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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Another awesome story from you..
And no words to describe its beauty..
I always wanted Ishita to stand for her right...
And this story is exactly the way i wanted to see in the show..
Brilliant writing yaar..👏👏
Continue soon and pm me...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
plz continue today yr...
feeling vry bored wthout yhm...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys,

Thanks for all the likes, comments and PM. Here is the update to this story. I will update IshRa Memories by Friday. Hope you guys like this part as well.


Chapter: 2

Raman tries calling Ishita but her phone is switched off suddenly he remembers the letter he dropped he searches frantically for that when Simmi asks him what are you searching for he says the letter from Ishita he sees Rinki is still holding it in her hand. He snatches the letter from her hand and rushes inside the room and closes the door and locks it everyone is surprised by his action.

Raman sits on Ishita couch picks up her pillow and cries uncontrollably hugging her letter to his heart. After few minutes Mihir comes there bangs the door asking him to open. Raman composes himself and opens the door for Mihir.

Mihir looks at Raman asking him are you okay? Telling him nothing would have happened to bhabi we will find her. Hearing Ishita name Raman literally hugs Mihir and sobs in front of him. Mihir sees first hand as to how much importance Raman has given to Ishita in his life as the first time around the hard hearted Raman Bhalla broke down in front of him when bhabi was lying unconscious in the hospital and this is the second time he is seeing the great RKB reduced likes this in another person care. Mihir hugs him tightly and says to him don't worry everything will be alright.

Raman after some time composes himself and asks him why she did not forgive me like every other time; she always understands me this time too I did not mean anything what I said. She is my strength and my life without her I don't know how I am going to live. Mihir explains to him every time you shout at her when you are angry,she takes it in her stride forgiving you but this time around you insulted her saying that she is not part of this family and asked her to get out. Do you think anyone can forget those words easily? Raman asks what you are saying I never remember saying to her she is not part of this family. She is the one who bought this family together. She is the binding person who brings everyone together without her there is no family. Mihir says bhai in your anger you don't even remember what you said to her.

Raman tells him no matter what I will apologize to my JKR and bring her back where she belongs. Raman talking to himself bewakoof aurat she can't even fight with me standing in front of me she sends me a letter when I see her I will give her a piece of my mind. Mihir coughs to get Raman attention bhai you are going to pacify her not to make her more angrier remember that Raman says yeah I know.

In the meanwhile Mr. Iyers calls them to tell that Vandu had a baby girl. Bhallaji was asking him why you guys didn't pick up when we called. Iyer replied they were inside the hospital so the cell towers strength might not be there that is why they didn't hear the call.

Bhallaji tells everyone that Vandu had a baby girl and he says to Toshjii come we have to go and see them everyone leaves for the hospital. Raman is super excited that he gets to see his JKR. When they reach the hospital everyone gushes over the baby but Raman is frantically searching for Ishita but he could not find her anywhere then he goes to appa and asks him where is Ishita? Appa says to him she is not here and we forget about her in the rush to get to the hospital. Raman is worried now how is Ishita doing without any help in the house. He tries calling her still her phone is switched off he asks appa to call when Iyer calls the same thing happens. Appa is little bit worried now why her phone is switched off Raman says to him don't worry probably she is sleeping that is why her phone is switched off but while talking to appa he realized that Bala was getting uncomfortable.

Raman pulls Bala aside and asks him what you know about Ishita. Why is her phone switched off? I know she never makes a move without telling you so please tell me where is she. Bala looks really uncomfortable and says to him I didn't agree with her decision but she wanted to follow through she wanted some time alone from everybody to think. I dropped her at the bus station. I was going to follow her without her noticing but unfortunately I got a call from home asking me to come to hospital so I don't know where she went.

Raman raises his voice are you mad she is in a wheelchair without any help she might get hurt why didn't you bring her back. Everyone starts looking at them so Bala shushes Raman and says to him I told her that is not a good idea but she was not in a mood to listen she was very upset. Raman quietens downs and asks him do you know where she might have gone. Bala says no she has switched off her cell as well so that we can't trace her. I haven't told appa and amma about it so please don't tell them now they will be distracted with the birth of the new born baby so they will not notice that Ishu is not home for few days by that time her anger should have gone down and she will come back home I think.

Raman did not like Bala telling him that nobody will miss her for a few days. He thinks she is a lively person without her presence the house will look gloomy. Raman tells Bala the first time she calls you I won't to know where is she please Bala reluctantly agrees to it.

Raman is thinking please Ishita wherever you are forgive me and come back home where you belong. Ishtia at the same time realizes that Raman is thinking about her now and cries thinking why do you always hurt me Raman. Raman at the same time realizes that Ishita is thinking about him and says sorry to her I know I have hurt you a lot but this time I will keep my promise to you please come back.


Hope you guys like this update.

Please leave your comments good or bad.


Thanks,

Maya

Chapter 3

Edited by mayasundar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Unres...
its so heart breakng emotional updte.. 😭
hope ishu is fn nd raman will find her soon.. 😳
Edited by SuryaIshraholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Great update. Pls continue soon👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Lovely update 👏read both parts in one go please countinue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maya, I m so sorry i couldnt comment on your chap 1..
That was amazing. U put across the whle situation so so beautifully, that i really dont have any words...brilliant...

Oh my ishita in a bus stand..hopefully she is fine... I m also waiting for ishra confrontation... continue soon... and do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I Really hope some part of it is considered in the serial
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb and Emotional Update...
Update next part soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Maya,

Thanks for the pm. I just read both the chapters and liked them both. Thank you for making mihir talk in ishita's support. It's high time someone did!! I'm glad to see raman realize his mistake and pine for his jkr...wondering where she went and hope he can go after her and spend some quality time
With her before bringing her back.

Looking forward to the next part...
Edited by fugitives123 - 10 years ago

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