AKDHA OS:Ek cup coffee plz.....

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys, it's my 1st os.I hope u guys like it. "One black coffee"she ordered,while pulling her dupatta close 2 her neck,to get enough warmth due to the rain."One black coffee plz."a guy shouted right after her,she turned 2 see who it was,he passed a mischievous smile&winked at her. She just rolled her eyes&looked away.she felt his gaze on her."kya hai?"she asked annoyingly."kuch bhi toh nahi",he snigerred."stop looking at me"she said irritatingly."oh hello!Miss India get a life"he replied with agony."U Jerk!she took hold of her coffee&drankand paid the bill and went away by giving a glare at him."kya ladki hai yaar,itni teekhi"he smiled&went away.******walking in to her house she saw his dad talking 2 a middle aged man&a boy."Oh Jodha u r home"her father said while her jaw dropped&eyes popped out seeing the same coffeewala guy in her house."Go in.. U r mom want's 2 talk 2 u"he pushed her in 2 kitchen,while her eyes r fixed on the guy who winked at her.she just glared at him&went in."MA..MA"she shouted."sshh...dhere se bolo Jodha"her mom scolded."Mama yeh sab kya hai,aur woh kya kar raha hai"she said whiningly."koun? Jalal,Tujhe pata hain?her mom asked with exictment."yea kind off...lekin woh kya kar raha hai mom yaha"she asked angrily.Her mom pulled her 2 her room.Jalal's eye fell on her while her expressions was full of annoyance&she suddenly disappeared.*****"Agar yeh joke hai toh mujhe accha nahi laga ma,main us insaan se shadi nahi karungi,never in my worst dreams."she whinned."Don't say anything just wear the saree&come down,before she could say her mom left room. *******"Dekho i m not interested in u"she said 2 him once they reached terrace."Oh really,why?he grinned,aren't I cool?" he walked up 2 her."Nope"she said making a face."fine not cool but handsome toh hoon na" he said by taking another step close 2 her."Did ever saw u r face in mirror?"she said with loads of attitude.He smirked at her &moved close 2 her.she just stepped back seeing him coming closer."Look at me"he said huskily at looked at her lovingly.she looked up at him,his eyes spoke volumes.He took a step closer and she gulped and moved back untill her back touched the wall. He slowly placed his palm on her slender waist and pulled her close"I MISSED U ALOT,U HAVE CHANGED VERY MUCH."He gently kissed on her quivering lips and released her and while going back he said" tmrw will meet u same cafe".She just looked at his retreating figure.************** "MA...yeh Jalal koun hai?"she questioned her mother placing her head on her mom's lap."Pehchana nahi, tumhare papa ke best frnd Humayun uncle ka beta,the one who promised to...before she could say."ONE WHO PROMISED TO MARRY ME WHEN HE GETS OLD ENOUGH&WILL TAKE ME AWAY FROM EVRY1 WHOEVER TRY TO DEPART ME FROM HIM"jodha said smiling with tears in her eyes.Jodha remeber's how he promised 2 marry in front of evry 1&ran behind her car when she was leaving 2 Mumbai.A tear came out from her eyes."Yes, he was her jalal about whom she used to dream,think&loved from her childhood."One black coffee plz."she said glumly."One black coffee for me 2 plz".she closed her eyes,feeling his voice touching her heart."JALAL"she turned around.He smiled &said "Wow u still remembered my name?"he said."I m sorry Jalal"she said&a tear rolled down."Hey honey,why r u crying"he said with lots of love."Forgive me Jalal, I m sorry for yesterday's behaviour"&she just him tight&he just wiped her tears and kissed on her forehead.Just then their coffee came."Hey honey look at me,have u r coffee"he pushed the cup towards her.They both drank their coffee &cappuichino and left the cafe.They both sat in his car and drove 2 her place.While she was about 2 get out ,he dragged her and cupped her face and asked"LET'S GET MARRIED NA HONEY!"She blushed&made a small nod.He saw cream at the end of her lips,he just came close 2 her and looked at her lips and licked the cream and gave a peck on her rosy lips.***************** "I love u honey"he said while she passed a hot black coffee towards him."How much"?she asked while having her last sip."hmm...let me have my coffee first and i will show u how much i love u"he said slyly.She just ran from there&was about 2 close the door when he just pushed the door &winked at her and latched the door.He slowly came closer 2 her and whispered "Let me show u how much I love u" and picked her and walked towards bed.**************** HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT.

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paridhiloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awesome it doesnt felt like u have written this os first time . So here jodha was not knowing that jalal was his dream prince . When jalal promised jodha that he marry her in future so they were small at time (i think isnt it????)
But u were awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful OS😳
nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww...dis was a adorbzzz os...love it
#with_love_bubbles ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx for this adorable & cute OS😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely OS
jalal come back to keep his promise... aawww so nice...beautifully written
thanks dhara
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wooWw..dr..its vryyy beautiful...great job.. 😉
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Elsie
Awesome S
Choo chweet...jallu didn't forgot his first love awww!!!
Plzzz accept my buddy request
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os mast hai. Love u

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