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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: divvi22

Hahaha. Shocked seriously..
Dream!! Alya alive too good..

Thank yu so much...😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

Awesome wonderful
Wow
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99

he had guts

i just love it

Thank yu so much..Yeah ! he had..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryapk1997

yeee kiss everywhere 😆

i have read all the parts but wasn't able comment as i have been too busy with holiday planning ,exams ,projects nd well ya writing ma own ff.
BUT this ff has soo much in it ,
humour ,suspense,romance, thrill,nd offourse such shocks u give.
iam seriously loving the story nd ur crisp writing .
story is so endearing .
aliya nd her death 🤣.don't worry manik is there to do it
nandini tensed is soo cute .
the updates are fantastic nd u too
love u dear🤗
nd u too keep smiling it suits u tooo 😃

Thank yu so much,,,
am glad ki u loved it..
am glad u r liking my shocks too...
love u tooo..
Thanks for reading n commenting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok ok wil wil..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrishtiDREAMER

AWSM AWSM AWSM...MANIKS FAMOUS SMIRK IS BACK...CONTIBUE SOON AND PLS PM ME DEAR...:-)

Thank yu so much..yeah 1! will continue soon..yeah will do
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

nandu shocked manik rock
wow
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi

Thank yu so much..
am glad ki u loved it..
will continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
MaNan FF : "Love Keeps US Together"


~CHAPTER 13~

New Friendships are on their way...

Recap : Aliya is not dead.Nandini and Manik had an intimate encounter in shower.They had a talk in dinner time.Manik broke up with Aliya .He doesnt trust her anymore.But Aliya is not aware of this break up as she is not in her home.But for Manik the relationship ended..

Manik pecked her on her lips and went and slept and smirked at her reaction.Nandini just stood like a statue.She just blushed and went and sleeps in other room.Nandini is sleeping peacefully.But suddenly she felt some hands on her.She is listening some noises.They are laughing.She sees her crying badly,pleading them to leave her.She just wakes up shouting Manik !!! Manik wakes up once.He just runs to her room.He sees her in a terrible state.She is trembling with fear.He goes near her..She just hugs him and he says shhh !! It's just a bad dream.She is completely petrified.Nandini says dont leave me.Manik says am here.You go to sleep.He makes her to sleep and he sits beside her.Nandini has clasped her hand with him.He sits beside her holding her hand.He completely understand her situation.No one can get over that thing so easily.He caresses her face withhis hand.Nandini falls asleep and Manik too sleeps like that.Manik is on the floor and his head is on her hand.

Nandini is the first one to wake.She finds something heavy on her hand and she sees Manik sleeping innocently,peacefully with a smile on his face.She smiled seeing him.She carefully takes her hand without disturbing his sleep but he wakes up.He sees her and she wishes him Good Morning..:) and he too says Morning..:)He says get ready,we need to go to college.But Nandini sits quietly.Manik sees and aks why are you sitting like that ? Nandini says Genius !! This is not my home.Where will I get clothes ?Manik says yeah !! I completely forgot about that.Ok fine I'll get ready and we will go to your house and you get ready and we will go to college.Ok ? Nandini says yeah !! sounds great.Manik goes to his room and gets freshen and they both leave to Nandini's house.Manik takes another route so that she doesn't remember any of those things at this hour.They both go inside and Nandini quickly gets ready and she prepares a quick breakfast to them and they both have it and they both leave to college.Nandini gets down before the college came bacause if their friends and anyone see they will think something is there and all.They want to avoid that situation.

Nandini go to her block while Manik to his.He goes and meets Cabir and asks him about Aliya.He says she didnt come yet.Mukti and Dhruv come and asks are you both ok today ? They say yeah ! and sorry about yesterday !! Mukti says come one...I understand.There is nothing to be sorry and she says Aliya called me and said she is not in Mumbai.She is in melbourne.She left for morning flight.You know her mom na.She called Aliya to there for some emergency.Manik says she suddenly left .She didnt inform anyone.Mukti says yeah !! she said sorry for that.She couldn't call everyone as she was busy in packing and all.Cabir says well I find that strange.Dhruv says me too.Manik says It's K.She will call once she reaches ther na? We will talk at that time.Mukti if she calls you ,tell her that I need to talk to her ASAP.MUkti asks why ? Missing her huh ? Manik says no.About our break up.Mukti and Dhruv are shocked.Mukti says What ? Manik says yeah !! am breaking up with her.Some issues came and it is not working between us.So tell her to call me ASAP.Please dont stress this matter.You know me na.Mukti says yeah !! Dhruv says think about it one more time.She loves you very much.Manik says Dhruv !! you know me right ? Dhruv says OK !!

Mukti says guys remember today is fresher's day !! We didnt prepare.We need to .Aliya is also not there.We need to do something.Manik says lets go then.They all head to Music room and practice for a while.Manik said I guess That's enough.Am tired.Let's move to Canteen.They all went to canteen.Mukti said she will come and you guys carry on.She is coming and she didnt see water on the ground.She is about to step on it but Nandini called Mukti !! watch out water is there on the floor ! Mukti sees and she sees Nandini and thinks she is not bad !! She smiles and says Thank you..:Nandini says it's K.Nandini starts to go and Mukti calls her and forwards her hand saying friends ? Nandini is like shocked at first but she forwards her hand and says Friends.They both smile.Mukti asks where are you going ? Nandini says No where.Just roaming around the college.Getting bored.Abhi comes there and says Hi beautiful !! to Mukti.Mukti says Shut up !! You never stop irritating me.Abhi says I like to irritate you,especially you.Leave about that will you be my date for today's party.Mukti is like what date and all ?Abhi then says you have to come with your date to party or else you can't come.This is a rule.Mukti says Stupid rules.Ok fine.I'll be your date for today.Trying is not a bad thing.Nandini says a thrid person is present over here.They laugh and all go to canteen.

Till then Manik and everyone get to know about the rule.Manik is thinking whom to take.Then he sees Nandini coming with Mukti and Abhi.Then it strikes him Nandini !! Yes Nandini will be my date for today !! Cabir eyes popped out seeing Mukti and Nandini and Abhi laughing together.He rubs his eyes for checking that it is true or dream.He aks Mukti !! You and Nandini laughing and coming and that too together.EVerything ok ?Mukti says stop your melodrama.She says him about what happened ? Cabir and Manik act like they dont know Nandini only !! Nandini and Abhi get well in their group.They all have some quality time together.They laugh and make jokes on each other

Manik aks Nandini directly Will you be my date for today ? Nandini is like shocked and she says yeah !! She is blushing damn hard.Mukti says wow !! Manik and Nandini huh ? Mukti asks Cabir who is your date?Cabir takes a rose from flower vase and go to Navya and asks Madhubala ji will you be my date for today ? Navya is like you are kiding ? She asks did you drink and came to college or what ? Everyone laughs listening her comment.Cabir says No..will you be my date or not.Navya says yeah !! OK.Some girl approaches Dhruv and asks will you be my date for today ? He says yeah !1 So now everyone is set for fresher's party with their date.

Precap : Lets rock and roll !!

My POV

This time it is related to friendship.Maybe you can feel it is not related to the part but it is related to life.Friends ...Maybe we can't define them.Friends are angels for me in short.Nothing compares the stomach ache you get from laughing with your best friends.Seriously nothing can be compares to that.Friends are the family we choose for ourselves.They are saviours,troublers,what not.But they are FRIENDS.Dont for get your old friends once you get new.Because old friends are gold and new friends are diamonds.But dont forget gold because to hold a diamond you always need a gold or something.

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SO ? How is it ? I know it is normal update without any dhamaka.But we should have break right ? So I gave break.Next update we will rock n roll.Do share your views and comment and like if you like it.DONT FORGET TO HIT LIKE.

Actually right now my PM is blocked.I will send once it is cleared.So PM's will be sent later.Sorry for inconvenience..😳😳

IMPORTANT NOTE : FROM NOW I WILL HAVE A PM LIST.SO WHOEVER WANTS PM JUST LET ME KNOWTHROUGH SCRAP/PM/COMMENT.NEXT PARTS WILL ONLY BE PMED TO THOSE PEOPLE.THE ONE WHO ARE IN MY BUDDY LIST WILL AUTOMATICALLY GET PM's.

Love,
Harika..Keep smiling..It looks good on yu..
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
aww felt bad for nandu
But its felt so god when manik took care of her
Multi and nandu bonding wow
And freshers party damn interesting
Aur ab is Alia ko kya hua
Cont soon
Plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeah it was awesome i loved it
Where aliya disappeared
Cont soon with manan romantic update

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