MG SS || SHRIMATI || EPILOGUE 1/2 (COMPLETE) -PG 27- 26APR2015 - Page 7

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Awesome part .. Both became friends and started their relationship in a new way
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where is chapter 4...

maan punish geet's family to torture her like dis...dont let dem go...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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|| Chapter 4 ||

Geet squeals laughing when a snow ball hits on her shoulder. Another pair of snow ball hit her on back and at leg were geet was trying to miss those balls. "Maan..please ..please I am sorry...hey dekho main khaan pakadthi hun...galti hogai..aise kabhi nahi karungi..please"

Maan said breathing hard molding the snow balls " please...? Please? Bahut maza aaraha than a jabb mujhper pekrahi thi...abb karo maza..." he throws the snow balls at her again but geet misses hit.

Geet laughs at him sticking her tongue out "you missed it...you missed it"

Maan runs to grab her but flips on something falling on laughing geet. Both rolls on the snow like two wrestlers trying to catch their breath still laughing.

Maan pins up her both hands beside her face locking her legs with his strong legs. Geet was laughing nonstop without realizing their position now.

Maan stopped laughing seeing geet's child like laugh. He lost in her laugh...how it was two weeks back he was dying to get a glimpse of her one smile. In these two weeks they have come along with being husband & wife to strangers and strangers to friends and friends to more than friends. In these two weeks geet has opened up to him a lot but somewhere there is a something which is still holding her back. She learned to smile often without hesitation..started to laugh, talks nonstop complaining about his cooking skills and his tastes in movies or his cribbing at shopping malls what not. In all these things, he had a great control over his desires and feelings for her. It's not easy to be this close to his wife and yet feels like he is still not able close that slight void between them. But he is persistent and confident that very soon geet will bridge that distance and accept him as her husband.

Geet stopped laughing when she found maan starting at her. His eyes..his eyes are full of something ...warm..Something I could never get enough of tired looking at them. I always want to see that in his eyes...I want to drown in it...I want to stay in it forever and I want it to be only for me and only mine. Geet brought her gloved hands near to his face looking at him with same intensity.

Maan whispered "Geet.."

Geet whispered " Maan "

They both lost in each other's eyes enjoying the feel of being together for some time. But next moment geet squealed when she felt a snow melting in her coat wetting through thin shirt. Maan had a mischievous grin on his face seeing her rolling twisting trying to get free from him.

Geet "maaannn I will get you for this..." maan laughs at her cringed face with cold. He releases her hand and rolls beside her. Geet gets up and runs towards cottage cursing maan to get changed before she catch cold.

Maan closes his eyes feeling the snowflakes on his face. He sighed feeling the each moment spent with geet.

Maan hears geet call him to come inside as it has started to snow. "Maan...come inside before you burry under the snow." Maan gets up shrugging the snow from his cloths and head..and runs towards the cottage.

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Geet removed the coat in hurry shivering with cluttering teeth. Her hands are shaking nonstop. It was a close catch if maan have not put ice in her coat she would have given in to her heart desire to kiss him. It is getting difficult to suppress those sinful thoughts in her mind which keeps surfaces ever since she agreed to this pretend game of maan.

She knows it; she is weakening minute by minute fighting with her inner turmoil. She is losing the battle within her to avoid maan but it's getting hard to stand on her belief and to decide what's right or wrong. But now it doesn't matter whats wrong or right. Maan and his family is not like her family, they are definitely not from this world. Maan and his family..Which is my family now is been good and patient with me and maan has proved that not all men are same and she can trust him blindly with her heart. Maan has won her with being patience, with his selfless love and care. I don't know when he entered my heart and made his place in it where there was no been to.

Geet takes out her new set of night dress, purple color shirt and three fourth pj with matching bunny feather slippers which she brought when they both went on for shopping yesterday. She enjoyed spending time with maan and how he constantly asking her what she needs. She removes her woolen cap and wet shirt just standing in thermal slip and shorts. Maan enters their bedroom without knocking assuming geet might be in bathroom instead he finds her standing infront of mirror only in slip and shorts with her hair down.

Geet looks at him through the mirror meeting his hungry eyes. Maan removes his stole and cap along with gloves and coat slowly walking towards her. Today geet didn't want to lose that eye contact with maan or the connection she is feeling with him. Geet don't want to hide from him. Her mind lost battle with her heart long back bow she wants all those overwhelming emotions to consume her today. She wants to share her confusions desires pains all those years of miseries her helplessness.. her fear.. her scars..Everything. geet's eyes caught maan's and she wondered how did he managed to take over my mind and heart with just being himself and made her do the impossible...to surrender herself to him whole heartedly. Najaane kab wo mere dil main aaye aur apneliye jagha banadi...najaane kab hamare dosti ..dosti se badkar lagne lagey...najaane kab main apni dil unko de baiti...najaane kabse main innkey pyaar ki pyaasi thi...She wants to take that leap of faith with maan but there is something holding back something she needs to sort out first.

Maan stands behind her watching her in mirror. He turns her slowly making her to face him. Today geet didn't hide her eyes from him. She let him see them, read them what tale they are telling today. Maan brushes her wet hair back from her cheeks.

Geet closes her eyes when maan caresses her temple with his back hand trailing with his fingers near to her lips. Geet shivered with feeling a jolt pass through her and cold air blew in their room creating Goosebumps on her skin. Maan pulls her closer holding her slim waist with one hand and another hand is holding her head loosely.

Geet felt his hot breath fanning her cold cheeks warming them. Maan looks at her closed eyes "open your eyes geet"

Maan "look at me...look at my eyes geet...look at them"

Geet slowly opens her eyes and looking straight in his eyes.

Maan "look at me when I talk to you geet.."

Maan "I want you to look at my eyes when I talk to you geet...I want you to feel what I feel for you ...I want you to know my desire...love...for you geet..only you"

Maan "It always been you geet...it's you who is in my mind, heart and soul since the day I saw you in that flower bouquet. Don't you remember?" Geet nodes for a no while still looking at him.

Maan " I saw this girl at flower bouquet choosing flowers talking animatedly with the shop owner. I lost my heart the moment I saw those pair of beautiful doe eyes. I lost my mind when I heard her musical laugh and I lost my sleep and appetite when I inhaled her aroma. It was you geet...it was always been you...at that moment I fell for you ..And I fell hard that I know I could never overcome from that fall unless or until I make you mine...make you my life partner ...to make you my wife...to make you my shrimati" Geet just looked at him in confusion and waited for him to continue knowing that there is more to this story.

Maan brings her to the bed and he lies down first and then pulls geet to him and then he continued.

" Main iss kadar apna hoshon aawaz kho baita ..naa dinn ..naa raat ki samaj...naa boonk metaneki iccha...tum is tarha mere dillon deemag main chaagai thi ki mujhe aur kuch soochta nahi tha..jaha dekho ..sirf tum hi tum .."

Geet adjusts her head on maan's chest to take a good look at his face with awe.

Maan chuckles "Jab papa ko hey baat pata chali..he asked me your naam atha ...patha which I am totally ignorant and unaware of"

Geet rubs her head on his chest feeling warm. Maan pulls a spread over her and himself. Maan "I went to that flower shop again hoping to find you again but for my bad luck you never came until one day when my PI (personal investigator) called me describing you. You came that day to the flower shop...you finally came that day"

Geet lifts her head to look at him with questioning eyes PI

Maan "abb tum aise mera dil ko churakey..atha patha na bolkey gayab hojawogi tho mujhe PI ko rakkna pada tumhey dhunde keliye..."

Geet "Kabbse"

Maan "Kabbse ka?"

Geet "kabbse mujhe dhunrahey the"

Maan " dho saal attais din nov gantha chobis minute aur dus second(2years 18 days 24 minutes 10 seconds)"

Geet looks at him shocked unbelievable "kya?"

Maan shakes his head for yes "yaar tumhey dhundna bahut mushkil hogai thi..jabb tum mili..main wo mouka apne haatse jaane nahi diya. Mere PI ne sabb information nikhali aur next day papa came to your house proposing a marriage"

Maan "Jabb mujhe pata chala ki tumhare ghar wale shaadhi keliye maangai..I was over the moon"

Geet hugs his waist tightly keeping her head on his chest and asks "Phir"

Maan "phir my dream became reality the day we got married you became from kumara to shrimati...my wife..Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana and I your husband."

Geet was silent for long thinking something. Maan thought she dosed off. "geet.."

Geet "ji.."

Maan "are you thinking about differences in our age?" Geet says no but nodes for a yes.

Maan takes her face in his palms "Geet look at me...why can't you move on from that matter. Why is it bothering you so much?."

Geet "I don't know maan..I ..I want to move on but I just don't know"

Maan "geet there is nowhere written that a man should be older than woman to be married. age is just numbers ..it doesn't matter unless until a man and woman loves each other and wants to be together. Do you know Aaliya bhabhi is 4 years older than shiv bayya...and mai is 6 years older than papa. They both loved each other before getting married..Aren't they living their life normally and happily? This hypocrite society is not worth of our happiness . "

Geet sits up abruptly "Kya?"

Maan sits straight on bed "And we have just two years difference...it's not that huge difference."

Maan "And do you know the great highness of rajasthan Maharani Mandira was 13 years older than her husband. Weren't they happily married couple lived in history? Sirf itna hi nahi...bahutse aise log hain hamare society main jinhone apnese zaada umar ke life partners ko chune hain...take an example Sachin tendulkar is 6 years younger than Angali Tendulkar, Anil kumble 10 years younger than his wife, and javgal srinath is 7 years younger than his wife. Take example from bollywood...Aishwarya rai bacchan is 4 years older than Abhishek bacchan ...and Jaya bacchan is 2 years younger than Amithab bacchanji...how many examples do you want geet...I can give you a list...till morning..."

Geet just watched him with her mouth hanging open. Maan "and ours is only two years...is it so big difference ...geet marriages are made in heavens and god plans everything who is for to whom should be partners for life. Who are we to deny his decisions?"

Geet felt her head will burst any moment. The truth about her own sasumai's and sasurji's age difference and her bhabhi aaliya's and shiv's age difference. They were perfectly living their life without any emotional burden. She needs a moment to digest all this. How can she be so ignorant towards her duties as a wife? How can she refuse her husband's love? How can she deprive her husband from her love?

Maan saw her serious face he wants to give her space to take all that and time to think about it. He wants geet to come to him this time, it will be her decision if she overcomes from her hesitation and move on from her insecurities. He tried his best possible way to let the truth sink into her now everything is in her hand...whether she wants to lead her life with him or continue to sulk over lame issues. Maan had time for two weeks to think about it and after pondering over the situation he realized his love is not selfish to bind geet forcibly into this marriage. He is ready to live with the truth that she can never love him the way he wants to be and he will let her go if she still don't feel comfortable in this relationship. He loves her too much that he will do anything to make her happy even if she asks for separation. He doesn't want to force her like her family did into the marriage without giving an option.

He don't know how he will live if geet chooses to leave him but one should let go...if they are meant to be ...she will come back or else he has to just keep living without his soul.

Geet heard an engine starting and taking off. Geet came out running and saw the tail of light getting away in this heavy snow fall. Now geet is worried for maan, her heart beats are erratic. She sensed something bad is going to happen. Maan ko bhi abhi bahar jaane ki kya sooji..

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|| Author's Note ||

So finally I posted chapter 4. Now I demand long long long comments readers. I hope this story is coming as per your liking. This story is a message to all those people who thinks age is a big factor in relationships. I am just 22 or 23 running and I don't have much of experience in handling relationships. It's all my thoughts over the issues around our society and I want to give a message via a story because this is the second best way of spreading out the message. And first best is implementing it in our life.

Ignore the spelling, grammar and hindi mistakes. I typed this chapter half asleep. Next update is next week i.e, Next Wednesday till then enjoy my other works.


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Edited by JaasChowdhray - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
part 3
geet is self talking seeing the clothes n thought her luggage was exchanged...she tried to hide the clothes but maan saw them...
maan n his sil are too naughty they shopped for geet's n packed it too 😆
poor geet...
tirthyatra 😆 geet ki davranio ne geet geet ki achi tabg kheechi
aliya tells maan about geet's psychological condition...she is a doctore as a doc she told maan what geet sister told her...
poor geet she suffered so much in her maika...how her family didn't inform her or ask her opinion about this marriage or how they didn't told her that maan is younger than her...thats really mean...
oh no her family beat her because she refused to marry maan who is younger than her!!!
she asked maan if he told her that he sent the proposal for geet through his dad n he was already fallen in love with her...or he knew about the age difference...
maan is angry hearing how much geet suffered in that hell...
aliya also told him he has to be patience with her n make her understand that age difference doesb't matter...
geet os so cute n innocent...with maan's care geet's shell is breakiing bit by bit...
they start from start...now they are friends...he made it all nice n sweet n light hearted...




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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
really like this
geet family is cruel yaar

feeling sorry for geet

beti itni boj hoti hai kya

maan start with fresh

now both become friend

nice maaneet meet


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow part four is awesome
maan and geet hesitation become less

maan told her how he saw and found her

good job msk

now what will be geet decision

where is maan now

thankyou for double update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan cleared all her doubts and laid rest to her insecurities so beautifully !!
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part 4
nice update...
geet started to laugh smile more freely in 2 weeks...she is enjoying with maan...
maan is waiting for geet to bridge the last gap they have between them...
geet is fighting her desires n she feels her shell breaking...maan has won her trust by his patience...n his love...she wants to shares what she went through in all thses years..but still there is something holding her back...
maan told her finally how where he saw her...what he felt about her...
maan also mage her understand that the age different is not a big issue its just numbers...
geet is shocked to listen about aliya n shev n maan's parent's age differents...
maan told geet everything now he wants to geet take the final decision...
he is ready for separation is geet doesn't want to live with him...
ohno maan went out...hope in this heavy snow fall he will be fine...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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chalo kash geet ki hesitation abb nehi rahegi...magar maan kyun bahr gaya...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Geet enjoying so much with maan
Maan told how he made her his
Geet confusion solved little hope maan is fine
Awesome update
Geet line in front mirror was superb
Continue soon

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