FF..~ My Dream Girl ~ Chapter 2 / 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello friends..
mee SONAL..is going to write a new FF for u all..
so hope u all like it..
" Yaha sabhi naksh ko bahut pyaar karte hain..
aur saare ff bhi unke liye hi hote hain..
but i want to dedicate this ff to our HIRAN..
jinhone NAKSH ko banaya..
hope i will not hurt anyone's feeling here..
but i will try to do full justice with my story.."
..so let me start with some short summary..
" KEHTE hai ki jab hum kisi se pyaar karte hain.
toh saari duniyaa ko bhool jaate hai..
bas usi ka khayaal dil me basa rehta hai..
har pal ye aankhe apne pyaar ko dekhna chahti hai..
use pyaar karna chahti hai..
uska dil me basana chahti hai..

Toh yahi kuch haal hai hamare hero KARAN ka..ji ha KARAN MEHRA..a sweet young..dashing..and smart boy..who wants to be a actor..but life itni asaan nahi hai mere dost..jitna ki sabko dikhta hai..yaha bahut si keemat chukani padti hai apne sapno ki..
aur agar KARAN ji ka sapna..TELEVISION QUEEN HINA ..ji haa HINA KHAN ke saath juda ho..toh toh aate hai STORY ME TWIST..
toh kaise milenge KARAN aur HINA..aur kaise banenge wo NAKSH..
ye jaanne ke aapko padhna hoga..ye ff..

SO FRIENDS THIS IS A SHORT INTRO
HOPE U LIKE THIS CONCEPT..
PLS DO COMMENTS OR ATLEAST PRESS LKE BUTTON..
WAITING FOR SOME REVIEW..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INTRODUCTION..
KARAN..
A middle class boy..who came in MUMBAI to become an ACTOR..only because of his love HINA KHAN a television supar star..
once in a life he wants to meet her..he wants to talk to her..he wants to be with her..
his love for hina is more than anything else..
so kya hoga jab karan ka sapna hoga poora aur wo banega AKSHARA KA NATIK..

HINA..
As u already read..she is superstar of T.V. industry..she is beautiful..cute..innocent..kind hearted..and a down to earth girl..with a golden heart..
her work is worship for her..
hina's first show was super duper hit..and now one new director want to make a brand new show YEH RISHTA KYA KEHLATA HAI..with hina as female lead..
so kaise banegi hina NAITIK KI AKSHARA..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
avinaksh thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oohhh myyy God! !!! this is sooo amazing.. unique and completely different! !! would definitely love to read this track... plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oyee hoyee u wrote introduction.😛 ..must say its really nic amazing unqic ...👍🏼pls wait na karao jaldi se first part update karo dream boy ko dream girl se milayo ...badly waiting for update ..pls pls fo update I liked a lot congoo songoo
Sry for late comments abhi dekha na...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaksh

oohhh myyy God! !!! this is sooo amazing.. unique and completely different! !! would definitely love to read this track... plz plz plz update soon

thanks avi for ur comment..it means a lot for me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Oyee hoyee u wrote introduction.😛 ..must say its really nic amazing unqic ...👍🏼pls wait na karao jaldi se first part update karo dream boy ko dream girl se milayo ...badly waiting for update ..pls pls fo updateI liked a lot congoo songoo

Sry for late comments abhi dekha na...

thank u soo much ruchi yaar..i was badly waiting for my friends comment.. :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...
Would luv to read more..
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Nice start...
Would luv to read more..
Cont soon

thanks dear for commenting and liking the intro
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART..1..
" And the Dada Saheb Phalke Award goes to Miss HINA KHAN..whole crowd start clapping for her..she quickly came on the stage to receive the award with a big smile on her face..and when she got that award she became emotional..her eyes filled with tears..
when a boy suddenly appear on the stage and
said" pls hina mai tumhari inn khoobsurat aankho me ye aansu nahi dekh sakta.."
whole audience became shocked that boy..and start calling his name..KARAN..KARAN..KARAN..
without wasting time Hina hugs him..
karan-i love u..i am very happy for u..ki tumhe ye award mila..
hina- i love u too..chalo utho kitni der tak sote rahoge yaar..subah ho gayi hai..
and one spot boy throw a mug of water on his face..
" chal uth ja..aaj bhi tera wahi same to same wala sapna.."
karan got up from his bed..
karan-kya yaar rituraj tu hamesha main time par mujhe kyu jaga deta hai..kitna accha sapna dekh raha tha..
( rituraj is karan's roommate and a struggler like him..they both have a same aim to became an actor..)
rr- ha wahi sapna jo tu pichle ek saal se dekh raha hai..teri hina ko award aur tu jakar use wish kar raha hai..grow up yaar kuch toh naya dekh..
karan- dekta hu na uske saath iss india ka sabse hit serial ka sapna..
rituraj- jo kar ye kabhi poora hone wala nahi..dekh lena hina ke saath usi show me tujhse pehle mai nazar aaunga..
karan-ha ha zaroor aayega..ek supporting actor bankar..
rr- bad kar warna roz ki tarah aaj tujhe mai nayi khabar nahi batane wala
karan ( happily )-khabar..hina ki jaldi bata naa..pls pls pls
rr-batata hu..batata hu..pehle promise kar ki khabar sunne ke baad tu mere room se apni iss love girl ki saari pictures hata dega..
karan-never..yaha se ek bhi pic nahi hategi..ye room mera bhi hai..
( there is small room where whole wall is decorated with hina's pic)
rr-toh theek hai bye bye..
karan quickly stop him.." accha teek hai khabar bata phir mai sochta hu.."
rr-ha toh sun..ek producer hai Rajan Shahi..
karan-sorry yaar ab mujhe koi screen test nahi dena
rr-tu poori baat toh sun..rajan sir ek naya show bana rahe hain..jiske liye unhe main lead ki zaroorat hai..
karan- ha toh kya karu mai..maine faisla kar liya hai..show karunga toh..
rituraj stop him..
rr-toh kar na apni hina ke saath
karan-matlab ?
rr-matlab ye ki rajan shahi hina khan ke liye hi..ek naye fresh lead ki talash kar rahe hain..
karan ( shocked )- kya..? tu sach bol raha hai ?
rr-ha yaar maine toh audition ke liye form bhi fill kar diya hai..kar jana bhi hai
karan- aur mere liye ?
rr-dekh bhai batana mera farz tha so maine kar diya..ab kuch mehnat tu bhi kar le..waise ab tak saare forms khatam ho gaye honge..bhai hina the soap queen ke saath lead play karna hai koi choti baat nahi hai..
karan- par tu meri kuch toh help kar sakta hai
rr-ha ek kaam ho sakta hai jaha forms mil rahe hai waha try kar 🤣 filmcity me
karan -wo toh mai karoonga hi..tujhe ye batane ki zaroorat nahi hai..
rituraj- ok..bye mai toh chala apne audition ki practice par..by this he went from there..
karan got up from bed and came near hina's pic
k- mai tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu..iss naye show ke liye toh mai hi tumhara hero banunga aur hamari jodiiss duniya par raj karegi..he trace his hand on al those pictures..
when the news paper man throw the news paper inside the room..karan took it start reading the headlines..after some time his face lightened up like a bright sun..
karan-wow ! hina ki news..naye show ke audition ke liya khud hina as a selector aaj yaha GATEWAY OF INDIA ke paas aa rahi hai..wow..mai zaroor aaunga audition ke liya..
he happily show this news to rituraj..
karan-dekha..tu mera saath na de toh kya hua bhagwaan mere saath hai..mujhe hina ke saath kaam karne se koi nahi rok sakta
rr- good sapne dekhne me koi problem nahi hai..btw tune shayad ye nahi padha ki waha par hina sirf ek ladke ke name ko select karegi aur sirf usi ka audition hoga..aur itne ladko me tu itna lucky nahi ho sakta..mai toh direct main audition hi dunga..u know i am best
karan-ok dekhte hai..
he start getting ready for his one lucky boy audition..

I EVENING...
the stage in all ready to select the new her for hina..thousand of boys came at the place for audition or for hina...so as karan..
he reached at the time on the spot with a small chocolate box as a gift fo his hina..
he read all the banners of rajan shahi' new show " YEH RISHTA KYA KEHLATA HAI ".. with a tag line " shadi ke baad shru hogi kya meri prem kahani " " kau hoga akshara ka naitik ? "hina's pic on the top..
karan ( st)- don't worry hina..mai hu naa..akshara ke liye naitik toh mai hi banunga..
with this he gave a killer smile..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so after some time..now its time to start the audition..the host start telling the rules of audition..where only one lucky boy will be selected by hina through a chit..then she will take audition and gave him direct call for the main audition otherwise they will select with another auditions..
host- so all the boys ready for auditions..our heroine our lovely hina khan is here with and about to come on the stage..
when a big black car take place there..all boys going crazy to see hina's car..and ran towards her car..
by this karan got a chance to stand in front of the stage..
here in the car..
hina came with her best friend and costar rashmi...
hina-hey bhgwaan itni bheed..rashmi mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai..aur ye sab ladke bhi hai..
ras- ha toh ab audition toh lena hi hoga naa..ja.
hina-nahi ye sab mujhse nahi hoga..mai kaise kroongi
ras- kya yaar tu toh apne show ke character ke jaise hoti ja rahi hai..ekdum darpok
hina- aisa kuch nahi bas wo mai bheed dekhkae darr gayi aur kuch nahi..par kya tu mera ek kaam karegi ?
ras- ha bol naa..
hina- itne dino baad mujhe mauka mila hai aaj bahar nikalne kaa..iss time ko mai akele enjoy karna chati hu..kaam ke chakkar me kuch nahi ho pata..tu aisa kar tu meri jagah audition ke liye chali jaa..aur mai kal subah tak ad shotin ke liye time par aa jaungi..
ras- tu pagal hai kya..audition aur mai never..aur iske liye tu raat bhar bahar..ye toh bilkul bhi nahi...
hina-pls rashmi..sirf aaj..
ras-ok..par tu rajan sir se kya kahegi ?
hina- keh doongi mujhe fever ho gaya tha..
ras- theek hai..
rashmi came out of the car while the boys are searching for hina..
karan became sad tha hina is not there for auditions..and all participents too
rashmi came on the stage and told the reason of hina'a absence to everyone..and by this she start to choose one chit of lucky winner..
karan is standing with a sad face " kya yaar ek mauka mila tha tumhe pehli baar aapne saamne dekhne ka..par wo bhi bhagwaan ne cheen liya..
dissapointedly he went back from the auditions..
here hina said to her driver..that she want to be all alone tonight so no disturbance for her..and he will pick her in the morning only when she call him..she said him to leave her at a alone place where she can walk and do fun without any disturbance..and driver did the same
here rashmi select read that one name from the chit..and it is for our lucky boy..KARAN MEHRA..but karan is not there for audition..and by his bad luck another boy with the same name gave the audition..and not get selected for show..
AT NIGHT near 11 pm..
driver drop hina on the juhu beach..where she can enjoy her peace night..
she came out of the car..but there was so many people who can recognise her specially boys so she hide her face with a dupatta..
hina -i will call u in the mornin ok
driver-ji madam..
and he too went from there
hina( st)- aah kitne dino baad aaj mai araam se ghoom sakungi..wo bhi bina kisi ke disturbace ke..no work only peace..
she hide her face again and start walking on the beach..watching the becautiful sea..beautiful sky..and listening the sound of water..there were many couples..sitting together and talking to eachother..
hina ( st )- kitne pyaare lagte hain ye sab ek saath..pata nahi kab milega mujhe mera jeevan saathi..yu jhoot ka pyaar kab tak karti rahoongi..she was totally lost in her thought..
when he saw a boy sitting on a rock and throw stone in the sea..crying and blabbering smething..
hina ( st )- ye yaha baithkar ru kyu rahe hai ? paas jau kya ? par kahi mujhe pehchaan liya toh yaha sabko pata chal jayega..aur phir subah tak ka mera plan..par mai yu kisi ko rota hua kiase dekh sakti hu..apne proffession se hi mai kisi kop happy kar du to kitna accha rahega..she hide her face fully with her duppatta ( except eyes )
she quickly came near the rock..
hina- hi..
( as we all know who he is ? )
kara quickl recgnise her voice " hina "
by this she became surpised..
hina -wow aap bhi meri tarah hina ke fan hai ?
he gain became sad
hina (st )-bach gayi agar isne pehchaan liya hota th gadbad ho jati..
and she came and sit beside him..
PRECAP..karan spend whole night with hina without knowing her...
SO FRIENDS THIS IS A FIRST PART HOPE U ALL LIKE IT
PLS DO COMMENT IF U REALLY LIKE IT
THANKS FOR READING IT..
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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