujhe dhundne ki koshish maat karna mein jaa chuka honga bahut dur jab tak tumhe ye letter milega..
alvida

Letter slipped from Riddhima's hAnd And Riddhima sat on the bed with shock all over her face.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiyyaaa Aaayooo
Yeyyy, i m firsttt... 
Shall I say againnn or not hehehe...
Chalo leave that...
Lets this comment make a little short and fast...
uh oh... U wouldn't like it short na hehehe...
Chalo dekhte hai fast and short hoti hai ya long ;)
Depends on my mood na :D

So here goes my comment... 
At the end it was sad but I m happyyy yeyyy...
Siddhant is out from Riddhima life...
Ab jaldi jaldi AR ki shaadi karwa de hahahaha... 

Chalo Shuru se hi batati hoon mujhe kaisa laga...
Hmm Starting mein Ridz is getting ready for the big dayyy...
Wah bhai wah sabke attention toh Riddhima koh mil rahi hai...
Why not, after all its a big day for her and her last to be pamper by her parents before the marriage...

Girls teasing Riddhima was mast...
Oh ho, Sid aaya but kissi ne usko Riddhima se milne nehi diya...
Ab mujhe samajh mein aaya, woh aise baar baar kyun aa raha ta Riddhima se milne...
Pehle pata hota toh main khud Sid koh Ridz se milne dete hahahaha... 
Then after kicking out Siddhant, girls moment was cute...

Ahaan, finally all got ready and they must be looking gorgeous... 
Sablog tayyar hokar inthizaar kar raha ta but... 
Hmmm ab Siddhant toh aane wala nehi hai...
Mujhe toh yeh pata chal gaya ab in logo koh koan bataenge I wonder...
Padma asking Shashank to call Siddhant parents feeling something not good...
Aur Riddhima bhi bechain ho rahi hai... Why not usko bhi toh nehi pata Siddhant bhag gaya...
Muski little teasing was mast hehehe... But seeing Riddhima getting serious, she left to check what was really happening...

Uffo, yeh log duffers hai kya...
Itni der hogayi aur nehi aaya toh iska yehi matlab haina woh nehi aane wala...
Ab log toh der tak rukhenge nehi, see sab nikalne laga...
Poor Padma and Shashank, kitni beizzat hogi unlogo ke...

Ahaan, lagta hai Siddhant ne letter bhej diya...
Dar pok kahin ka... Hahahaha... 
Feel bad for Gupta's... 
But happy that now their is chance for AR to be together wohooo hahaha... 
It was really emotional moment when Armaan tell Padma and Anjali what Sid has written in the letter...
Everyone got shocked and sad to know that wedding would not take place...
Seeing Shashank concern not understanding how they would tell Riddhima about this knowing she would break, it was nice the way u describe whole scene Aayoo...
I feel so real while reading the moment where Shashank was feeling helpless thinking how Riddhima would react...
But still Shashank got the courage to tell Riddhima and it was the best thing for the moment him to talk with Riddhima...

Shashank and Riddhima moment was cute, Riddhima thinking Shashank was sad because she would leave after wedding...
Then when Shashank said woh aayenge toh bataenge and Riddhima confusion... 
ahahaha even Shashank call him darpok...
Of course darpok toh hai woh, bohot bada walaaa...
Riddhima koh laga Shashank mazak kar raha ta...Ufff aise koi apne beti ke shaadi ki din mazak karte hai kya...
Mazak toh us kamine ne kiya hai... Riddhima aur Gupta's ke mazak bana ke...

Ahaan, Hero ne entry maardi...
Armaan koh dekhte hai Ridz bacchon ki tarah complain karne lagi...
Lekin woh bhi same baat bol raha ta jo Shashank ne bola...
Riddhima couldn't believe... 
Armaan is so smart... Usne Riddhima se poocha if she knows Siddhant handwriting or not...
and got the letter that Siddhant send... 

Kamina, duffer, moron, idiot and Kuttaaa...
Ek bet ke liyeh us kamine ne Riddhima ke feelings ke saat khela...
howww cheap he could be...

Wonder now What will happen...
I had a feeling that Gupta's ke reputation bachane ke liyeh Armaan Riddhima se shaadi karenge...
Oopsss, bohot jaldi bol diya kya hahahaha...
Chalo phir agli part mein bol dungi baaki jo mujhe lagta hai okkk ;)
Muwaahhh

Awesome and emotional part Aayooo...
Lagta hai tu sabko rolana chaahti hai..
Issiliyeh aise emotional parts post kar rahe ho...
Pehle Armaan koh itna rolake emotional bana diya...
Ab Riddhima koh uff teri kya hogi Aayooo...
Hehehe Muwaahhh
Chalo Continue super soon...
Take care <3
Love u lots lots and lotsss... :*

Edited by RihooHaws - 9 years ago
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UNrESs

part was as usual top class loved it...
loved everything in it...

but I really felt bad for Riddhima..
voh saala kamina..kutta Siddhant shaadi k din chhodh ke chala gayaa ... 😑

aur jab shanky yeah batane usse uppar aaya
toh she mistook his
tears as he gonna miss her... loved that moment...

and also all the teasing of girls... wen sid called riddhima...

it was too awsume...

but last me yeah kyaa...
Riddhima ne jab letter padha toh he wrote that
usne usse sirf ek bet ke liye phasaya that...
bloody *** kahin kaaa...
lamina...kutta...saala...UKP...


hhhuuummmppp...


anyways update next soon...
can't wait to read more...


bye...
luv u :*
cyaaa ❀️



Edited by megha_kajen - 9 years ago