Originally posted by: Subhashiniii
😊👏Beautiful..simple..friendship story
Keep it ..up waiting for 2nd Shot where Love blossoms..I don't mind if u made it as SS or FF😉Next time do pm me Vijji
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Originally posted by: Subhashiniii
😊👏Beautiful..simple..friendship story
Keep it ..up waiting for 2nd Shot where Love blossoms..I don't mind if u made it as SS or FF😉Next time do pm me Vijji
Originally posted by: akashavani
Prince _mb...Vijayalakshmi...Thanks So much for Ur Appreciation. ...Myself making less Posts...Nowadays...Will Read Your Beautiful AShlok Story...
VL...So happy that you started... Your Writing...Yes Ebp..Forum Was and Is Full of Beautiful Writers ...Many Writers were My Own Inspiration Too...Hope You find your Own Niche Dear...In Ebp .Best Luck and Heartfelt Wishes...To You and Writing ..Absolutely.
awesome...both of us got the same name 😆
Originally posted by: sanjida123
Awesome one dear.
really loved it, thanks
u r really talented.
Loved the ashlok story.
Their friendship, loved makes me glad.
thanks. Plz Plz Plz. ?.keep writing more for all the fans of ashlok like me.
Originally posted by: charanyaaj
Beautiful start viji...
waiting for next part...
Originally posted by: prince_mb
Thank you dear subhi😃.ya its a simple story, i just want to make everyone to go back to their school days and cherish their old memories😊 .even im thinking the same to turn it into ss😊.ya i sure will pm you dear😊.And you got my profile right dear😊.its PRINCE MAHESH BABU☺️.Im a DIE HARD FAN of him😃.thought of marrying him😉 but namrutha came b/w us😡😆
Originally posted by: Subhashiniii
Thats great U r going to turn it SSHaha Namrata not planned to divorce him in near future chipkoo hein..fevicol se jadaa 😆...so no girl have no choice to get him
Note: Hi dearies first of all thanks for commenting. I thought i would end the story with two parts but it seems impossible, as my mind is creating more of this story so i want to turn into SS. If you guys want me to do so, then i'll continue or else i'll end it by giving one or two long updates. And here is the part 2, read and share your views thank you all.
PART 2
She was silent all the way to the home and he was doing all silly things on the road to make her laugh. But to his dismay nothing was working on her. So, he decided to do something big, something by which she can't stop her laughter. He was thinking about the ways to make her laugh. A women came there with a dog. Suddenly she got a call so she tied the chain to railing of street bench and went to attend the call. Shlok looked at aastha and then at dog. Shlok if something is cooking in your mind to create scene over here just quit it. Don't create fuss please. Why does it matters to you aastha? Since how long im trying to make you laugh but you were in coma, no reaction from you. So now im not gonna hear you got it, saying this he moved towards the dog. Shlok, she hold his hand stop it shlok its a doberman. He moved her hand which is holding his, aastha its a small dog, there is no harm in having some fun, Saying this he moved near the dog but stood 2feets away from it. He started provoking it with his eyes and hands, it started barking. He thought to instigate it more so he put he feet infront of its mouth but moved it back at the nick of time. He did it again, it tried to catch his feet. Aastha was observing all these, he did again, again, again, now no chance it already caught his feet. Aaah aastha bachao, aaahhh aastha do something. She started shivering, she don't know what to do so she ran towards the owner of the dog. Seeing her running away he cried- "Arey darr pook, dosth ko problem mein phasake baag rahi ho, kamini ruk jao." He was calling for her but she vanished. He was so busy in screaming that, he didn't realised that the dog already left his feet and caught his leg, actually cloth of his pant, as it is not finding any flesh to bite from his branded Adidas shoes. Sorry i don't know your name please leave me, i won't instigate you next time please leave me, please he pleaded infront of the dog.
He looked here and there for some source but found no soul around. Having no option he removed his pant and moved away from the dog. Just then aastha came running there with the women. He started shouting at her- "kaha chali gayi thi? Tujhe patha hai kitna darr gaya tha mein?" She was looking everywhere but him, "eder uder kya dekh rahi ho? Mein tum se baat kar raha hoon. Jaawab do aastha." Shlok try to understand the situation she muttered. While the women bend down and took the dog into her arms - "My baby are you ok did that stupid guy did anything to you. The dog barked as if to say yes. He shivered when he heard its bark. The women raised her head to look him. She stared him from head to toe, U... Shameless creature how dare you to hurt my snoopy? Arey oo aunty shlok raised his voice and the dog barked again, scared he took 2steps back. You rascal you've done enough exposing, cover self or else my snoopy would enjoy your thighs as its feast. Shlok realised that he was standing in the middle of huge road with no pants. Feeling embarrassed he ran towards aastha to cover himself with her scarf. Unknown to his intention aastha slightly moved away causing him to fall into a nearby muddy pit. He fell with such a potency, that the muddy water came and fall on those who were in that vicinity i.e., the dog and the owner of dog, giving them a feel that they showered with muddy water.
You stupid, scoundrel, rascal look what you've made? Arey auntyji "Aap ko fikar karne ki koi jaguraat nahi hai, hamare paas bahoot paise hai, agar aap chahein toh main Fire Engine ko call kardunga."("aunt no need to worry, we have lot of money, if you want i can call fire engine"). Fire engine? But why? Simple aunty you're huge and i don't think that the water in colony's house tank will enough to clean your body so to save the water for whole colony im telling that i'll call Fire engine. Enough mr. Whoever you're, you spoke enough i won't spare you idiot. First you hurted my snoopy, and now you insulted me. You messed with me do you know who i am, do you know who is my husband? Why don't you know? Said shlok causing her to loose her temper. Oh stup up you bladdy ROU... Stop it aunty. Enough, you spoke more than enough. Aastha who was silent all the while came forward to defend her friend. In her 23 years life, Aastha Bharadwaj, never dared to speak to anyone with such a loud voice, but today she made an exception for the sake of her child friend. First of all im sorry for speaking to you in this way but i can't help. Hey you tiny little girl, whoever you are just stay away from this. Im not going to leave this idiot said the women with anger. I agree that my friend misbehaved but, that won't serves you any right to speak vulgar to my friend. And moreover he is just trying to be friendly with your dog but its your dog whose ego is bigger than its size had harmed my friend. You've scold my friend for his mistake which he didn't intend to do, but its your dog who has scared my friend. Now you tell me what i should do with your dog? Can i kick it under its tail with my sandal foot? No said the women. Then how would you expect to me stay silent. Tssseee... Came the whistle sound from behind. "Aastha rani ki jai ho". Aastha glared him, thats it he didn't spoke further. Aunty aap humse bade hain, Aastha continued, if you still think that my friend is wrong, im apologising on his behalf.
All the anger within her has vanished, when aastha spoke to her. She came forward "Beti i don't know who you are, but im telling for you good, stay away from this idiot, don't trust this guy, he'll leave you in the lurch one day". Aastha was about to speak... o auntyji we are not asking for your advice, keep it with you it helps you a lot said shlok making the situation more worse. See i said you right? He is stupid, there is no guilt on his face, this man is good for nothing. Aunty im sorry you please leave, aastha somehow managed to send the elderly women from there. After she left aastha turned and glared him, anger written all over her face. Kya baat hai aastha... Aastha rani bangayi Jhansi ki rani. Kya attitude dekayi yar tune woh moti wali aunty ko. All this while aastha said nothing but kept staring at him. What? She moved her eyes behind his head and then to him again, there was a manhole just behind the muddy pit in which shlok was accommodating right now? Kya? Maan kartha hai ki tumhe iss mein se uthake uss manhole mein pehku. What i've done? Aastha unable to control her anger further broke the stem of the near by tree and started hitting him, aastha please don't hit me please he pleaded. She stopped and threw it away. The level of water in the pit was reaching till his shoulders making only his face visible. Few seconds later a street dog came near him and started to sniff. He ofcourse unaware of it. He turned his face only to find the face of the dog infront of him. He shievered making the dog to bark loudly(kahein mujhe kutha dosh hai kya he thought). He was stammering- aa...as... astha...please...isss...kuthe ko...baghado ... how? Hey stupid there is stone near your feet, cast on to it he screeched causing the dog to bark more loudly. She did as he asked her to do, but in the nick of the time the dog turned its neck causing the stone to land on shlok's face. Aaahhh... came a loud shriek. Causing aastha to shiver with fear. Kya kiya tumne shouted he? Maine kuthe ko maarne ke liya kaha tha mujhe nahi. Haa maine bhi kuthe ko hi maara. Aastha stop joking or else i... shut up shlok you've put a great farce show, now just shut your blaaddy mouth. One more word from your mouth and your death in my hands. He stayed silent- "Tujhe toh mein baad mein dekhloonga" he whispered to himself. Do you want to spend your whole life in this pit or waiting for propitious moment? get up said aastha unable to hide her irritation. Im without my pants. Oh god, she looked heaven wards as if praying to give patitence to control her anger.
Aastha there is my pant please take it. Why? Mobile he said pretending to be feared. You... stupid you want to chat in this situation? No aastha, take my mobile and call to anyone of our friends. She took the mobile from his pant and started searching the contacts. Whom should i call? Anybody from our gang Ankush, Sid or Varun. She diled varun's num and waited for the call to connect. Shlok what should i say? Ask him to come here. She did the same and disconnected the call. How intelligent you're aastha, i wonder how did you get first in the class. Why are you saying that? Are you mad aastha? what will varun come and do with empty hands? Ask him to bring some clothes to wear. She realised that she hasn't informed about the clothes, she mumbled a sorry and rectified her mistake, Happy now? Yeah very happy, Tumne mujhe Hyderabadi Biryani kilani na, sarcasm is clearly evident in his voice. Tumse baat karne hee beekar hai saying this she started pacing back and forth. He saw a girl walking, and he started singing- "Tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam, pyaar hota hai deewana sanam..." to which the girl said "IDIOT" and walked away. Thank you babes he replied and turned his head and found aastha removing her sandals. Aastha stop please, now what i did? Don't you know what you did? What's your problem Mr.shlok agnihotri? Tumhe tumari galti nazar kyun nahi aati? She threw it on his face but he catched it. Why are you singing at her? Cuz she is cute. She casted other sandal onto his face. Having nothing in her hand she started searching for something to cast on him, she saw a huge stone nearby and tried to lift it up, aastha bekhaar mein kooshish kar rahi ho, use utana tumhare baas ki baat nahi hain. Aastha listen, if you won't listen to me then i'll throw your sandals into this pit, and you'll have to walk bare foot. Now decision is yours. But she didn't paid any heed. She tried and tried and tried and then gave up by realising that her petite frame cannot uphold such a huge thing. Tired she sat on the same stone.
They both were waiting for varun to arrive. Aastha your sandals she heard him calling her. She went near the pit to take her sandals. Keep it there she ordered by pointing her finger to the side of the pit. She bended a little to take her footwear, seeing her bending he took two handful of muddy water and applied it to her both hands resembling uptan scene. Chee...you stupid fellow she yelled and went to a water tap nearby to wash her hands. When she returned back she spotted varun searching for them with a packet in his hand. "Varun" she called him by waving her hand. He came running to her "Thank god aastha you're here im searching for you both by the way where is shlok?" Beta neeche dekh, varun looked down and shocked. Aastha what is he doing here? Kuch nahi beta mera kuch chillar iss gaddhe mein girr gaya toh mein usse dhoond raha hoon. What? Arey oo stupid any person with their right senses will fall into this pit. I don't about others but you'll do anything said varun causing aastha to laugh. They both hi fived. Oh please stop you both, i've accidentally fell into this. Its ok, now get out of this said varun by moving his hand forward. Kya baat hain Aastha rani i don't know that you're having lot of interest to watch me without pants said shlok with a small smile and hint of mischevious in his eyes. What? Then why are you staring turn he barked like a dog. With no other word she turned around by cursing him in her heart. Mean while varun helped him to get out of the pit. He was feeling like he was released from the prison after a very good long years. In his happiness he hugged varun without realising, he messed varun's dress in the process. Varun broke the hug "shlok what are you doing yar im not your girlfriend." And you've adapted a good method to thank you friends. Im sorry yar varun. Ya ya make a mistake then come up with a sorry said varun with irritation. Acha have you brought the dress? Yes he handed the packet to shlok and moved towards aastha who is standing few feets away from them.
Shlok changed into fresh pair of clothes and moved towards the tap to wash his face and hands. To his dismay, there was no water flowing from the tap. Damn this tap he muttered through his teeth. Aastha and varun ran towards shlok when they noticed that he is kicking the tap with his feet. What happened shlok? Aastha you washed your hands from the same tap right? Ya shlok but what happened? Mera toh din hi kaarab hain aaj, patha nahi subha subha kiska shakal dekha hai maine. Ha yaad aya. Kiska asked varun. Aur kiska haina hamare ghar mein ek shaitan, uss taklu ka... stop it shlok, woh tumare baba hai, respect him yar. There she goes again, aastha im not in a mood to listen to you lecture, so for godsake please hold it. Acha give me your scarf aastha. Why? To wipe this dirt. No, she said by clutching her scarf tightly in her fists. Arey you're wearing chunni na, give your scarf. No shlok i won't give. But why aastha? Cuz Varad dada has gifted me this scarf. Aastha I'll get another scarf for you. Please aastha see how ugly im looking. Still i won't im sorry shlok. Varun do you have hanky? No yar. Acha will you drop us at home? Ya sure said varun. They three got into varun's car and drove away. On their way they stayed silent. Shlok im sorry said she. He turned his head towards her, Never mind aastha and im not angry at you. so stop worrying he said with a smile. She got relieved. Varun drop me at my home said aastha. No varun drive it to my home said shlok. Shlok i've lot of work at home and moreover i need to prepare for exams. Oh stop it aastha you can prepare later and moreover they are just internals not finals. Ya but i got least aggregate in first internals. Chill aastha i know you'll cope with this internals said varun. Thanks varun but please drop me at home. Both shlok and varun exchanged some manipulative glances which gone unnoticed by aastha. Ok aastha i'll drop you at your home said varun. Thank you varun she said and took a book from her bag and started reading it.
Few minutes later the car came to halt. Bye Aastha said varun. Bye varun and bye shlok. She got no response from shlok. May be he is still upset with me, she thought and got out of the car. Where is she? She was so involved in the book that she didn't realised that varun has dropped her infront of shlok's house. Varun she shouted. Both varun and shlok got out of the car and shlok smirked at her. Varun i've asked you to drop me at my home and you... aastha relax i told him to drop you here. But when, i was there in the car too? Aastha rani, i've my own ways to get my work done. Now you go inside and relax im coming. She said nothing. Bye aastha. Bye varun. See you tomorrow at college, she just smiled and went inside the house.
She stood at the doorway and saw both Anjali and niranjan were busy in living room. Aunty she called out, both Anjali and niranjan looked up at the source of the voice. Aastha said anjali. She ran and hugged anjali. Aastha meri bacchi kaisi hain thu, asked anjali with care and concern in her voice. Im fine aunty. How are you? Mein theek hu. She bend and touch her feet. Kush raho. Nameste uncle, nameste beta. She took blessing from him and he hugged her. Kya hua beta ghar aana hi chod diya said Niranjan. No uncle, nothing like that i was just busy in my studies. Aastha kuch kaaya tumne asked anjali. Ji aunty. Just then shlok came inside, walking like a lame man. Kya hua shlok, tu aise kyu chal raha hai asked anjali. Kuch nahi ayi mein toh bas... Aur yeh sab kya hai, kya haal banaya tunme said niranjan. But he didn't replied him. "AASTHA" everyone heard a male voice calling her. They turned to see the owner of the voice. "Dada" aastha ran and hugged him. How are you aastha? Mein theek hu dada. Aap kaise hain? Mein bhi theek hu. Varad come inside said niranjan. Both aastha nd varad went towards the sofa. They were about to sit, niranjan said shlok stop there you don't sit, you were already messed with with mud, mire or whatever. He stared him for few good seconds and sat on the sofa and to top of it he rubbed himself to the cushions making the costly velvet cloth dirty in the process. Then he got up "Even i don't want to sit on sofa but you said it so... Mr. Agnihotri i'll exactly do that which you don't want me to do." Shlok is it the way to talk to our dad said varad. Im sorry dada but i can't help it. Kitne dino se bike pooch raha tha mein lekin mujhe bike hee nahi dellara complained shlok like a little kid. Shlok, uncle ne already tujhe bike dellaya right? You shut up aastha. You shut up shlok, baba has already brought a bike for you but its you who lost it in some stupid bullshit bike race said varad. Niranjan smiled and shlok noticed it. Why are you smiling baba? You know what, everyone in my college comes on bike expect me said shlok with a pout on his face. No uncle not everyone comes on bike just few students comes on bikes aastha blurted making his irk rise. Ok now shlok go and fresh up said anjali. Shlok left throwing one last glance at niranjan and then at aastha.
Once he left, they all started laughing. Aastha beta jab itne dinno ke baad ghar ayye tho tumara haath ka banaya hua ek cup chai toh banta hai said niranjan. Aur woh bhi elaichi wali said varad. Ji uncle jarror banaugi. Aastha chalo kitchen mein chalte said anjali. Before leaving to kitchen anjali called out for seeta and asked her to change the covers of sofa cushions. Once they got into kitchen aastha started preparing tea. Aastha tujhe patha hain mujhe tumari kitni yaad athi hain. Mujhe bhi aapki bahut yaad athi hain aunty. Aastha how many times should i say not to clepe me as Aunty, call me as ayi. Why aunty? Cuz i want you to term me as ayi and moreover you need to habituate of it. Aastha looked at her confused. I want you here aastha, in this house forever... aastha looked at her with questioning eyes. As my shlok's wife anjali completed her sentence making aastha to guffaw. Just then the festoon from lord bappa fell on the kitchen platform. Arey whats making you laugh aastha? Aunty aapki tabiyat toh theek hain na, aap aise ajeeb baatein kyun karey? First you tell me why are you laughing? Nothing aunty, its just that when you proclaimed me as shlok's wife, im just unable to control my laughter. Why aastha don't you like shlok? No aunty its not like that, i like him. Then whats the problem aastha? Aastha cupped her hands "Aunty i like him, as a friend not like my partner. I've never seen him in that way infact i can't even afford that thought. We are just friends, Best friends and we'll always be. But aastha even bappa wants you to be shlok's wife, see she showed the festoon to aastha which was on the platform. Aunty its not bappa's aashirwaad, its cuz of wind saying this she closed the windows of kitchen. Lekin aastha meri waada? "Aunty jab meri maa hee iss duniya mein nahi rahi toh aap uss waade ko bhi bhul jayein", said aastha and left the kitchen by holding the tray. Anjali looked at heavenwards "Manju maine tume jo waada kiya, mein woh jaroor puri karungi" whispered with tears in her eyes.
THERE ALWAYS EXISTS A FINE LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND
FRIENDSHIP
FRIENDSHIP
IS KNOWING SOMEONE WILL ALWAYS BE THERE WHEN HE/SHE WALKS OUT. IT'S CRYING WHEN YOU LOVE THEM, KNOWING THAT YOU'LL SEE THEM THE NEXT DAY. AND ITS FINISHNG EACHOTHER SENTENCES.
LOVE
IS LAUGHING WITH HIM/HER UNTIL THE SUN GOES DOWN... THEN LYING IN HIS/HER ARMS UNTIL IT COMES UP AGAIN. ITS HAVING SOMEONE TO TELL YOOU'RE BEAUTIFUL/HANDSOME BUT NOT HOT/SEXY. AND ITS BEING SCARED AND EXICTED AT THE SAME TIME
AND WHEN THESE TWO COMBINES
HAPPINESS
IS FORMED