Ariya FF::Kismat Se Tum Ham Ko Mile Ho..Thread 2 link onpg 107 on 20/2 - Page 8

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We will updt on Monday di
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Originally posted by: rosamale

This is really a great news๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I am looking forward to read this story.
jeharshu,I can now ask you to update soon๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†


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Originally posted by: cuteariya

interesting concept
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cant get enough of ariya โค๏ธ โค๏ธ


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first of all welcome to the writing world jeharshu...
wow you and sonu didu writing as joint ff...
interesting...
prologue is so tempting...

and the way you portrayed cs was wonderful...
awesome one...
and the story title is so tempting...
do continued soon...
and thanks for the pm...
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

first of all welcome to the writing world jeharshu...

wow you and sonu didu writing as joint ff...
interesting...
prologue is so tempting...

and the way you portrayed cs was wonderful...
awesome one...
and the story title is so tempting...
do continued soon...
and thanks for the pm...


Thanks for your warm welcome di
Nd also thanks for liking the concept
We will update soon di
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice cncpt
cs s also good
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Originally posted by: chand91

nice cncpt

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<div>cs s also good
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Part 1:-

One girl sleeping on her bed..her bed is full of heavy books which are scattered here n there..

Her mother..manisha mukherji enter in her bedroom..n look to her..

Manisha:hey bhagwan..ye kya..??riya..riya..utho..aise sota he kya koi..??sare bed pe kitabe..hey bhagwan kya hoga iss ladki ka..?

Riya means that girls hear her mothers voice..she irritedly pull pillow over her head..

Manisha:riya utho..

Riya:mom..plz..i will get up..u go..

Manisha:muze pata he..tum yahi kahogi..aur nahi uthogi..

She pull the pillow..

Riya wake up lazily..

Manisha:ab jaldi fresh ho ja..aur breakfast ke liye aao..

Riya get up from bed..n goes to washroom..

After sometime she comes to breakfast table where her mother n grandfather waiting for her..

Riya(smile):good morning grandpa..

Riya's grandpa:good morning beta..

Riya n all started taking breakfast..

Riya's grandpa:so..aaj ka kya special programme?

Riya:aaj meri best friend roshni se milane jana he..

Riya's grandpa(smile n wink at her):so party..hmm??

Riya(wink back him):may be..

Manisha(riya's mom):riyaa..

Riya:ohh..mom..dont worry..i wont be late..

Manisha smile..n shook her head in disbelief..

Riya finish her breakfast..bid bye to her mom n grandpa..n come to hotel where she n roshni had decided to meet..

She saw roshni is sitting with another girl.

Riya(smile):hey rosh..

Roshni(sadly):hi..ri..

Riya:kya hua..??

She look to another girl ..

Roshni:riya..ye he aayesha..aayesha rathod..ye meri best friend he..ham sath me college me the..aur aayesha..ye he riya..riya mukherji..meri best friend..ham kuch din pehale hi  mile..par riya kab meri best friend ban gayi muze pata hi nahi chala..

Riya(smile):hi..aayesha..

Aayesha:hi..riya..nice to meet u..

Riya:me too..

Aayesha:rosh..ab batayegi..tu ne aise urgent kyo bulaya he hame yaha..??

Riya:ha rosh..ab bata bhi de..ke ye sad chehara kyo banake rakha he..?

Rosh(with cried eyes):u know na..rajesh..

Riya:ha usaka kya..??

Rosh(with tears):u know..usaka extra martial affair chal raha he..aur na jane woh ek sath kitne ladkiyo ke sath usake relations he..

Aayesha:this is disgusting..

Riya:really sach a disgusting man..he is nothing worth of ur tears..rosh..dont cry for him..

Aayesha:u must divorce him..n kick out him from ur life..

Riya:yes..aayesha is right..

Roshni:mein bhi a buss jaise insaan ke sath rehkar apni life waste nahi karna chahti..issiliye meine usse divorce ke bare me bola..toh usane divorce dene se saf inkar kar diya.

Aayesha:cheap man..usse bolo ke tumhe divorce de de..aur fir jitney chahe affair kare..

Roshni:woh kehta he..ke mein usse red handed kisi ladki ke sath pakad ke dikhau..usake khilaf sabut dikhau..tabhi woh muze divorce dega..

Aayesha:oh..bas ye he..ye kaam to aise chutakiya me ho jayega..

Roshni:kaise..?

Aayesha:jaise ke tumne bataya..woh hamesha ladkiyo ke piche bhagta rehta he..suppose koi aise ladki jo hamari help kare..toh ham usse red handed pakad sakte he..

Riya:gr8..idea..par aise ladki kyon he jo hamari help karegi..??

Roshni n aayesha both look to riya..

Riya(shocked):what..??me..??no ways guys..

Roshni(with sad voice):plz riya..

Riya took deep breath..

Riya:ohkkk..

Aayesha n riya made a full proof plan..

Riya call rajesh(rosh's hubby)..n told her she found his profile on social networking site..she got his phone number there..n she feels he must be very interesting person..so she wants to meet him..

Rajesh easily get ready for this..riya told him to meet her in "AR hotel"..next day..

Next day:-

Next day as per the girls plan..riya get ready waring a black backless n knee length dress..which reveling her skin..

She come to AR hotel..

AR Hotel:-

One man entered in hotel..he directly went to reception..but don't found anyone there..this was enough to boil his blood..

At the same time receptionist come there running..

Receptionist:sorry..sir..

Man(angrily):what..sorry.. ?u r receptionist..n how could u leave like this..if some guest come n they want information who will attend them..?or I have to do this work now..

Receptionist:sorry sir..i just 2 minutes..

Man(angrily):2 minutes or 2 seconds..that don't matter to me..u have to do ur work properly..otherwise u can leave for lifetime..

Receptionist:sorry sir..this wont happen again..

Man:u better to be..n if this happen again u will see urself get fired from this job..

Receptionist gulp her saliva fearly..n nodded..

Man:now where are the childerns from st.john school..?they are coming to see our theme park..

Receptionist:sir..they r waiting for u in lobby..

Man turn to lobby..

Shree(assistant of that man) look to monica(receptionist)..

Shree:monica..u know na sir..how could u behave like this..?

Monica:sorry shree sir..but I got urgent phone from my home..but sir..even don't bother to listen or explain me anything..

Shree:monica..u know na this hotel n the theme park is everything for sir..he cant tolerate any carelessness regarding to this..dont let this happen again..

Saying shree left behind that man..

Yes u guys guess it right..that man is our handsome hunk..jispe ham sab marte he..Arjun Suryakant rawte..the ower to "AR Hotel"..

Here arjun come to the school children..n started showing them the theme park..n explaining them that how this theme park will get ready within some month..n it will be the largest theme park for children in world..

This theme park is his ambition of life..

At the same time riya entered in hotel..

She saw a man(she could only see his back)explaining something to school kids..

He ignore it..n about to go..at the same time she hear a girl yelling on that man..

Liza..the crazy secretary of arjun come to him..

Liza(crying loudly):sir..this is not fare..its..not at all fare..i m angry on u..very much angry..u cheat me..u cheat me..

Arjun(irritedly n angrily):excuse me..??i cheat u..??r u out of ur mind..??

Here riya's attension get snatch by liza's loud cried voice..

She come to them..

Liza:u cheat me..everynight u come in my dream..but last night u don't come..u cheat me..

Arjun get angry hearing this crazy babber of liza..

Here riya only hear "u cheat me " words from liza's mouth..

She look to arjun angrily..n think arjun really cheat liza..she decide to give him some piece of mind..

Riya(to arjun):hey..mister..how dare u to play with feelings of such innocent girl..how could u cheat her..u r such a cheap man..

Arjun(angrily to riya):excuse me..miss..whoever u r..its none of ur business..n u even don't know what matter is..

Riya(angrily):I even don't want to know..tumhare jaise cheap insaan ki mein shakal bhi na dekhu..pata nahi tum jaise logo ko kya milata he ladki ka dil todke..

Arjun:hey..u..

Riya(angrily cutting him in mid):u..dont explain anything now..aur agar kuch karna he na to hiss ladki (liza)se mafi mango..for cheating her..u wont be happy in ur life for hurting such innocent girl..

Saying this she goes towards rajesh who is entering..

Here arjun get very angry on riya..

Arjun:what the hell this girl is..??apne aapko kya samazti he pata nahi..??mere hi hotel me aake muze sunake gayi..woh bhi bina kisi baat ke..idiot girl..

Arjun then signal shree to take away liza..

Shree took away liza..

Here next second arjun saw riya talking to rajesh..holding his hand..n behaving like flirterious girl..

He feels how cheap she is..

Arjun(in mind):muze samaza rahi thi..now see..she herself clinging on that bloody man..

He again try to concentrate on kids..n started giving them information related to theme park..

Inside hotel..

Riya n rajesh(roshni's hubby)come inside hotel..

Riya:so rajesh..come lets go in room..

Rajesh:room..??

Riya:yes..we can talk there freely..

Rajesh ke man me toh laddu foot rahe he..itni khubsurat aur hot ladki usse aisa bol rahi he..he is on cloud9..

 

Riya book the room for both of them..n take him inside room..

Riya push rajesh on bed..seducingly caressing his cheek..

Riya(lovingly n seducingly):baby..lets do it now..

Rajesh get shocked but happy to..

Riya:lets make it out..

Rajesh(pulling her to him):I m ready baby..i too want u badly now..

Riya smile..

Riya:just some minutes baby..i want to use washroom.

Rajesh:sure..

Riya smile seducingly..n goes to bathroom..

She immigiately call aayesha..n told her that their plan is working..rajesh is with her..

Riya:Ayesha..now u plz come fast..i cant handle this bas** man anymore..

Aayesha:don't worry ri..i will be there..

Aayesha rushes to AR hotel..

Aayesha come to hotel..

Aayesha:hey..plz give me keys of room no 501..

Receptionist(monica):sorry man..i cant give u..

Aayesha:don't u know who I m..??just give me the keys..fast..

Monica:sorry mam..i cant..its the question of privacy of our guests..

At the same time arjun come there..n saw aayesha argueing with monica..

Arjun:aayesha..??

Aayesha:arjun bhai..plz ask her to give me keys of room no 501..its very urgent..

Arjun:but..how could u ask like this..??n what urgent..??

Aayesha:plz bhai..i will explain u everything later..help me just now..its question of my best friend's life..

Arjun took deep breath n again look to aayesha..

Aayesha(with pleading look):bhai plz..just trust ur sister..

Arjun:ok..but I will also be there with u..

Aayesha nodded..n message riya that she is coming..n to start there plan..

Arjun took the keys  n he n aayesha come to the room no 501..

Here riya saw aayesha's message..n come out of washroom..

Rajesh waiting for her impatiently..

Riya hold his hand n pull him to her..she took him to bed..make him lye..n she get over him n started placing her fingers over his face..

Aayesha n arjun come to the room..they slowly open the door by there keys..

Rajesh n riya too busy..or u can say riya keep him so busy that he don't understand the door of room is slightly open..here aayesha started clicking pictures of riya n rajesh..rajesh is kissing on riya's cheeks..n about to kiss her on lips..but she giggle naughtly..n goes away..he pull her to him..

All this close moments were capture by aayesha's camera..

Aayesha meaasage riya that its done..

Riya hear her mobile beep..

Here rajesh is trying to kiss her..but she just excuse herself..n took the mobile n saw the message..

Riya(making a worried face):omg..rajesh..i have to go..

Rajesh:what happen baby..?

Riya:family..problem..i m sorry baby..i have to go urgently..

Rajesh(make face):but baby..

Riya:oh..baby..we will meet soon.. I promise..i will call u..n then I will make u happy..

Rajesh smile n nodded..

She hurrily come out of hotel room..

N Here after seeing riya n rajesh like this in hotel room..arjun thinks riya is such a cheap girl..

Arjun(in mind):how cheap girl this is..thodi der pehale muze sikha rahi thi..aur ab khud kya kar rahi he..??disgusting girl..

As per plan aayesha leave from there immigiately after clicking pics..so that rajesh don't get any doubt..

Riya come out of room n saw arjun..but she ignore him..n started walking towards exit..

Arjun(to riya..walked after her):hey..u..??wait..

Riya turn to look him..

Arjun:u r a cheap girl..thodi der pehale muze bol rahi thi ke mein kaise behave karu aur ab khud kaise behave kar rahi ho..

Riya:look..mr..u don't know anything..

Arjun:wait..wait..i even don't want to know anything..

Saying this arjun take out his phone from pocket..n click her photo..

Riya(angrily):hey u..??why u click my photo..??

Arjun:issilye nahi ke tum me muze koi interest he..iss liye ke tum iss hotel me fir se kadam na rakh sakho..

Riya:iss ghatiya jagah mein khud hi kabhi na aau..

Saying this she leave from there..

Arjun call the watchman..

Watchman come..arjun shows him picture of riya..

Arjun:ye ladki iss hotel me fir se muze dikhani nahi chahiye..aur agar ye muze hotel me dikhi..toh tum iss hotel me nazar nahi aaoge..samaze ya samazau..??

Watchman nodded..

 

After almost half month..

Roshni has ask riya n aayesha to meet her at her place..

Roshni:guys..finally rajesh ne muze divorce de diya he..

Riya:that's gr8..but u look sad rosh..

Aayesha:ab kya hua rosh..?

Roshni:apni shadi tut gayi..aur mein kaise khush reh sakti hu guys..

Riya:oh..come on rosh..that rajesh was really disgusting man..tumhe uss jaise insaan ki koi zarurat nahi..

Aayesha:exactly riya is saying true..

Riya:waise kya band bajayi he hamne uss rajesh ki..

Aayesha started laughing..n gives hi5 to riya..roshni to join them..

Riya(with smile):rosh..u r now free bird..u can live life on ur own way..dont think about that man now..

Aayesha:yes..now u concentrate on ur carrer..that man don't deserve u at all..jo bhi hua accha hi hua..

Rosh:thank u guys..tum dono the issliye ye sab ho sakha..khas karke riya tum..tumne bahot help ki..apne aapko kahtare me dal ke meri help ki..

Riya:oh come on..

Aayesha:yes riya..rosh is right..its really thanks to u..ke ham uss rajesh ko sabak sikha paye..

Riya:guys..dosti me no..sorry..n no thanks..

All smile..

Riya:but guys..plz..ye baat meri mamma tak nahi pahochni chahiye..u know her..

Rosh:don't worry ye baa tab yahi khatam..mr.rajesh n all things related to her are finish for forever..

Aayesha:so..its party time..

The trio girls spend their time together..n have fun..

Precap:-

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Superb starting
Love it
Love Ariya's first meet
Pls continue soon
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