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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5

Note: guys thanks for your comments. one thing i want to say being a teluguite im giving some south indian touches to the story i hope you people don't mind me doing so.

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Aastha we can talk inside beta said niranjan causing her to break the hug. He wiped her tears and they both went inside. Anjali already started feeding ashwini with her favourite chicken pakodi/pakora. Ashwini was sitting in anjali's lap. Ashu you're not a nursery kid, you're tenth standard, get up now said aastha. Di why you always envy me? Why would i do that ashu? Cuz im getting more love from aunty said ashwini by kissing anjali's cheek. Ok now get up we need to go home. Di i too come along with you both said swetha. No swetha, not today you can go some other day said anjali. Why aunty? She is having fever aastha. Ashu get up. Wait aastha shlok will drop you. But where is he? Im here he said by getting inside along with sam.



As soon as they entered, sam observed ashu who is constantly munching the pakoras. Ae moti kitna kayegi tu. Ashwini stopped munching and glared him for good two minutes. Oye stop staring, just look at your di how slim she is and you, you are becoming drum. Thats it, finish the plate which she is holding is now on the floor after hitting his face with great velocity. She already filled anjali's ears about the incident that happened in the class and now she is behind him by pulling his hair. She broke two vases in the process and took another vase to hit him.



With in a few minutes they both made the house hurly-burly. Sam tired and hid behind anjali, ayi save me from this banshee he said. Ashwini was breathing profusely. Ashu what is this, stop behaving like virago said aastha loudly. Aastha wait anjali said and started scolding sam instead of ashu. Its a common thing she won't scold ashwini even if she was at mistake. Ayi what i did. Why are you scolding me. I know you won't love me, you only love ashwini said sam frustatingly with tears. Anjali felt bad when sam said that. He moved towards ashwini "I Hate U aswhini" he said and rushed upstairs towards his room. Reflected the same she said from behind.



Aastha felt bad for sam. She want to give a tight across her sis face, but she can't do that. Few minutes passed they all settled on sofa. Shlok drop us at home. Wait aastha whatz so hurry? No shlok its already late and... and you need to prepare for xmz right? Offo you won't change aastha. Never change yourself aastha, tum padiyi pe dhyaan doo. Shlok agnihotri kuch seeko aastha se said Nirajan. Oh really Mr. Baba let me remind you "Too much of anything is good for nothing". Aur waise bhi yeh itna padthi hai ki aap dekhlena ek din yeh paagal hojayeki. Mein pagal iss liye baunge kyun ki tum mere saath ho aastha riposte. Acha then why don't you leave me said shlok. I tried it but you're like a hutch dog. No matter how much we kick it, it always follows us aastha again riposte causing him to choke on his water. Now these two got into got into wrangle.



Shanth shanth niranjan voice brought them back to real world. Now will you drop us at home or not said aastha. K lets go said shlok. They got up to leave, wait aastha anjali said and went to kitchen. Few minutes later she came with a plate which is having a small bowl of liquid sandal wood and and kumkum, a small packet and a small plastic tiffin box . Aastha today i went to Ashta Lakshmi temple to make archana she said and applied sandalwood on her jaws and kumkum to both the sisters and gave the consecrated food and the plastic box to her. Aastha wants to ask something but hesitating. Do you want to ask something said anjali as if reading her mind.



Aunty you're a maharastrian right? Then why did you follow all these telugu customs. She smiled and said cuz manjula follows all these customs. But aunty my maa is a teluguite so used to do all these but you're...Aastha you're maa is my only friend so i'll follow all those customs which you're maa used to do and since you're unmarried im not giving you betel leaves, nuts and bangles (Thambulam in telugu) said anjali. Aunty you both are soo good said asstha indicating niranjan and anjali. Both sisters bended and touched their feet seeking their blessings. They both blessed them for longevity and happiness. Niranjan opened his wallet and gave 501 rupees to both the sis.



They both bid bye to everyone and left agnihotri manshion. Shlok dropped them in front of their gate. They both got out of the car and aastha closed the door without realising that her duppata got stucked in the door. Shlok got out of the car and tried to remove the dupatta. He stood behind her and she slightly bended forward. If anyone sees them in such a position they would definitely thinks that he was kissing on her neck from behind. There it is a click, it captured.



He finally removed her duppata and she said a simple thanks. Its k aastha don't mention he said and started to leave. Shlok won't to come inside she stopped him by holding his arm. Another click. No aastha its already late and your papa will return anytime from off he said and hugged ashwini and left.



They both went inside. Once they both got inside aastha locked the door and gave and earful to ashu for creating fuss at agnihotri house. Here she was screaming her lungs out and there she was busy unwrapping the boxes which anjali has given. She found an envelope in the plastic box. Di look at this she showed the envelope to aastha. What is this aastha said and took the envelope from her hand and opened it. Its has 5 thousand rupess notes in the envelope. She don't want to accept the money, I was already in debt of them she thought and dialled anjali's num.



She was making dough for chapati, her mobile started to beep. It was aastha. Hello aastha have you reached home she asked. Few minutes later she again spoked "aastha calm down, i know you don't want to accept it but think that it is gift from your aunty. And moreover i've heard that you're giving tuitions for school students and you don't even bothered to inform me. Why are you doing that. You can ask me if you really want money, no need of you giving tuitions and if your uncle gets to know about it he will feel bad she said but i won't say that to your uncle, ok tc and bye aastha she said and disconnected the call.



part 6 below

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PART 6


He slowly came and hugged her from behind. With whom you're talking ayi. Shlok tum? Haan mein. kyun, do you think it was baba he teased her. Chup kar badmash she scolded him. Who is on the phone ayi. Aastha she said. What happened, every thing is fine na he asked worriedly. Relax you first, every thing is fine she just called to ask something she said and ended the conversation. Waise ayi yeh aastha kitni achi haina ayi said shlok. Anjali thought this was the best time to talk with shlok about aastha and marriage so she slowly started the conversation.



Shlok tujhe aastha achi lagthi hain. Haan ayi bohut achi hain, kyun tum nahi janthi kya. Its not that but what do you like in aastha asked anjali. She is decent, studious, intelligent, docile, respects elders, ofcourse cute what not, i like every thing about her said shlok with a small smile across his lips. So you like aastha. Ofcourse ayi i like her, thats why she is my friend. My only "BEST FRIEND".



So how about you getting married to aastha said anjali. What? Have you lost it ayi? Are you non compos mentis(latin word which means insane)? Shlok you said that you like aastha. Ofcourse ayi i like her. Then marry her. Ayi what got into you? Why are you talking like this, he placed his both hands on her shoulders "look ayi aastha is my friend not my lover and she never will be. Even she feels the same for me, im just her friend but nothing else. Ayi its ok that you've speak this to me but don't even bring this topic in front of aastha. You know her she will stop visiting our house said he softly". Actually ayi where this idea got from kahi taklu ne toh... shlok chup... badmash tumre baba ko taklu bulayega said anjali by hitting him with a chapati roller.



Ayi stop hitting please... he pleaded, just then niranjan came into kitchenette by hearing loud voice of shlok. Anjali what happend why are hitting shlok. Baba i'll tell you actually ayi cleped you as taklu and when i catechized about that, ayi started hitting me baba said shlok by hiding behind his baba. Shlok stop lying said anjali and started hitting him with the same roller. Anjali relax, stop it said niranjan and shlok rushed out from kitchen.



So anjali you still clepe me as taklu. Niranjan he is lying. Why would i call you as taklu. Acha is it? Why don't you go back to our college days anjali he said making her recollect their college days.,



"35 yrs back, He stood in front of a huge building. It is one of the top university in delhi. It was his first day in the university and all the freshers were the scapegoats for ragging. Though the college management place the boards with "RAGGING IS PROHIBITED, IF ANY BRING TO OUR KNOWLEDGE, WILL TAKE SEVERE ACTION" that too with big bold letters but still no senior stops ragging their juniors (don't know what pleasure they would get).



She wore a tight jeans and long top and a scarf around her neck and stilettos. She like others ragging freshers along with seniors not to forget she is a junior too but cuz of her brother she got a chance to rag juniors being a junior. He was passing through the campus among a group of people by covering his face with books inorder to escape ragging. She was already busy in ragging a couple since 3 hrs, there she spotted him among the group.



Tse..tse... she whistled at him. He knew that he was next target of hers so tried to pretend that he didn't heard her whistle. Hey baldy she called out for him. He turned towards her and showed his hand towards him as if conforming whether she called him. Ha you no one is having bald head here expect you she said sarcastically. Come here she said. He like a meek cat went towards her and stood in front of her.



There he saw a couple standing hand in hand. She wore a simple chudidhar and he wore a simple formal pants and shirt. Anybody can say that they brought up in a good and decent family.



Do you know these people she asked when she observed him staring at the couple. He nodded his head in nae. Acha let me explain, these two are from hyd, engaged but shying to kiss each other. What? He said with shock. Hey hello close your mouth, mosquitoes will enter. He closed his mouth. This is wrong he said. Whatz wrong, do you know who i am? Anjali, anjali khanna, DOF billionaire she said with full of attitude.



By the way watz your name she catechize. Niranjan agnihotri he mumbled. Oh niranjan. K niru do you know swimming. Excuse me im niranjan he said. So wat its too long so i'll clepe you as niru. If you don't find that good you are free to leave the campus. Why should i... he was about to catechize her just then a guy came fwd and grabbed him by his collar "Hey don't you dare to question my sis. Got it he roared". He was appalled by his voice.



Bhaya chod do usse. He let go of his collar and resumed his ragging. K do you know swimming she asked. Yes anjali. Wat anjali, hey you baldy clepe me as mam. He wants to give her left and right but feared about her bro's torso and muscles. Yes mam i know swimming he said. K then remove your clothes and swim now she said. Where? Here on the grass ground she said by pointing her finger to ground. What, here, how can i swim here he again catechize her.



Her bro again got up and cupped his face in a tight grip "how many i shd say not to question my sis. Just do watever she asked you to, he yelled". Omg wer did i stuck he thought inwardly and having no other option he swimmed on the grass ground for a very good 60mins."



He snapped his fingers in front of her, to bring her out of reverie. Mrs anjali agnihotri kuch yaad aya he asked with a smile on his lips. No niranjan i used to clepe you as baldy during our clg but i won't do that now she said without meeting his gaze. He pulled her towards him "i like you cleping me as baldy he said with a mischievous glint in his eyes". Aur waise bhi uss din tumne mujhe swimming toh karvadiya saath hi saath bechare munjula aur aravind ko bhi rulaya he said making her to feel guilty.



Im sorry niranjan, i never knew that you three people will becum my best buddies, especially manju, she was like my sis. Do you remember, when we first reached hyd, we don't know anyone and have bupkis. But its manju and aravind bhaya who helped and supported us. But today when we have everything manju is not with us she said with tears in her eyes. "anjali stop crying, manju won't get back with your tears, even i feel her paucity but we can't do anything about that. The only thing we can do is to take care of aastha and ashwini as their parents and moreover she is your best friend right so she too won't like you crying for her", he said by wiping her tears.



By the way, what you're discussing with shlok. Niranjan you know that i've gave a word to manju that i'll get shlok and aastha married. Ya i know. Today when i asked both aastha and shlok bout the same thing, they diverted the topic saying that they were just frenz and nothing else. How can they be friends niranjan she said with frustration. Anjali relax, we both know what type of bond they both share. They both think that they were just frenz, they still didn't acknowledge the love which they both have towards each other. Time comes anjali, but you don't rush the things. Nobody knows when love happens,it just happens. Just wait for that time. Love will definitely blossoms b/w the two he said with a small smile.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful ,splendid and phenomenal updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the pm😃and yippee back to back update🥳
Both the ch 5 and 6 are ausum 👏😃
Anjali scolded sam😆 but reaching house ashu called scolding from astha😆
OMG,somebody clicked astha and shlok's photo😲???who clicked???? is some danger near ??
So all 4 were college freinds, astha's parent's and shlok's parent's😉😃taklu😆😆
So Anjali also spoke with shlok about marriage😃,but he also denied like astha😃
Niranjan also knows about the promise that anjali made to manjula😊
Let see what happens next😉 Thanks for update😃
update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Who is clicking the photo? 😕 worried for Astha
OMG poor Niranjan even university days he was bald 😆

getting very interesting waiting for next chapter ...thks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res.
Will read all the parts and comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Vijji fantastic update 👏.
Like Ashlok Tom n Jerry fight they r best for each-other 😉.
Like Astha Shlok also deny for marriage & NA know about it n he also want them to marry so I think he going to use that promise for Ashlok marriage I think so 😃.
Anjali as rowdy in collage 😆 can't believe but they 4 really share a strong bond of friendship.
Thanks for PM dear n waiting for next update 😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow Anjali totally behaved so different when she is in collage
she bend the knees of niru infront of her😆
Arey yaar when will astha Shlok relise their love😕
Hope anyone come between Ashlok
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Originally posted by: dv19

Beautiful ,splendid and phenomenal updates...

thank you dear...
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Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Thanks for the pm😃and yippee back to back update🥳

Both the ch 5 and 6 are ausum 👏😃 thank you debbie😊
Anjali scolded sam😆 but reaching house ashu called scolding from astha😆 yup😉
OMG,somebody clicked astha and shlok's photo😲???who clicked???? is some danger near ?? you guessed it right dear, there is danger for both but it has some time😉
So all 4 were college freinds, astha's parent's and shlok's parent's😉😃taklu😆😆 yup they four met at university😉
So Anjali also spoke with shlok about marriage😃,but he also denied like astha😃.
Niranjan also knows about the promise that anjali made to manjula😊 . yes he knows that😊
Let see what happens next😉 Thanks for update😃. you're welcome sweety😊
update soon😃. sure buddy😊
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