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Posted: 10 years ago

It's just awesome I loved it throughout sid krissane broke up amazing yaar 👏 plz do continue 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cooljav1234
It's just awesome I loved it throughout sid krissane broke up amazing yaar 👏 plz do continue 😊

tysm ^_^ will continue soon

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shakthi217

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Posted: 10 years ago

It was good considering that it's your first time. But you can't bring everything in one chapter sid and krissane break up and siyalis' cofession

If you have a lot going on within one chapter it makes less interesting to read and you only mentioned about the good part so I think you'd get more readers if you spice thing up a little bit.

Take this as a friendly advice.

I speak from 3 years of experience

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuchiikoo

will continue soon😛
tysm :*

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