MG SS || SHRIMATI || EPILOGUE 1/2 (COMPLETE) -PG 27- 26APR2015 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
very nice concept,maan is only 2 yrs older n its nt that huge age difference beteen hubby n wife so why geet is so unsure???
loved d first part,continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
congrats for new ss
awesome start...
geet n maan are married for a month now...but they talked less...
geet is still wondering why maan delhi's most wanted bachelor rejected all n married her...
n here maan fall in love when she saw her at a floral shop for first time...
geet is also hesitating because she is older than maan for 2 years...
she is confused if maan know about it or it doesn't matter to him...
geet is affected by maan but she is holding her self back...
all family members are so sweet...
teasing geet...maan is also enjoying their teasing...
maan gave geet their marriage gift ...n made her wear it too...
geet is so shy shy...
NT n aliya came poor maaneet apni jaldi me they got tangled ...
NT n aliya saw them n teased them...they give them a honeymoon package as wedding gift...
poor geet now she is thinking what she will do with her hubby for a month...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Really nice starting... waiting for read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Wow that was a really great start.. lolzz.. Its good to see normally angry MSK all flat on his wife's charm.. hehhe loved how u have introduced a big sweet family.. bbhabhi's are really devils here unke teasing sessions huhOMG.. mazadaar ekdum.. n naughty Maan was njoying it all.. lolzz.. best part was when Maan asks kya karenge HM pe n Naina says Gudda Gudiya khlena.. I really had a hard time controling my laugh.. Would love to read further.. please update soonish.. m loving the older Geet n young Maan track.. 👏👏👏

luv Rucha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
love it...why cannot love happen even if girl is older than boy...waiting eagerly for geet to loose her shyness and maan to make her more comfortable with him
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
nice chapter one
geet is two year older to maan

that y she is not accept him as husband

i think age is not matter in hubby wife relation

i know a couple where wife is 6 year older then husband

or when boy can marry a girl who younger to them y not girl

nice story continue soon

this is your first story ?


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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
awesome update
continue soon
do pm me next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
yeh geet sahi mein pagal hai...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29



||Author's Note||

Hello Readers

So how are you all, everything changga with everyone? Though none asked how I am doing I will tell myself.. I am fine thank you J . Today is usual updating day for my other fiction MANGALYAM TANTUNANENA but I made an exception and decided to update SHRIMATI as it is short story and want to finish is off first.

I saw the likes and comments on SHRIMATI thread and I am surprised seeing many liking the story so much. Some even PMed me to make it a Long story and requesting to do not end it soon. Truly I am touched by reading each one of your comments. But I am sorry SHRIMATI was meant to One Shot but I kind of carried on and now it has become short story.

Coming to the story, many were asking why geet is so reluctant to accept maan as husband. Geet came from a family where male dominancy is a usual thing and they threat women like a commodity in their household. Such family never asks a girl whats her desires, likes, dislikes or opinions or has freedom to add her two cents to thoughts. However in all this society is to be blamed for geet's hesitation because it's our society made such rules that a girl should be younger than a boy to be married. Now not all people in society bound to its illogical rules and regulations. People are adopting the changes in their life but still few people here and there always ready to cause troubles by imposing their illogical beliefs on innocent minds.

Geet needs to understand that love has no boundaries, not time, age, color, religion, and culture matters if it is a true love and meant to be. Maan will make her see the beauty of relationship and its purity with his love and care.

Here is the second chapter. Ignore the mistake and don't forget to like and comment. Comment karne main kanjoosi matt karo yaaro. Probably I will update MT tomorrow along with surprise. Tinggg dinggg J

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Jhaanvi

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|| Chapter 2 ||

Geet watched the twinkling lights below with wonder through window. Maan saw her watching outside like a kid and chuckled shaking his head with her amusement at simple things. Flight attendant came to them asking whether they like to have something to drink or eat. Geet turned to look at the AH(Air hostess) with wide eyes. She was indeed beautiful and looker. AH politely asked geet whether she wants something to drink, soft or hard drinks. Geet "ji ..mujhe ek glass pani chahiye"

AH smiled " sure ma'm ..anything else?"

AH then looked at maan "and for you sir?"

Maan "same as her's thanks" replied smiling at AH. Geet saw that maan's smiling at AH and something tugged in her heart. It brought a frown on her face wondering why she doesn't like it but maan caught that look before it disappears. Inne kya huwa achanaq abhi tho teek thi..

Geet rubbed her arms over her turtle neck sweater feeling the AC chilled air. Babaji aaliya bhabhi ne kaha tha hey sweater aur jeans pant mujhe thand se bachayaga...mujhe abhi se itni tand lagrahi hain ..aur Switzerland main bina freezer ke main jam hi jahungi waha...

I couldn't take this anymore, I am shivering my teeth's are chattering and I may die from cold any minute. I felt the heat radiating from maanji's body and moved bit closer to him without making it obvious to him.

Maan was pretending to read something on his blackberry while watching her in corner of his eyes. He smiled when geet moved closer to him seeking for warmth of his body. He felt a feather light weight on his shoulder leaned and her cold hands circling his arms like a snake. Naturally her body observed his body warmth and she dosed off immediately feeling warm.

Maan smiled and adjusted their seat to a semi bed and then brought her closer to him circling her in his strong arms pulling the blanket over them. She felt so small.. so fragile and so soft in his arms. He loved the feeling of her in his arms. Maan dimmed the light over their seat and watched her face ..inch by inch registering the every detail of her features. He wanted to kiss those soft pink lips ..wanted to feel the smooth texture of her milky cheeks...he wanted to do millions thinks to her but he must wait ...wait for the time till she herself comes to him. Geet don't make me to wait too long...yun tumhare paas hokar bhi door rehna ...abb mushkil hain lagrahi hain... And then he kissed her forehead softly letting the sleep take over him and geet in his dreams. Geet snuggled comfortably in his arms and hugged him tightly sighing in her sleep.

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A car stopped infront of big country cottage which is located in middle of nowhere. A snow blanket covered the ground everywhere to the far away until your eyes can reach it and frozen trees stood still against the blowing chilled wind. Maan stepped out adjusting his coat around him trying to avoid the snowflakes.

Geet was all covered up from head to toe but still she was shivering. Her face's complexion has already turned to pale blue making her look like a ghost. She opened the door to step out from the car.

Maan came around to her side to open the door "geet ..sambalkey... ground is bit slippery...here let me help"

Maan offered her a hand for the support since she wasn't wearing snow friendly shoes.

Driver helped with their language and a house keeper of the cottage came out greeting them.

Maan "John...is the care taker of this cottage." Maan introduced geet to him.

John "welcome sir, madam ..Everything has been arranged according to your instructions sir. Grocery is stocked up for a month, and fresh fruits and vegetables in freezer. In case if you need anything, just give me a call or the near city is 40 km far from here if you would like to go by yourself."

Maan "thanks john..You may leave now. I will let you know if anything we need. Thanks for everything"

Geet was watching the interiors of the cottage. It is indeed a beautiful cottage built in 19 century. Geet removed her coat and shoes feeling the warmth inside the cottage.

Maan came inside after bidding good bye to john and driver. And saw geet standing infront of fire..Her outlined shadow was glowing in fire gradient making her hour glass figure more prominent. Maan walked slowly near to her while removing his coat and gloves.

Geet was busy at warming her cold palms and blowing her hands, rubbing. She stiffened when maan stood behind her ..very close to her. This is the moment she always worried about. She doesn't know how to react or say to him and afraid to move an inch or say fearing what he might be expecting from her. How she wanted to share her inner dilemma and worries, fears and desires with him but she was scared of thinking that she may disappoint him in some way or the other. Before that she wants to know why did he married her and does he aware of the age differences between them?.

Maan softly called her name from behind "Geet..." his body heat was radiating over his cloths to her back. She felt ...safe? Warm?

Flames of fires dancing shadows were playing on geet's face. Maan removed her waist length hair across the shoulder placing them other side. He leaned into her, his lips are so close to her ears almost like kissing, circling his arms slowly around her slim waist from behind.

Geet's body was stiff and became ice cold due to fear or maybe nerveousness. Maan inhaled her natural perfume rubbing ears with his nose, his rough one day stubble creating a friction on her smooth skin on her neck and cheeks making her insane. His closeness creating new sensations within her making her to crave for something but what she isn't aware or don't want to think or feel what it is.

Maan again whispered her name like it was his new chant "geeet...why are you holding back...and torturing me too"' said huskily taking her ear lobes in his mouth softly nibbling on them. Geet felt her face heat up and a blood rushing inside her body all over to the parts. She is losing it..she is losing her sanity ...she is losing her ability to think ..any logic ...right or wrong everything don't seems to matter anymore. Her breaths came out in urgent; she closed her eyes feeling his sweet yet torturous seduction.

Geet "maaan..." She felt like she will die if he stops whatever he is doing. It was so addicting...pleasant...hot...sensual ...but it feels good. What is it about him makes me to fight with my conscious? What is it about him controls my mind body and now even my soul.? What is it called? .whats this ehsaas?

Maan heard her taking his name minus JI to it "what did you just call me?" turned her around roughly squeezing her waist..

Geet's eyes half open and her face was flushed. She looked at his face and her hand touched his face "Maaan "

Maan was over the moon. This was the first time maan heard her call his name that too so lovingly. Maan took her the hand which was on his face bringing neat to his lips to kiss it.

"Say it again.." maan demeans her while still kissing her palms.

Geet "maaan " geet is in trance like a possessed doll repeating his name.

Maan "again" maan was overwhelmed and asked her leaning, touching her forehead with his.

Geet "maaan..."

Maan couldn't control himself anymore. He must say it now there will be no perfect moment for him..coz it is always a special moment with geet "I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you...geet I love you so much..."

Geet was lost in the sensation created by maan within her and it took a minute to register what maan said and what she is doing in his arms. She cursed for losing control. Geet's eyes widened now fully awake from the trance. She slowly pushed him taking a step back shaking her head for a no.

Maan was confused with her behaviour. One minute she burns in his agosh and next moment becomes cold like ice. He cursed for rushing it, but whom to blame. They stood there in silence facing each other for whole two minutes.

Maan broke the silence when geet neither moved nor attempted to speak looking everywhere but not maan.

Maan "geet ...I am not sorry for whatever happened just couple of minutes back.. its...uhhh natural you know...between husband and wife"

Geet didn't want to say anything to make this awkward situation more awkward. She kept silent ...not looking at him.

Maan waited for her to say something but when he heard nothing. He sighed knowing she won't say a word." Let's change and eat something. I am famished"

Maan took his coat and walked to their bedroom which is they are going to share for a month? Or just him? "Goddd I hate this"

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Sorry for the short update. I am in hurry to go somewhere.

Next Update Tomorrow along with MT

Pre-Cape:

Keep Guessing

I am so evil right?

hahahaha

Edited by JaasChowdhray - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
amazing update looks like she was little jealous seeing maan smiling at AH great both r in their cottage maan couldnt control n confessed but she didnt say anything but maan is slowly captureing her boby n heart hope they will share one room n geet will tell her dilemma to him me too liked that both calling each other without 'ji' lovely part thnx 4 update

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