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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I love it... it was amazing... OMG I m blushing...

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

STATUTORY WARNING : By the end of the comment if you want to murder me, surely you are NOT ALLOWED to do so 😉 So ahem... hold your horses for this one...

A simply beautiful one! Trust me...

By the way... the romance at the last bit was *wink*

Ki laglo? Khub plain and sweet comment na ! 😉

I loved the essence of autumn over here *smile* and yeah,

Unrequited loved happens to be one of the purest forms of love because there is never any expectation - mind you I am not telling about loving someone with the hope that one day they will love you back or stuff. In true love even if the person goes away you find happiness within that *smile*

By the way... the way Arjun pinned Sakshi to the bark of the tree for a kiss...

Knocked my breath out for a second *wink*

Wah wah Ritu... kaha ke armaan hai yeh sab?

Waise... In PM Sakshi had draped the moonlight around herself and Jun had put on midnight charms... idhar tohh reverse case na! Sakshi in a black attire and Arjun in an ivory coloured attire *haye*

Tumhe phirse dekha toh yeh jaana sanam

Pyaar phirse hota hai deewane sanam

Ab yaha se kaha jaaye hum...

Tere baahon main marr jaaye hum...

Pata nahi yeh gaana kaha se tapka...

Waise... Arijit strikes again eh? *wink*

Kaise aaya yeh idea Ritz? Again... sitting by the window, admiring the moonlight romancing jiju *OOOPSSS*

Aaha... tum mile... dil khile... aur jeene ko kya chahiye...

Ya phir

Ang laga de re... mohe rang laga de re... Ram lagan more agan agan mora tan mora chandan re...

Haye...

Oh haan... no wonder Ram Leela se hi gaana choose kiya

By mistake sachai nikal gayi muh se! *wink* Ya phir dimaag main Aakaash tha *aah mummyy save me from Ritthhhuuu*

Ritu = 😡

Me = *bhaaagooo*

*shouting on top of roof* "Waise Ritz... if jiju was to be in action in , toh gaane pe kaise focus kiya? Focus toh... "

Ouch! Ki re Ritz! That danda hurt yaar!!!

Chal... ab soch... eta tei aato khichai...

PM e ki comment paabi...

Wait and watch Jaani 😉

Lots of lowweee...

Shree

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Suerrb story... Simple yet elegant..

I truly loved it.

Very beautifully written.

The whirpool of emotions.. Hatred, love, anguish..

And love once again..

At last the love story reached to it's destination..

Truly loved it.

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

superb

amazing Os

n thanks 4 pm

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awwwsssmmm OS
Loved it
Nicely Written
Amazing...
Thanks for the PM

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Should I ask you what triggered it?! 🤣 🤣

Haayee.. After a long vacation, this is just what I needed to get back into my comfy zone..

Hotwa's eyes and the Killer huskiness.. *Thud*

Yes, now I can go back to taking several trips to heaven and back daily.. Eh, it is possible! Koi mere dil se pooche.. 🤪

Where do I start, Rituu.. Honestly, I wanted to say that this is my most favorite work of yours, but I stopped short of it.. Coz that won't be completely true.. Kya pata, my favorite is yet to come.. 😛 Yes, yes, hum laalchi aurat club ke lifetime members hain.. 😆

Autumn and Arakshi, a masterstroke.. And the best part about this one, it felt like an ending to what the CV's left unfinished/butchered..

But no seriously, there's something very very special and heartwarming about this one.. Lol, take a guess.. Na na guess karo..

There u go! Take those darn earphones off first.. ❤️

Nahii.. chaddo.. We're hopeless Meerabai's.. See I got you a tanpura too.. Hi-five! 😎

It's raining Laal Ishq tonight!

Aaand I'm missing you soo much already..

Jaldi jaldi aao, soul sautan.. I'ma gonna miss you loads.. 🤗

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@Arakshiya_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

SUPPEERBBB!!!!!! & Awsome OS!!!!!
Loved it loatsss!!!!! Fantastic work...their relation was just beautifulll...wonderfulll...pure...Just amazing...

P.S...No Sorry for short nd late comment...exams time!!!!!!