Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40 - Page 16

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Hullooo! Omg I think we never did wn up talking about this... Whoops sorry for that! But but I'm so glad you liked it and commented. As usual, you love me so much and so you've praised me endlessly but you and reya are much better writers okay? Like I'll never get there. I guess Manan just are such a beautiful couple that once you start on them, you just never want to end. )

Hoping you like the next chapter too! Thankyou so much for your support again my love <3

Twinkie...Stop being modest lady ! like it's a good trait to have but one must recognize their awesomeness, right Pressha ? Don't we praise you enough for you to believe us ? lol

Originally posted by: Preeshaxo

Kept this hidden from me 😔 😆
Erm I'm sorry but that will never be the case. Reya's writing is love so I will agree on that. I've missed reading her view on everything too but girl you just be shying away from how talented you really are!
They are, story is so refreshing. You can't help but fall in love with them.
I just read it. It was breathtakingly beautiful! It wasn't lengthy at all, I love long essays so I'll never complain on the length 😳
I loved how you spoke so in depth about their eyes. Their eyes have always told their own story and I'm so happy you've added it in yours, your depth in detail of the small things is just everything.
Manik's guilt is so heartbreaking but I have a feeling Nandini will fight this and make him her old Manik again. I have faith in her and I trust you 😳
Can't wait for the next update!

Awww Pressha..you so the sweet. Last week was so suckish cause i was so busy with university. I missed reading and analyzing Manan last week too.

Very very nice yaar...!! Awesome update...!!

I am waiting for next update...!!

Originally posted by: PrettyAaShu

Very very nice yaar...!! Awesome update...!!

I am waiting for next update...!!

Thank you so much! Your kind words mean a lot <3

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Omg no no ... haha no writer and I don't plan on becoming one either. This message was truly very sweet. I really don't know how to thankyou for all the sweet words <3 Hope you continue liking the story as it progresses :)

Originally posted by: ishitaa22

<div>Well dats a shame really...cause u have sooo much potential in u, i mean like u trully are amazing n have the talent to move people wid ur words. The world outside dis forum is being deprived of ur magic. M nt dat gud wid words...otherwise wuld have found another cool way of praising u!
N u dnt need to thank me really...ur jst so gud ki i really cant stop myself.
Just keep enchanting us wid dat magical mind of urs...😃😊[/DIV]

Omg this is just too sweet... Like seriously I don't even think I have the right words to even thank you anymore because I just don't know what to say anymore. I feel so blessed to know that I could really make you feel that my writing is of such a standard. Honestly, I still have so much more to learn but it makes me happy to know that you really do adore my writing and all these wishes are certainly very heartwarming. Seriously this means a lot! Thankyou once again even though thankyou doesn't seem so befitting anymore <3

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

me me

Okies here i am. Finally

OMGGG before anything else, there is Manan RAINY ROMANCE !! how could you not tell me this twinkie ? like this chapter has been here for days and it has rainy romance and i didn't read it ! Okies, i think i am mostly done with my melodrama..lol.

Firstly, thank you for a longer chapter. And don't you dare think for a second that we would be bored. A longer chapter, more of your writing to drool on. WIN WIN. And tell me, please tell me your secret. Just how do you write so well ? Every chapter, you outdo yourself so please take a bow because your writing is so beautiful. You write Manan so well, you understand their depth, their love for each other and express it so beautifully.

Nandini's hurt, it shows. There is a way for her to eventually get healed. But Manik's hurt, his guilt is so deep that he is always hurting. God, that makes me so sad. That he loves her so that a part of him is unable to forgive himself, unable to get the guilt go. His smile, he has lost his beautiful smile. Nandini is with him, she loves him so much but until he can let the guilt go, find a way to forgive himself, he can't fully be with Nandini. He has to give all of himself to her too but he tries so hard to not let his emotions of sorrow show because he wants her happy, he doesn't want her to be worried. Man, that's so goddamnbeautiful. The moments written from Manik's POV are especially my favourite because his pain, his raw pain, you emote that so damn well.

Aww..a man who is unable to deny his ladylove anything, even if it means playing in the rain. That scene wasbeautifullywritten like i could picture it. There was just rainy romance, there was happiness filled in those moments, where Manik and Nandini forgot about all their worries and just enjoyed life for those few precious moments.

Oh man..Your manik is such a worry wort, he flipping melts my heart. The way Manik worries about his Nandini. And the way Nandini still understands him, how she tell he is hurting even when he smiles at her. Their love, so rare this kind of love is.

I totally loved this chapter. You wrote it so well but then, you always write well :)

And now i don't have to wait for the next chapter..running running running.

Oh yeah, before that, I love you, a little extra love for writing this Manan story and giving us this amazing piece.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3

My saddist sister!!!!!!! Oh how this story has been awaiting your read and critique and I sat there reading this reply with the widest smile on my face. Honestly I had no idea I would be including a rainy romance sequence in the story but these two had been sitting in the car for too long, they had already cried so much and I just didn't want to force them in the house without some Manan moments haha.
So like umm I think I'll just have to say a thankyou to you. Yup just a plain and boring thankyou because I don't know a synonym for that just quite yet. I think it's time for you to send over that thesaurus. Like seriously I don't know what to say in response to your reply because I don't have those words to reciprocate and express my gladness upon seeing you're enjoying this story so far. I'm going to be nice and just kindly accept all your praises and not fuss about my imperfections because that's a never-ending discussion between the two of us so we might as well not start lol. Although I do need to thankyou for something else too which is for making me write this story. I guess it's really getting me to scratch my head and letting me experiment and explore a little with my writing and for that I'll always give you the credit because if you hadn't convinced me, I would still be just secretly writing my short stories in some unused book. And of course our Manan is the another reason why this story is turning out to be fairly decent I guess. So glad I bumped into you and we started that thread of analysis because as we continue to analyse these two live birds, you continue to enlighten me and I'm constantly learning more unseen sides of them which helps me pen my chapters. So yeh that's a third thankyou!
And of course as much we will see happy times ahead for these two lovers, my story will always have that element of saddistness since it's supposed to be tributed to you and we both share a love for such saddist passion in a plot.

I'm just glad you liked the chapter and yeh... Twinkie is happy :)

Lots of love
Your Twinkie <3

Wow twinkle, this is such an emotional update.. I dont know if this repeating is enough or not but really you have gift.. Gift of words.. Gift of bringing the emotions of characters right infront of the readers.. Loved loved this one..👏👏👏

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

Wow twinkle, this is such an emotional update.. I dont know if this repeating is enough or not but really you have gift.. Gift of words.. Gift of bringing the emotions of characters right infront of the readers.. Loved loved this one..👏👏👏

The bit about because - loving me so much reminded me of holi as well as scene where maanik thanks nandini for her idea of being friends.. See these small details help relate to the characters of maanik/nandini we know and it makes these scenes so believable and i connect with them right away..

And omg Maanik has given up singing and that too because of panditji.. You too.. not fair.. Can someone portray panditji i want him to be.. Disciplining these two rather than anything dramatic.. But i like the way story is progressing, suspense is building yet you reveal part of it every update to help us keep engrossed with it..

Now out with next update soon 😆

Pri!!!

CHAPTER 5 - TEASER!!!