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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww aadu datz so sweet of u... ua comment means a lot to me... yeah dear u comment first fr d next post 😊... <3
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Congrats... to start a story...
continue soon...
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must say awesome start...
so new challenge waiting... for both father and daughter..

cant wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..
that is really different introduction of ASR ..simple guy woh loves his daughter immensely ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-2

Arnav was arranging their things on place when he got viren's call

Viren: yaar tera car abhi 5 min mein deliver ho jaayengaa... aur haan dinner bheju kya??

Arnav: nahi viren hum aaj bahar khane wale hai aur kuch shopping bhi karni.. tu bas en acha restaurant ka naam bata..

Viren: acha teek hai.. colony se 10 min ke doori mein ek Punjabi restaurant hai.. food is yummmyyy

Arnav: okkieee

Viren : aur haan kal subah jaldi aajana

Arnav: haan yaar teek hai :P

Then he heard d door bell dere comes his car...

After checking d car he walked to his angels room to wake her up n give d surprise

He saw her sleeping peacefully he slowly ran hi fingers on her feet... He chuckled when he frowned

Anu: papa

Arnav: anu udhoo... u have slept a lot... its already 7.. udho anu dekho papa yahan bore ho rahe haii.. chalo I have a surprise for u..

She rubbed her eyes cutely and extended her hands for her papa to pick her up.

Anu: papa udhaona mere legs mein bht dard ho raha haiudhao naa

Arnav: acha!!!! Nautanki chalo aao

Arnav picked her up and walked outside

Anu: papa surprise kya hai...

Arnav: who toh surprise haina baby

He opens the door anu here it is...

Anu: wooowww papa nayi car.. this is so nice

Chalo papa ghumke aate hai

Arnav: han han chalet hai pehle fresh ho jao aur phir bahar chalke dinner karte hai

Okkie papa n she kissed his cheeks

It was late when they reached home after the dinner and long drive + icecream for anu..

Anu was about to switch on the tv when arnav asked her to go sleep as they had to go for virens marriage tomorrow..

The next day arnav made anu ready for the wedding.. she looked extra cute in the lehenga... he kissed her forehead..

It was around 4pm when arnav and anu reached virens place

Viren gave a glare to arnav..

Viren: why did you come so early??

Arnav: sorry yaar we overslept :P

Viren: acha acha ab andar toh aajaoo

Arnav met virens parents and anu made friends there... it was time for the barath to leave to the wedding venue.. viren made anu sit on the ghodi and arnav loved it as he saw her dancing for the dhol music and her happy n cute face made his heart fill with pride

Part 3:

Khushi was

Making plans with the saali gang to steal the jootha when she heard others shouting

barath aa gayi hai

barath aa gayi hai

she ran to see her jijaji coming on ghodi.. after welcoming the groom and party th shaadi rituals started...

arnav always kept and eye on anu though he was njoying his friends company...

after stealing the shoes khushi was about to hide it when she heard a noise from behind...

anu: yeh aap kya kar rahi hai??? Woh viren uncle ke joothe hai

khushi turned around to find the source of a voice and saw a cute little girl staring at her with accusing eyes

she looked around not knowing wat to reply her

khushi: are aap to bohot cute hai... is lehenge mein bilkul pari lag rahe hai aap... aapka naam kya hai???(she tried to divert the topic)

Anu: mera naam anvika raizada hai... aap woh joothe chupa kyun rahi thi

Khushi(pinched her cheeks): oohooo anvika yeh toh rasm hai.. hum yeh joothe chupayenge phir aapke viren uncle humein paise denge yeh wapas paane keliyee

Anu: par who toh paise deke hi kharide haina joote dukaan se??

Khushi smiled at the girls cuteness..

Khushi: aap chaliye hamare saath hum aapko yeh rasam ke bare mein batate hai...

Khushi took anu with her they talked a lot and both of them loved each others company.

Khushi loved the little sweet girl anu as she called herself... they had a good time toghether until the girl told that she has to go to her papa and ran from there...

After the marriage and bidhai of jeevika every body parted to their places...

Anu had a lot to tell her papa that day about her new friends especially khushi didi..



hope u all like it :)

Edited by niya4333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally khushi !!!
so khushiji ne dosthi karliya anu se...
lovely update ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii
I just read first part and its wowww
I loved the concept its interesting
Where is khushi let's see as story proceeds
I like ruhi she is cute and I liked name anu for her
Bangalore sounds interesting
I'll read 2 and 3 soon and tell u.
Thanks for pm
Keep writing its beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you everybody for ua coments... am glad that u ppl liked it...
and aadu: better luck nxt tym dear :P

mishti_forever : plzz lemme knw ua feedback on 2 n 3... i like d way u give feedback in detail

thank you
Edited by niya4333 - 10 years ago
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Nice story
Loved it
P.S Plz add me to ur PM list

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