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Part 9

The court was adjourned for the day and the date for next hearing was after a month as Mr. Vikram was supposedly unwell on getting a severe asthma attack at court room.

Maan held geet protectively and led her away with him securing her from cruel eyes of world. They were again attacked by the media; maan couldn't have avoided them much so gave a small statement, not revealing much but enough to create negative rumors about superstar vikram. While the counterpart excused with "No Comments".

A glass of hard drink in hand and face laced with anger; Vikram Khanna was sitting in his study with his lawyer; in front of him was the huge 42" LCD, and there inside were those blo*dy paparazzi's uttering sheer nuisance about him.

"The recent development in superstar Vikram Khanna divorce case comes from the controversial statement by advocate Khurrana, which clearly indicates there is still something amiss in the sudden death of the Khanna baby and subsequent insanity of Mrs. Khanna prior to the divorce proceedings. It is also to be mentioned that advocate Khurrana, well known for his ethical practice was legal advisor of Vikram Khanna prior to the said Divorce case; what could be the reason of advocate Khurrana suddenly changing his mind and client? Is this the indication that superstar Vikram Khanna is the culprit? Stay tuned to know latest updates of the case only on..."

As these lines fell on his ears, his blood boiled inside and the glass in his hand had turned into pieces as a result making his hands bathe in his blood but he was far from realizing that pain.

Adi was tried to gain his attention and succeeded after few futile attempts.

"I am sorry to say but it's high time you choose between your ego and career. If we go and talk to maan calmly, there is still a chance he will spare you; if not then I would say this is just a trailer."

Adi tried last time to knock some sense to his brain; but instead of understanding Vikram pulled him with his collar.

"Can't you do anything? What type of lawyer are you?"

Vikram shouted. And then continued, and this time he was accusing him which was unbearable.

"He is your partner right? It's all a game you two are playing against me, is it? You want the money and you want to win me too; wow!"

Everything thing is acceptable to a professional, but not an insult to his integrity; Adi was no exception. He jerked his collar away from his clutch and straightened himself, then spoke calmly,

"You were free to choose your own counsel, and so you did after weighing all the options; I am not the one responsible for your wrong choice, if that is what you think, you are still free to reconsider your decision."

Saying that he started to walk away; that was when Vikram finally realized he had committed a big mistake, irreversible in nature and ran behind him.

"I am really sorry; I did not mean what I just said."

"Sorry does not reverse the accusations you alleged me of. And let me tell you one thing, no other lawyer in his sane mind would take up your case, given the delicate condition you are in and that too against Maan Singh Khurrana. The only way out for you, is go and beg Mr. Khurrana for mercy, and you definitely don't need me for that. See you in court."

Maan was lost in taking care of his jaan; so much into it that he didn't realize his phone ringing continuously, it was only after he made her sleep and was convinced she was deep into it that he left for his study to look into his work that he found innumerable missed calls. Before he could check who it was the doorbell rung and he ran to open the door and check who was it hitting the doorbell continuously, it may break her sleep.

The helplessness, anxiety and anger in his face were sight to watch; as he found Vikram Khanna at his door with a forlorn look. Still he did not invite him in; the man had no right to breathe in same air as hers.

"What is it?"

Asked maan with finality; and he had to oblige defeated in all ways that he was.

"I will do whatever you say, sign any paper you say; please don't ruin my image in media, I will have no career after that."

The hint of begging with sheer helplessness was evident in his voice; but it failed to melt maan, he might have become a sadist; No that wasn't true! This was the deciding moment; her pains or the sufferings of this man; her tearless cry or his crocodile tears; her emotional breakdown or his currently powerless money. not a hard choice for a person that he was; Maan Singh Khurrana was never the one to leave someone's tears unaccounted for; lest when they came from the eyes of the most precious person of his life.

"I have nothing to give you except the advice to accept your faults."

He shut the door on his face, not sparing a second glance even; and ran inside to check on her as he heard her faint whimpers. She had woken up with the sounds and he made her sleep again, this time with a lullaby; never had he thought this day would come in his life, she gave it a different meaning all together, though he would appreciate it better to do the same for their kids.

Precap: ok finally; the end of Mr. Vikram n a new beginning for maaneet.

A/N: do let me know if it seems like stretching; as I am absolutely clueless since the time I announced increase in no. of parts 😆

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Part 10

A month later...

@ Doctor's clinic.

Maan: doctor how is she?

Dr.: I am repeating the same thing since last two weeks, Mr. Khurrana. Your wife is 100% fine physically; but what about her emotional state? It is high time you consult a psychiatrist or I fear her emotional breakdown.

Maan: doctor please...

He objected immediately, nothing can happen to her as long as he is alive, the thought of even a scratch on her was enough to numb him then anything above that was out of question

Dr.: then why don't you consult a psychiatrist?

Maan: my wife is not crazy. She is just under shock.

Dr.: and that is my point exactly. I never expected that an educated person like you will think that only crazy and insane persons need a psychiatrist and not the ones who are under shock or depression or cases similar.

She was right; he had been behaving irrational post their marriage, the reasons were many. She was a way too precious to him, and the only one person he had in his life. Never had he had the feeling of a person belonging to him solely, nor did he knew how to manage relations for he never had one in his life till date; that maybe the reason he became so possessive and wanted to protect her to the extent of madness, to the extent it may hurt. But that was not right, he realized for good.

Seeing him silent, she continued...

Dr.: look Mr. Khurrana, I know you love your wife and that is her cure; but you need a doctor to guide you to the way. I will not interfere in your personal life; this is the card to the best psychiatrist meet her once and then decide. I will talk to her if you want.

He sat in his study room thinking on doctor's words and his own different behavior post the final hearing of the case. He had made sure that man had no other way to go and is ruined in the worst possible way.

The court held him guilty of being responsible of his child's death, a shame to fatherhood that he was; every bit of cruel truth is opened and the cruel man behind that hero mask that he wore on-screen was revealed to the world. After long heated arguments, the case was finally closed with them granted divorce and vikram the deserved punishment. He was sentenced 7 years of rigorous imprisonment and a fine of 1M, the production house was also not spared and fined 50M.

All the while this was going he saw her face, it was as blank as ever but there was a difference; her eyes were pouring continuously. Hot tears kept flowing from her eyes throughout the proceedings when her culprit was punished and she still kept staring un-blinkable. After that he saw was she walking away absent-mindedly; he called out for her but she didn't hear, didn't stop! He ran after her as he saw she was about to collide to wall which had a sharp nail bare that would hit her forehead, he reached just on time and placed his hand between the wall and her head, stopping her getting injured, even that had failed to bring her to sense. His hand was bleeding profusely, he didn't care about that but held her to himself after that didn't let her alone.

They moved out post all the formalities were completed; maan held her securely to him as they headed to his car and were again surrounded by media, they were uncontrollable this time. The questions kept shooting his way as he tried to dodge them, they were professional first related to the case and his win until one of the reporter dared to put up a personal one.

Reporter: Mr. Khurrana, there are news of Ms. geet staying with you even before the court accepted the divorce. What do you have to say on that?

Silence followed after that as maan gave a deathly glare to him; but there was no way the people and society would stop questioning, the other one followed.

Reporter2: Is the reason behind your relation turning bitter with Vikram Khanna is Ms Geet?

Every word was increasing his temper to an unfathomable level, he was just thinking of something that can close the big mouths forever. The next question that came up was enough to break his patience.

Reporter3: is there any other relation between you both than that of client-attorney?

With that words maan looked at geet; the realization of her not being in senses seem to sound good now, there was no way he would be able to stop her from taking a hard step then. What people think about him was never a concern but what would have she thought in her sane mind did matter to him. With rage in his eyes, he pulled her to him; and the very next second followed millions of camera flashes as they witnessed the most unbelievable sight when his blood-filled hand landed right at her forehead claiming her his proudly in front of the whole world.

Maan: Any more questions?

The mob went silent and that seemed to last forever; with a last smirk of win on his face which was captured again by flashes, he walked away now holding her rightfully as his. The very next day, first thing he did was to get their marriage registered and end the chapter of all baseless accusations.

The life after that had been better for him, as now he could rightfully take care of her every needs more than that he needn't feel wrong while he hold onto her in sleep; as that was the time she showed some emotions, it seemed like she dreamt it, sometimes she would laugh, giggle and next second start sweating then become restless and finally wake up! And that was the end as after waking up she is back to her lost self.

He did consult some doctor's, actually many for he had wanted a fast and speedy recovery for her; but all referred him a psychiatrist which he strongly opposed. Sometimes man becomes irrational when it is the question of his love and same happened to him. Nevertheless, today's session with his family doctor had broken that misconception; he had already decided to work on it and also had the appointment for weekend. Maybe life takes a new turn from this point, the hopes were high.

Precap: I have another shock-cum-surprize-cum twist for u all 😆

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Sundari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 11

Another of his night passed in deep thoughts and he reached absolutely no conclusions; only one question he had for death, why every misery was written in his life only? She moved herself adjusting to his warmth as he settled beside her in the bed, taking her in arms seemed to soothe all his tensions except one. He had been I a futile fight with himself which broke him slowly into two parts taking away every bit of his peace.

The third session with the psychiatrist was due tomorrow, and surprisingly it was for him not Geet. The last two sessions doctor had discusses the entire history of the case and he had tried to tell her all to the best of his knowledge and she didn't take a minute to tell a solution. She was very experienced no doubt with 15 years of practice in the field but how can he just go ahead and do that, it was not anywhere ethical and most importantly an abuse to his love. With a heavy heart he slipped into a light sleep, the feeling of something big coming on his plate was so strong these days that he was unable to shrug it off.

Dr.: Mr. Khurrana, you do not understand what I am trying to say.

Maan: I can understand, but if only baby is the cure can we not adopt?

He asked unsure.

Dr.: there you go wrong again; baby is her cure, but a baby coming out of nowhere will not help her; she needs to feel everything from the point of conceiving to the delivery.

Maan: how can you be so sure?

She looked at him stupefied but smiled inwardly at his concern about her, how much love does this man holds she thought and couldn't stop herself from feeling a little jealous with Geet; women as they say, can drink every emotion, but not jealousy.

Dr.: I am a doctor here and not you.

She countered little sternly making Maan to take a back foot but he had to make her understand.

Maan: no doctor, I didn't mean that; you are not getting my worries. She is not in a state that I can go ahead consummate my marriage and make her pregnant. How will she react when she comes back to her senses, just think once!

Dr: well, I do understand your concern, but you cannot leave the only hope to make her fine fearing the consequences; Geeta me bhi likha hai...

Karmanye Vadhikaraste, Ma phaleshou kada chana,

Ma Karma Phala Hetur Bhurmatey Sangostva Akarmani

You have the right to perform your actions, but you are not entitled to the fruits of the actions. Do not let the fruit be the purpose of your actions, and therefore you won't be attached to not doing your duty.

Take your time to think about it is all I can say.

They were sitting in the couch side by side watching T.V. he made her head rest on his shoulder; she had never refused to anything he did to take care of her or she was not in sense enough to know what was happening; while he made sure to keep her beside all the time he is home doing anything at all with a never ending hope to find something which makes her react. He was flipping through the channels when suddenly his eyes stopped at a news channel flashing "Breaking News".

"We are currently at the central jail, and the breaking news from here is the famous superstar Vikram Khanna who has been in news recently for his divorce case and subsequent judgment of the same is reported to have commit ted suicide last night."

As soon as the news registered in his brain, it was bound to make him happy beyond limits as there was no big a punishment for that man then dying in self-loath. But the very next second he was horrified to see Geet's reaction to it; she got very wild at the mere mention of his name and started to struggle in his hold. Before he could understand her state and react to it she got hold of the vase at side and threw it hard at T.V making it to break into pieces. By that time he was quite in action and immediately hugged her tight to clam her down, her body seemed to lose all weight and energy in his arms and when he separated thinking she is sober, his eyes widened in horror to find her already passed out.

Maan: this is a good sign, is it doctor?

Maan asked with mixed emotions, as one side he was too happy to see her showing emotions, but at the same time to afraid too, to find it so intense.

Dr.: I am afraid, it isn't. in fact it seem to head onto worse.

She showed her worry on the matter...

Maan: but why? I mean we are trying hard since last so many days and she doesn't respond and now when she did you say it's not a good sign.

He argued back vehemently and doctor sighed.

Dr: see Mr. Khurrana; I have seen many cases like this and I can exactly understand her condition. As for your question; all her life she didn't have anything to call her own, when she got married she must have dreamt about her future with her husband which didn't turn out well, things got buried in her heart loneliness and frustration, her baby was her only hope which fate brutally snatched from her; after the baby as you say she didn't react other than crying on the court at the time of punishment. She still had that anger inside for him, and that had been the reason of outburst; and now as I said, she does not have anything in life to hold onto; nothing at all, neither love nor anger nor hatred as he is already dead, she knows god has done justice to her. I fear she may try to end her life or things like that.

He gasped at her words and then like something cracked inside, it was his heart but it was not cracked but broken into uncountable pieces and the pain was evident in his face which he tried hard to hide. He looked at the doctor now with a fake smile on his face.

Maan: why am I not anything to her yet?

She remained silent not knowing what to reply, for nobody could answer that other than the one who was in the question. She had come to his love which was like worship to him and admired it very much but least could she help him with the same. Love is a disease that comes without cure, she thought.

Dr.: only time has answer to your question, trust me on that.

She spoke trying to balm his heart as friend this time. It was easy to fall for a man like that she thought, but then Geet was not in the right sense for the same. How he wished to find someone like him, at the age of 42 she was still single; never was she convinced that any man can love any woman that much, but this man had given a new angle to her thoughts with his love for his wife.

Precap: hmm, lemme think na 😛😉

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Sundari

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Part 12

He lied wide awake in his bed holding her tight to himself as she slept. The fear of losing her was too high, especially after what the doctor said turned out to be true; she had indeed tried to end her life, once with the knife when he was glad he reached right at the time and replaced her hand with his taking the sharp cut on his own; after that he had reappointed the nurse for her safety if nothing else. Other was trying to jump from balcony which was all the more dangerous, the nurse was somehow able to stop her by injecting her to unconsciousness, and after the incident he made sure to lock all the balconies of the flat.

Despite all these, he was unable to take the decision as big as moving on with her; he was buying time, taking chances which weren't fruitful enough. His belief that his love can heal her was strong, but then she had shut her heart to feel anything of that sort. He had not let her away from himself a single moment after that, even that seemed to reach her.

It was weekend, and why he didn't know but suddenly thought to take her with him to buy daily needs. There were no servants as he didn't need any when he was alone and now when he himself did everything for her. The strolled in the departmental store as he picked items up and in other had held her tightly not to take any chances. As they were walking back, his hands were engaged with shopping bags, and when she escaped his hold he didn't realize but very next second he found her right in the middle of the road and a truck approaching in high speed.

"GEET...!"

He shouted out in horror, and throwing down everything in hand ran towards her. The only thought in his mind was to save her, at any cost, be it his own life! And that was exactly what he did; he ousted her hard to which made her land on footpath, she hit her head hard on the floor but was thankfully saved by the life taking truck.

But he couldn't escape that, the time wasn't enough to save himself after her, and as he rushed to side his left leg hit the fast moving truck, though it was slight the speed and heaviness of the truck made it worse for him and he fell right there at the middle of the road.

He was still horrified by the incident, seeing her in the trap of death was tormenting him, the pain in his hand was nothing compared to that. Then and there it was decided, he would do anything that takes to bring her back, even if that meant to kill his soul, the guilt will be less for not putting all the efforts. He will fulfill his all duties and responsibilities towards her as a husband; the future anyways never exists in present.

A crowd had gathered there by then which helped them to reach Hospital; he had got a 21 day plaster as it was a minor crack and 1 week bed rest due to excessive bleeding while geet had some minor scratches and a cut in forehead which was addressed immediately.

It was finally the day to cut the plaster; and contradictorily the period in bed-rest proved good for him; there were changes in her more than any time before. She would on her own sit by him, as he was unable to move much to come near her; he had made her addicted of his presence and warmth around her that she couldn't do without him. There was so suicidal attack, much to the relief of maan. All this only assured him, made him sure that the big step he will be taking is not as big a gamble as he thought it to be initially.

Dr.: so finally you have decided upon it.

He nodded, as he sat in front of the doctor for the next session.

Dr.: good then. She is fine as far as I can say, but once consult a gynecologist and confirm if she is physically ready to bear a child and she will also guide you with her dates.

She suggested the best gynecologist to him and he bid her bye, hopeful for the next step. How she wished his miseries came to an end.

He sat in front of the gynecologist with straight face, as she kept throwing embarrassing questions at him until he mentioned the reference of the psychiatrist.

Gynecologist: oh! I see...

She read her files to understand the history of the case and then started to question again.

Gynecologist: when was she last down?

He looked down with his cheeks almost red; never had he known something like blushing and experiencing this was way beyond his contemplation. He somehow managed to give satisfactory answers to doctor after which she took geet inside the examination room.

Gynecologist: at the look of it, I can say she is fine but I have performed some tests, so let's wait for the results too. Other than that she is weak, keep track of her diet.

The do0ctor said as she finished examining her and sent the test samples for immediate results. She then instructed him about everything, from diet to medicines and how to keep her stress free and relaxed till the reports came.

Dr.: well the reports are more than perfect, no complications is what I expect, you can go ahead.

Then she started discussing about her dates, keeping track on any changes noticed and gave another appointment after a month.

The whole day passed in restlessness for maan, as the night approached it was turning into anxiety. The mere thought of being able to express his love was making his every nerve high, his condition was no less than a bride sitting on bed on her first night waiting for her soul-mate to complete her. He would smile suddenly, the blush in next moment, and then frown realizing his loss in control in own emotions.

While he was in dreamland all the while, his better half was not in any senses to realize what change will this night bring in; as she stared out of the window to the starry sky he came in closing the bedroom door and stood behind her, close enough that his warm breath fell on her clod skin at her nape and his hand slid around her waist, though fully covered, the contact aroused him big time.

PS: another is on the way; probably the last part.

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Sundari

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Part 13

He bent down a little, and his warm lips came in contact with her skin at her shoulder; the contact made him shudder out of breathlessness, while the realization of it not being able to stir any emotions at the other hand broke his heart to the extent un-repairable. He was sure every moment ahead will only make his resolve weaker specially if he looks for a response, but it was not any more feasible to wait and take risk with her life.

The day of truck accident came in front of him again, that day he saw some strange madness in her eyes, the emptiness which was different from her usual blankness; there was also a determination, a dire need to end all the miseries and embrace death; and that he feared as there was no life for him without her.

Few more kissed followed covering her shoulder then moving up the side of her neck till he reached her earlobe, taking tat into his mouth biting it tenderly he finally stopped at her cheek. He could now clearly see her face, and what he saw blew away all the remaining senses in him. Her face was flushed with red color creeping at her cheeks and neck, her breadth was deep making her chest heave and fall, but the most enchanting were those eyes which were shut tight in expectation. He couldn't have expected more reaction given her current state, this was more than enough.

He turned her, so that she was facing him and kissed her forehead with all the love. He then picked her up in his arms and placed her on the bed softly and himself joined her side. Slowly, and very softly he removed that single strand that was disturbing his heavenly view; the naughty finger then set out in exploration as it traced her ear then passing her neck reached her shoulder, from there it moved further all the way down her arm to the tip of her ring finger and then his hand interlocked with hers taking full control. The sensations that were initiated burned him alone, it was as if he was feeling all the sensations that their closeness caused in behalf of both of them; as she was as unaffected as ever as soon as she opened her eyes.

He was at the starting point again, not sure whether to proceed or stop. He looked deep in her eyes to find his answers, alas! They were as blank as ever. A tear or two escaped the boundary of his eyes; and fell on her lower lip and that moment like it changed something her lips quivered, though so slight that he would have missed it if not looking at her with rapt attention. But was enough to push his courage again, he bent his head towards her and softly his lips landed on her lower lip sucking that salty water that had turned sweet just by coming in contact with her, then slowly nibbling on her lower lip; he wasn't sure what happened after that as he was long lost in the feelings that evoked with that burning contact, it sure felt like floating in heaven.

By the time he had come to the senses it was too late to think anything; he kept proceeding in all ways known-unknown while in the kiss and now was the time for the ultimate union of body and soul that he sought for; he looked again at her for one last time only to get dishearten again not finding any response; all the while his heart screaming

"Hold onto me"

But his silent cry never found words nor tears till date; how much more can he give in, give up? Maybe all, everything he has, he owns; but not this, this was demeaning his pure love, his unadulterated emotions. He knew now that he cannot go any further, how much ever difficult it may be to stop at this moment it will keep him away from lifelong self-guilt, he broke the hug which held her to him and was about to separate when a voice stopped him, he was sure he heard his name in her soft whisper and he turned only to get stunned as her hands came up and looped around his neck holding him close, not letting the warmth go away. He couldn't believe this was happening, his efforts all this while didn't go in vain; maybe he couldn't make a place in his heart with his care but she does acknowledge his presence in her life; and now this move only making his belief strong on the relation they shared tied in the sacred knot.

It is said that passion is the driving force of human mind, it takes passion to make or destroy anything. She has been his passion from day one, and since then that passion has only made up their relation this far; but this moment was all set to destroy it. So what is check point? How do we stop destruction from passion? The answer is awareness. Her awareness to his presence, his feelings and that of her own only made things better and saved him, saved her only relation.

They joined in together in the journey to heaven, completing each other and themselves in all senses. The stars outside seem to sparkle more, like celebrating their Milan; while inside their faces glowed no less than the star itself as contentment oozed out from every pore of their existence.

The Epilogue

Days passed by happily, and her pregnancy was confirmed in the 2nd month itself, but more than that it was her reaction that made him feel over the moon. The doctor had been quite right he thought now; as the news of pregnancy fell on her ears the sparkle, the life was back in her eyes. She caressed her stomach and her lips curved into a U, it was divine to her smile. And when their eyes met and he could find thankfulness in them; no questions asked, no explanation sought, only trust and acceptance which only made him all the more happy.

Life after that was no less than bliss for Maan, as with each passing day she only seemed to get better, back to life and living. Initially she kept to herself, but was quite open with her feelings, she would smile at him, keep looking at mirror often touching her belly. Slowly she started to accompany him when he would cook or clean the house, and gradually started to help too. Though he made sure she didn't do anything that exerted her physically but light works were OK.

Their relation also progressed; as soon as she started to talk to him, initiated a conversation, he made it a point to take things slow, to be comfortable they started with friendship; gradually living together taking care of each other and their little love kindled that feeling of affection bringing them closer than ever.

As the months passed by, she was more open and friendly with him, her mood swings increased too; but he made sure to bring everything that she needs at her finger tip. They would talk to baby and fight too about it being boy or girl but never reach a conclusion.

But in all this most difficult for Geet was to confess how badly she was falling for that man, her husband. There was a different feeling altogether, maybe she was comparing, comparing Maan with him; all the dreams of that 20 year old girl that had been crushed brutally now seemed to come true, but not being able to express them was making her all the more anxious and to top it up was her high hormones. She knew not as to how to make him near her, the theory of "taking it slow" was only taking away her patience slowly.

Finally the fateful day came, when she was enjoying the drizzle in their little terrace when he came at evening; she was all wet and he got worried seeing her state, for she may fall sick. He scooped her in his arms and took her inside, he wiped her hairs dry first, and then asked her to change getting up to leave when she held his hand stopping him and stunning him. The wet look of both had made all bits of her control snap and she had finally found her real place; his arms in true sense confessing all the feelings that was in heart and leading to all the actions that was in mind.

And thus nine months passed on happily, and she was due anytime now, Maan was more than just worried; while Geet was all calm and composed knowing he was always there by her side. And finally the day came, after much difficulty and 4 hour labor she gave birth to a pink cotton doll.

Geet: Maan...

Maan: hmm...

Geet: aap mujhe zyada pyar karte hai ya baby se?

He didn't need to think.

Maan: tumhe Geet.

Though she was happy, but the mother inside felt sad so she looked down. He held her chin and made her face up.

Maan: parr tum toh baby se zyada pyar karti ho, and I'm sure my little doll will love her papa the most; so that makes the equation balanced.

He said taking both his angels in his arms and kissed her forehead with all the love.

THE END

A/N: thank you all who liked the story n supported me through this. It is a strange feeling as this is my first story that has come to an end. Though it may seem I rushed at the end, but that is one facet of this story, I have more things in mind though but not here; probably if luck favors then I can come back with this, but no commitments *fingers crossed*

Just a last request, do hit like and share your views for the last time, as after this there will not be anymore "hold onto me".

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maan do something...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Originally posted by: kamnagupta7
Waiting

Abhi update nahi kar rahi, kal karungi hopefully!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey dear!
Just saw part 6 & 7.
Thank you for clearimg my doubt.
Vikram- what a selfish moron that man is!!
But sadly such men do exist in our society for whom everything is measured in terms of gains and losses.
He was forced into the marriage - that was not his fault but he should have tried to make his relationship work.
And his insensitivity towards his spouse and child is heinous!
Why bring a little soul in this world if u dont want herr!!
Geet never mattered to him- when he could not love her in her happy state , it cant be expected from him to actually care for her.
And now the divorce case is also a huge ego trip for him. What a sorry excuse in the name of a human being!!

Maan
He is a pearl from an oyster who has remained untouched from the evils of the world- despite wading through them throughout his life!!
All he knows is to shower love unconditionslly and selflessly.
He understands the value of priceless things like love n family, bcoz that is all he has ever craved.
He will definitely fight for Geet n win against every obstacle.
I love that he is simply being there for Geet- without any expectations, conditions and demand.
His soul burns in her grief. Truly a gem of a man!!

Geet
Her plight is agonizing. To lose a child is devastating & to top it all the jerk of a husband. But she is lucky to have found a friend like Maan who is ready to fight the world on her behalf.

Adi
He is a real buddy of Maan.

I love ur intricately created characters!! The situations are heartwrenching
Keep it up.

I have a tiny miny request. Do continue ur OS Ho gayi galti as & when u get time.
pls, showing a puppy face.