IshRa OneShot : Kuchh Ankahi - Page 4

Originally posted by: _DarkLady_

Do you know how does it feel when your favorite writer comment on your work?🤔 You can't fathom...

I AM SO FREAKING HAPPY!!!
Thank you so much A... thanks! This is so huge for me...😳
I am so delighted that you went through my OS... thanks!

Originally posted by: gravity23

Then he had dipped himself in the warmth of her lap with unspoken promises of better tomorrow they'll see together.

Loved how you have phrased this Piu...

very nice mera baccha🤗

One more?😃
Having adrenaline rush😆

Really...?? Yay! I am so happy that you like the phrase😳

Lovely OS Piu very emotional one but you write so well can feel all the pain the happiness Ishu go through her phase of life.and not easy to put Raman to express his feeling but you made him apologize to Ishu too. Very well portray of story.thanks for PM and sorry for late reading. By the way what is the meaning of the story English translation please.😃😃

Originally posted by: usaonly

Lovely OS Piu very emotional one but you write so well can feel all the pain the happiness Ishu go through her phase of life.and not easy to put Raman to express his feeling but you made him apologize to Ishu too. Very well portray of story.thanks for PM and sorry for late reading. By the way what is the meaning of the story English translation please.😃😃

Oh please Jum you don't have to be so humble because it's never late😃 I am so happy that you could take your time out to post your feedback.😃

The literal translation would be quite like "Something Unsaid"😆

Originally posted by: gravity23

Awww...Piu...u flatter me...but thank u!!🤗

You have very beautifully portrayed how it SHOULD have been handled between a husband-wife, not how its done in the show...distasteful

This shows that pyaar mein naarazgi ho sakti, par, pyaar khatam nai ho sakta..partners shudnt hurt each other saying such nasty thing..and if they do, they shud apologize...

Yes exactly, romance is not always the substitution for apology😊

Awesome one Piu! Sorry I'm such late reader! Life has been a mess and couldn't come on IF.

This is beautiful... you write pain and emotion exceptionally well and I love the genuineness of the apology...very well done, as always!

Originally posted by: DipaRB6

Awesome one Piu! Sorry I'm such late reader! Life has been a mess and couldn't come on IF.

Love this so much. Finally we get to see the inner rage in Ishita. Sometimes I feel no one can be as forgiving as her. You've captured what should be her anger really well. I also like Raman's simple apology. Sometimes the words can be simple but if they are sincere they are enough and you showed that.

Lovely read 😃

Aw... don't be sorry. I totally understand how real life intervenes sometimes. I am so glad despite all the interruptions you still made it a point to read this on.😃 Thank you so much...🤗

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is beautiful... you write pain and emotion exceptionally well and I love the genuineness of the apology...very well done, as always!

Hey... thanks for all the praises.😃
So delighted that you find it beautiful🤗