MG SS : BROKEN RELATIONSHIP teaser pg 49 jun 17 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
Why it discontinued please don't plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
discountiue karney ka reason de do please
will not aske you to coninue

and please dont say like and coment is reason 😡

fad up now all left just coz of this hurting yar

ghadey sudharey gye nahi

aur you left
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Posted: 10 years ago
my irregularity is the reason .
I don't mind likes and comments coz m anyway writing on my blog..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

discountiue karney ka reason de do please

will not aske you to coninue

and please dont say like and coment is reason 😡

fad up now all left just coz of this hurting yar

ghadey sudharey gye nahi

aur you left

fariya but 120 people liking her story ..and commenting too
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Posted: 10 years ago
extremely sad news! Y discontinued?? Please continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

my irregularity is the reason .
I don't mind likes and comments coz m anyway writing on my blog..



we will wait dont stop in mind na

please asey lagta hai jesey kisi nai half hang kardiya

na marney mein na jeney mein time lelo par please stop mat karo 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Why you discontinuing this Story
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Posted: 10 years ago

@preeti di this is for you.. even if I will leave will complete BR

PART 3

The tears which were in her eyes were the evidence of his disloyalty towards their relation.. She went away hiding the pain that was caused by the man whom she loved as her husband but now everything was not good.. she had decided to set himself free from the burden that they both were carrying... maan on the other hand was devastated seeing her outburst he never expected this kind of outburst but her each and every word was a clear picture of what she was going through..

He was numb for a second.. The girl, he supposedly girlfriend put her hand on his shoulder in order to console him but seeing no reaction she asked him..

Ragini : maan.. maan are you fine.. maan was kind of lost and he didn't even asked anything but he slowly removed ragini's hand off his shoulder .. And turned towards her..Till now he was lost on the path where he had lost her.. He never wanted to hurt her but he had too..

Maan : I am sorry... he apologized to the girl and she smiled not letting him complete .. She nodded in a NO and hug him but maan didn't reciprocate, she was now understanding the depth of his love..The commitment that he had given to their relation but sadly his wife was not able to understand..

Ragini : I am sorry.. as soon as I saw her coming I didn't knew what instigated me but I just said whatever came in my mind.. it was not my intention maan.. I am sorry I just went overboard.. I wasn't mean to .. maan smiled

Maan : I should be sorry ragini , you are just helping me but I never saw this side of geet , she is getting lost ragini .. my geet is getting lost.. You didn't saw but she is losing herself in this so called life of hers.. And my geet certainly deserves this.. She wants love and I failed to understand.. I didn't saw her drifting away, the geet you saw today isn't my wife ragini.. meri geet aisi nai thi.. And the sole reason of this is me..i never saw what I was loosing .. She is getting lost in her work...he was so vulnerable in the tide of time that he didn't even noticed that he was crying..

Ragini consoled him and somehow took him from there, they walked towards his car and left for someplace..

Geet was at the office, she was the CEO of the top business firm of India and handling their Delhi branch whereas maan was just a normal employee in one of the TOP MNC and was working for nominal salary.. In the span of five years they were changed.. she was changed she managed to get a position for herself fulfilling all the wishes that they had but she didn't knew what was the thing that she lacked.. She fiddled with the ring that she was wearing her engagement ring..It was a simple gold band that she could have thousands now but still the one he had given her was special.. geet felt that there was no use of the gold band specially when maan had chosen to end the relationship ..she with the heavy heart tried to took it off but couldn't .. The emotions and the feelings that were associated with the band were actually with her husband maan.. Her already red eyes were now paining but the pain that she was boring in her heart was much more that could not be expressed..

Geet : I feel like a looser maan., a looser do you get a real looser.. I am having nothing today..she felt cheated and broken why did you went for her.. Why did you maan.. Where did I lacked.. I never asked anything..Never..

Least she knew that he did all the things that she wanted whether it was leaving his parents or never interfering in her life but there he went wrong.. No matter what ever happened she shouldn't have done what he had.. Leaving her on her own terms proved their relationship to be shattered.. And when he tried to mend the relationship she was away from him..

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Next part will be up soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan want to geet understand what she is missing in her life in busy working
Both are in pain
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 3
emotional update...
ohh i my guess was right...the girl with maan ragini is his friend just helping him...she saw geet coming n said those things...she n maan didn't thought geet would react like this...
maan still love geet...but he thought giving her space is good for their relationship...which didn't work...
maan did all things geet want he never interfer in her life...but sometime interfeirence is needed...
n there geet is shattered...
Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago

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