|~ALL OF ME~| - A Two Shot!

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Anushka

@anudoll

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This was a really sweet piece of writing 😊
Loved it
Please continue soon

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eid-ka-chand

@eid-ka-chand

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Ahh.. Ihv missed ur write ups ^_^..
And I just loved this one...
U r one of the rare writers who always come up with unique and refreshing concept..
And that's what I love the most in ur stories...
And this one is no exception.. Loved it <3
Scars and wild love r the best examples...
. I know u r going through a writers block..
And m sorry.. But I won't stop asking u for .. Scars and wild love. :P
.. I m so in love those stories... <3
Update when u feel like... But plz do update... Them ..

Richa ..

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

You adorable little *insert suitable word here* THANK YOU! I LOVE MY (as of yet) HALF-PRESENT! Even I missed my birthday on IF, so this is my first ever gift here! >3>

I didn't play All of Me, but I was listening to You Are in Love (TAY *.*) and that goes perfectly here too. I love both the lyrics.

The whole crush-on-someone scenario is perfectly played out. The first thing she searches for after class is him. Hides behind her hair, stares across the cafeteria. Borderline stalker-ish, but hey, we've all been there 😆

What I love most about this is that it's true. You can actually see something like this playing out, and that makes it even better.

I didn't turn heads. People didn't notice me.
They noticed him.

Randhir Singh Shekhawat.

As he walked, people gave him way. My breath caught as he moved past me. He was dressed in his usual attire. Black jeans which hung from his hips. White t shirt which held onto the contours of his chest. Sigh.

I really did forget SHQ fictions. Because damn, they always make Randhir hot.

And I don't know what Vidushi is up to right now, but your portrayal of her is spot on 👍🏼

She also knew that she was in trouble. Big time.

Believe me, we all do. 😆

Now, since you say you haven't finished the next part, here is some inspiration: This is my birthday gift. Go. Write.

lol, jk. You could try a Randhir POV or alternate between both of theirs (something I've wanted to try for a while). And you could turn this into a Three Shot if need be, because they're both TS(es) anyway!

Again, Thanks! I love it. ❤️

Love,

Riddhi.

Edited by AzureLicht - 10 years ago

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Edited! I know it's a long one to reply to, so take your time 😆

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Na1na

@Na1na

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

@Ri

I love your reply! I'm glad you've liked your half-present.. xD

Yes! That song fits too.. And believe me.. I was going to use that as the quote here for obvious reasons.. But then it seemed kinda unfair.. When the song which actually helped me was this one . I love this song!

Hot Randhir is a given. always. ;)

The borderline stalkerish behavior? I know right! We've all been there and done that! And I could pen it down easily.. ;)

Vidushi.. She doesn't have a lot of space in this.. But I've liked the way she's come up in this too. Even if I say so myself :P

And call this telepathy or our "bond".. But the second part.. I've already written from Randhir's pov. :D at least half of it.

I mean, I'm trying to. I've become rusty.. After not writing for so long..

Let's just see how the second part comes. I might actually have to make it three-shot.. Dekhte hai..

And thankyou for all the kind words! Means a lot..

I'm so so glad u liked it :*