CHURA LIYA HAI TUMNE JO DIL KO (4) TEASER pg 128, new thread link pg1

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: dqno1

Aww. me too. sadly it is not what the majority wants 😕 but I will squeeze it in as much as I am able to 😃

dekho we love comedey but not Maan ka kachra 😆😆

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS AND FOR YOUR PATIENCE.

IT IS KIND OF HARD TO WRITE WHEN IT IS PAINFUL SO I HOPE YOU LIKE THE UPDATE

IT IS SHORTER THAN USUAL BUT FOR NOW THIS IS THE MOST I CAN TYPE

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

dekho we love comedy but not Maan ka kachra 😆😆

Kachra nahi kar rahi hu.. trying to show the maturing of two people once they fall in love.

The thinking of a know it all boy who is just thinking for himself and how he changes when attraction becomes love.

The thought process of an alhad nadaan Geet who is becoming a woman in love from a jumpity mast in her world innocent girl.

Shayad acche se nahi ho rha ab tak par koshish jaari hai 😃

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zida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#525

thank god maan ki misunderstandng dor ho gai. And he again come on his love track.hope maan geet ko us k love ka ehsass jald kara de.

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sasi

@ksasi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Lovely part.

Finally man's misunderstanding is cleared.

Waiting to know what bomb daadi will throw now.

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Varthyadi000

@varthyadi000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Awesome update loved it so much
Thank god maan missunderstand is atlasr over and he came back to his romantic way.seeing maan geet is rememberingtia chi scence poor geet she is blushing and our maan is happy seeing her.dadi maa heard maan saying I love u to geet and she is planing of their marriage also
write in your way only I am loving it somuch

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11j25sam

@11j25sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

geet ko pyaar hua ikraar hua hai

per woh sochti hai ki maan kisi aur ko pyar karta hai

ab aayega majaa

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ramarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#529

lovely update ji😃
finally maan ki mu clear...dev belongs to naina!!!!!!!!
now geet can belong to him😆
itni saari photos😃
geet daadima bond ...lovely!!!!!!
maan back to me...hot and handsome mode😆
tumne takiye ki bhi sun li😆
maan ka proposal...ilu ilu ka chakkar...dadi ki mu😆...already waiting😃

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mauaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#530

because of geet dadima n servants are also happy.. but i am afraid what will happen when they will come to know abt her pregnancy?? ofcourse maan would be scattered but dadima would b also hurt na..

aavi, how did geet get pregnant? kuch to batao..

maan is all set to make geet fall for him.. but would that b ok? geet is also getting affected.. but would that b ok?

i don't know y, but this story always ends up me questioning me "would that b ok?"