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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Have not forgotten.. yes, there is an update coming up soon. :)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: Mirabell
Have not forgotten.. yes, there is an update coming up soon. :)

Waiting writer ji...🤗

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Another 2 mts to go for it to become 29th April in India, I guess - the time diff between where I stay and in india is 2 hrs and 30 mts.

Will wait MB - dreaming about the update - will wake up early to read the update before going for work - until then sweet dreams of SC ARHI -

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Manasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: shyamidutt
Eagerly waiting :)

My patience is wearing out... How much time until we reach Mathura, Mira?

Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago

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maina95131

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Posted: 10 years ago

#765

Mira---Mohan is asking Are we there yet?

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#766

Mira, how long will Arnav drive from Delhi to Mathura????😔

He is tired Mira, give him a break soon.😳

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bhavis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#767

My haal on this story😳

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=450p7goxZqg[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#768

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Edited by Mirabell - 9 years ago

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Jignasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#769

What an update.?!?!?! This one had a bit of everything, and boy was I excited from start to finish.

First things first... YAY! He made it... and opposite to Khushi, I was jumping for joy. Though I loved her reaction. She couldn't believe whether it was a dream or real. But our Arnav set that straight... didn't he?

What you continue to do update after update, is give us an insight to what it running inside Khushi's mind. The thought process of a grieving widow. Those emotions is what makes me want her to take this slow. To fully embrace what she is feeling inside, when she is ready. Because Arnav is not going anywhere... His determination was palpable and contagious I might add, good for him. 👏

Arnav will help her fight her demons, if she allows him... as a friend. The open, no holds back conversation they had was penned perfectly. Every word, masterfully crafted, and only you can create that magic.

Now lets get to that kiss, shall we? Yaara... what was that? 😲 WOW, what a kiss, and the chemistry, the attraction was explosive... dil wants more scenes like these, but for now I will take this kiss, which oozed of desperation, yearning and passion.

What makes their relationship so special and unique is the connection they share. It was there when they were together for a week, it's there now ten years later.

I loved it, truly loved it... as always Brilliant job Writer Ji! 👏

Love always,

Your number one... Fan Girl!❤️

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#770

Well. You're not Harry. But that's not the point. The point, is that you've got magic.

You don't need to board a train and go to wizarding school to hone your talents and defeat the darkest wizard of all time, no. You just have to let your fingers fly across that keyboard and let the words spill onto the page, and there you have it. It's magic.

That was... breathtaking. Right from when he arrives like a mirage that slowly becomes 3D, to their conversation, the sense of anticipation that ticked at my figners.

Your words brought that sense of urgency to us, that... potent, burning desire. And there was something more. That something had been simmering underneath the surface this entire while, almost, almost spilling over and then... it did. It leaked out slowly at first in that heart stopping, erotic moment when he tilts his head... and then faster until it's a flood of emotion that is almost overwhelming.

And then, and then it broke my heart. Not a shattering, this was slow and oh so painful and just this lingering ache that won't leave me. The sight of Khushi with tears slipping out the corner of her eyes as she tries to flee yet again... oh, that image is so vivid. I still have that burning in my chest from that image, the feelings like this because I just can't describe it: