-The last night - A sandhir os

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The last night . a sandhir os
She was sitting watching the flame of that candle , bringing the light to keep her away from darkness .
Tears were long back soaked yet thier traces were telling their own history .
The cold was enough , to put on the white Cardigan yet it wasn't the month of winters .
He was running , panting sweat beads all over his face .
Keeping that peice of paper , he was searching that one address , that one name , that one hope , that one light .
In the rishikesh.
On the shore of Ganges .
She decided to live , to see Serenity of this place .
To devote her life , her efforts and most importantly her love to this place , where that all started .
He ran his fingers again on the address , and said " why u make so problems for me ?" .
...
His faith in his love was strong but his body is giving up .
Tiredness was empowering his love .
Still he decided to make a last try .
He walked a little and god was impressed by his efforts .
There it is ...
A little cottage .
With dazzling some letters on his entrance .
The same letters were scribbled in that piece of paper which was not suffocating in his sweaty hands .
His lips simply curved a little and tears made their way .
He entered and inhaled .
The whole place was filled with most familiar smell .
Her aroma was in the atmosphere , but why doesn't the place has the life in it .
Like she use to her .
He saw a flame and his light as well ...
She was weak , very weak .
She haven't ate her dinner.
She had a pale face , long wet eyelashes and his photo near her chest holding it tightly ...
He touched her hand ,as a reflex she mumbled rd ...
His heart broken into countless piece .
Looking her in this state ,was not less than dying ...
Sanyu .
Sanyu
Sanyukta ...
He chipped ...
She opened her eyes with tears in them said I told u will be there !!!
Haa! U won fine ...
Now let's go home , randhir accepted his loss ..we will Go USA tomm ,where ur treatment will start ;
No ! Baba
Yes ,and its final ...
Lemme spend one last night ...
At my place . please rd !!
U had arrived after so many months , let me provide u some ease ...
Stay here with me ...
For one last night ...OK

Haa ! Wear some more woollens .
She said happily with a order ...
He was confused on her behaviour , he thought ,she must be yelling , shouting om him after her such deeds ...
But no , nothing
Might she just want to cherish moments with him ...
She wore a beautiful white Cardigan .
And grab his hand and goes near to shore ...
Sanyu ! Yeh yaha kyu ...
She put a finger on his lips and they sat near Ganges shore with moon light ...
She simply put her head on his chest and he wrapped his arms around her , saving from every evil of this world ...
..
Randhir ! She said
Hmm he replied ..
I love u .
I love you too .
Sanyu .
And he gets emotional
M sorry sanyu , if I hadn't gone .
Toh yeh nhi hota .
M sorry , not able to fulfill your dreams ..
Flashback ...
They were on terrace of their college ..
Sanyu m sorry , but I have to go ...
Oh ! M so happy , its a lifetime opportunity ...
Randhir had got a internship in Beyond dreams automobile
Worlds leading automobile company .and he told her about this on last day of college .
Sanyu just gulped her tears and nodded her head .and said rd u will be back na...
After six months .
Sanyu got to know about her intestinal cancer , she tried to contact him .
But she failed ...
One week earlier .
Rd got to know about her cancer , through kaustuki. ..
And she gave her sanyu 's address to him...
Rd was shocked but determined to make her well and they Will be together again ... .
Present ..
Shhh! Rd ..
Lemme enjoy this moment ..
After some Time
Sanyu .what's her dream ...I will full fill it ...after u got well .
Tell na , randhir demanded .
U gonna fulfill my dream very soon ! She smiled and closed her eyes ...
Sanyu ! Tell na how ...
Sanyu , sanyu .
But response never came up...
And he got his answer.
Her dream
Was to die but in his arms and he had fulfilled it as well her last wish to spend "the last night " with her .

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shivika838 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Di plz aisi emotional n heartbreaking stories mat diya karo πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
tell me ki ab mein rona band kaise karun ??😭😭
U made me so emotional...d story touched d bottom of my heart😭😭
wonderfully writtenπŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it's awesome superb lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely
very very nice and emotional

you penned it beautifully.πŸ‘
it's very emotional.😭

love it.πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Doodh mama.😭
Yeh kya tha.. .😭
Sanyukta dead.. .😭
It was very emotional beyond Infinity.😭
Luvly.. Luvly.. So awesome <3 
Nicely penned.. 
But next time, sweet happy os okay? 
Thx for Pm 

Luv
Chandu 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
This was very emotional di 😭
Beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Beautiful os
Loved it

It was so emtnl
Sandhir drifted
Sanyu died her last wish to be in his arm fulfilled

Some stories r not meant to be complete


Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh god yaar,itna emotional os😭
awesome yaar,u are such an awesome writer
thanx a lot for this piece of writing dear
keep writing
thanx for the pm
love
pari
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
*fairytale voiceover*
Finally..after hours of search..the knight found the treasure..n opened it. ..
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.
.
.
.
Diii...
SENTI OS!
tussi aise toh na the...
Ae kudi..inna rona menu na pasnd...😭
Sanyukta ko maar daala...
NAHHIII..ue padhne se pehle mera netpck kyun nhi khtm ho gya

πŸ˜†
Hehe..sorry bt drama karna job h meri..
Awesome os di...especially the way u wrote it..seems bit of a poetic form...n i loved it..
Sanyu's dream was to die in her beloved's arms...
Awww...
Bt nxt tym..reunite them pls...
Keep smiling..
Triyu..aka tarbooz
Edited by heyu..smile. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ye kya hai yar
cvs bhi rula raha hai aur tum bhi
bahuth emotional update
u penned it very well
thanx for pm
keep writing
but not sad ending
next time plz mere liye ek acha sa happy ending wala os dedho plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Those words touched my heart
They were too intenseπŸ‘
Thanks for pm 
Edited by cherrynicolem - 9 years ago