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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: ilardi
so sorry for not having replied fr ur earlier updates..jus landed at home after a tiring visit to another country..but having read this ,i must say i can see a new author in the making!!but frankly,it was an awesome piece of work! loved every bit of it!!👏and sorry again!!

It's okay, re! I was missing you a lot! Thanks a lot, dear!

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Part 58

" Kyun Dard Hai Itnaa..."

If it was someone else in Govind's place it would have been impossible to persuade Yagya to come over their house, but the all-knowing, all-prevailing paramatma, knew that their pain had to end, if not for themselves then again for the sake of the world, their union was very much quintessential.
Yagya was told to come on the terrace directly without waiting for them downstairs, and Yagya would never leave any of her Govind's orders unfulfilled. but alas, her own wishes never got fulfilled,
She reached onto the terrace and voiced out in a voice which shook out the very heart of Arjun, where her image was sheltered.
" Yagya...", came out a whisper which had the potential to melt the hearts of all the girls but had only ignited the fire in the heart of the fiery one.
" Oh Mr. Arjun is here! Now I get it why everyone was forcing me to come here! As I said, you are trying crooked ways to gain me!" said Yagya, in a deep voice, which showed the depth to which her heart had sunk after every pain she had endured.
" Yagya..."
" I thought you had said enough, Arjun that you had to maintain so much of silence! Then no words were there, then why are the words coming out now?" asked Yagya, furiously as Govind and Subhi who were silent spectators of this fiery war between love and pain, felt their guts get churned with pain.

Is Zamaane Men Is Mohabbat Ne
Kitane Dil ToDe Kitane Ghar Phuunke
Jaane Kyon Log Mohabbat Kiyaa Karate Hain
Dil Ke Badale Dard-E-Dil Liyaa Karate Hain
Jaane Kyon Log Mohabbat Kiyaa Karate Hain

" Please Yagya! Let me complete what I have to say! I understand your pain!" said Arjun, while moving towards her and holding her shoulder assuring her, but she didn't want assurance today. She needed answers. And answers to those questions which were never asked nor were expected to be asked.
" Really? You understand my pain? My Heart might have been yours Arjun, but the pain which I endured was always mine. The insults of the society were always mine. The unrequited love of that dreaded history was always mine! So what if the name on that pain was yours, the wound, the scars and the tears of blood which flowed were always mine!" shouted Yagya, while pushing him away from her.

Tanhaai Milati Hai, Mahafil Nahin Milati
Raahen Mohabbat Men Kabhi Manzil Nahin Milati
Dil Tut Jaataa Hai, Naakaam Hotaa Hai
Ulfat Men Logon Kaa Yahi Anjaam Hotaa Hai
Koi Kyaa Jaane, Kyon Ye Paravaane,
Kyon Machalate Hain, Gam Men Jalate Hain
Aahen Bhar Bhar Ke Divaane Jiyaa Karate Hain - 2
Jaane Kyon Log Mohabbat Kiyaa Karate Hain
"This is your side of the story, Yagya but what about mine? No one remembers my pain but only remembers the silence I beheld! It was a cruel game of fate, Yagya!" said Arjun, not moving away from her, as even the distance from her footsteps seemed like a pain now.
" How can I even blame the destiny here, Arjun? How can I tell that the destiny had a grudge against me? However poor it was, however bad situations I was put into due to destiny, that destiny was mine. That is not my problem here!
My problem was that it was just mine, always! It was never yours.
It was never of the person whom I lost my heart to, It was never of the person whom my soul belonged to, It was never of the person who was my husband, It was never yours, Arjun! You had failed me, when I needed you the most! Now I can't trust you any further, I don't want unending pain for both of us, so please let go of my hand!" said Yagya, in a hoarse whisper, which had taken away the breaths of everyone who was listening to the side of the story, which was never glanced upon, the side of love which always unrequited, the side of pain, which went unrecognized, the side of Yagyaseni, which no one noticed except her true guide, Govind.

Saavan Men Aankhon Ko, Kitanaa Rulaati Hai
Furaqat Men Jab Dil Ko Kisi Ki Yaad Aati Hai
Ye Zindagi Yuun Hi Barabaad Hoti Hai
Har Vaqt Honthon Pe Koi Fariyaad Hoti Hai
Naa Davaaon Kaa Naam Chalataa Hai
Naa Duaaon Se Kaam Chalataa Hai
Zahar Ye Phir Bhi Sabhi Kyon Piyaa Karaten Hain - 2
Jaane Kyon Log Mohabbat Kiyaa Karate Hain
" You hold me responsible for all this, Yagya? You forgot all those people who had scarred you but not me? Why?" asked Arjun, breaking down to the tears which had finally managed to come out.
" Who has the count of those who had hit on me? But the person whose hitting made me scarred was you, Arjun! You had scarred my soul, you had left it craving and pining for you, never to be mine! Everything was mine except you! Everything which I didn't want I had, but the only thing I ever craved for, till the eternity, was never mine!" said Yagya, with a control of her tears, which was shocking for everyone over there.
Govind and Subhi who were away from Yagya's sight, couldn't bear the pain these both were going through. Govind, the master of all the senses, had his senses losing at the Great Anshes of his beloved sister Adi Shakti and Mahadev, who were his favorite and the ones very close to his heart.

Mahabuub Se Har Gam Manasuub Hotaa Hai
Din Raat Ulfat Men Tamaashaa Khuub Hotaa Hai
Raaton Se Bhi Lambe Ye Pyaar Ke Kisse
Aashiq Sunaate Hain Jafaa-E-Yaar Ke Qisse
Bemuravvat Hai, Bevafaa Hai Vo,
Us Sitamagar Kaa Apane Dilabar Kaa,
Naam Le Le Ke Duhaai Diyaa Karate Hain
Jaane Kyon Log Mohabbat Kiyaa Karate Hain
Tears continued to flow from the great warrior's sharp eyes, which never failed to reach its target. In the same way today Yagya's questions and the pain-filled words had found its destination. Pain seemed to be the understatement to describe their state but words, couldn't stop today. Because if they stopped today, they would never come out.
" I was the beautiful garden, the renowned beauty of Aryavart, who had decayed in the autumn of your painful love. The sighs resonating from my pain, were only mine. The story which my heartbeats wished to tell you, remained to be only mine. The flowers of that beautiful garden had fallen off, but the thorns were left behind. Why, Arjun?
Why was there so much of pain in your love?
Why was there never 'we' in that love? Why was it only 'I' in that?
Why did silence become the way of expression for you?
WHY??"
Shouted Yagya, finally letting out a hysterical cry which could have moved even heartless person. The ages old pain stored in her, the question which were unanswered were finally presented. But will these questions get answer from the targeted person?
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READ THIS!!
This update had truly made me go into deep pain! My gut was churning throughout the time I was writing this! One of the most difficult and most painful part I ever wrote! Or maybe the part closest to my heart! Because in this update are some questions, which I had once asked, only to be left answerless!
Both this part and the next part are dedicated to Mamta, as she was the one who suggested me these songs! Thanks a lot, Mamta!
Hope you liked it!
Please like and comment!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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Sethu parvathi

@SethuParvathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

yayyy me first!!! 😃

ohhh my godd...arjun broke down into tears??😲😭

now even yagya will join him!! 😉 soulmates yah...so ofcourse😊

i can seriously imagine shapoo in this scene dude!!! and i really miss dem!!😭

btw yagya...now let madhav nd subhi leave the place nd let dem get into a seriouss talk!! cuz maybe if subhi is der yagya wont be able 2 question arjun abt the marriages...she may feel awkward!!😕 (just a suggestion yah)

or if such questions r no more der den chuck...now let arjun do his part of "answering"!!!

and atlast both reunite 4ever!!!😊

Edited by SethuParvathi - 10 years ago

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Okay I am second, now that makes me grumpy!🤔 *Hmpphss and sits on the bed*

Anyway, for this update I don't have words! You know I was so into the update while reading it, I read it again and again Yagya! It was overwhelming and heart wrenching to read about both sides and especially Draupadi's.👏

I think you perfectly captured the whole essence as to why there is so much pain! With each passing line I was just praying that this update doesn't end, not today!

I don't think there is only one part where I can say that it was written beautiful because the whole update was brilliantly penned.

Yagya's side of the story has always been significant but the way you brought it forward with this update was stupendous. It was extremely moving. I think venting it all out is always important and that's what I suspect will be happening on this 'blessed' terrace. So thankful that Govind managed to convince Yagya to come up. Just waiting to see what will happen next. Really waiting for everything to be sorted and the pain from the past to be overshadowed by love from the present!😳

Anyway, amazing update! I loved it!😃

Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago

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Yagya

@Fiery_PM

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Res!

Jaldi unres kar!

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sadiasaba68

@sadiasaba68

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#756

such a divine update it was yagya..
what should i say i don't know... this update is beyond words dear.. just divine..
hats off to u girl.. u r awesome sweety..
u know the perfect way of expressing emotions...
all those questions must be answered now..
i hope arjun answer them perfectly n both of them unite soon 😃
update soon ⭐️

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Wow what a splendid update
Really u nailed it

It was damn emtnl
I so loved it

I m still in its spellbound

I just hope they get unite soon

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: -Fiery_PM-

Jaldi unres kar!

Fiery PM, kar diya unres! BIG TIME unres! Go read the comment, you'll know what I mean!😉

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Okay Yagya. I have to agree this chapter was deep. Both the sides, that of Arjun and that of Draupadi, had equal fault according to me. Though we can differ.

I agree with Yagya's words. When she asked him,

Why was there never 'we' in that love? Why was it only 'I' in that?

it reflects the reality of the human world. As far as I have experienced, love for people mean only receiving they forget that it involves reciprocating it too. This is why many, many relations break easily.

But I have to say, Arjun did love her. Yes, all his love caused to her was pain. But he still loved her. Some strings grow too complex to untie them. Really, it is hard to untie two strings of two hearts who love each other, even if they cause nothing but pain.

It is ture that she received silence when she wanted his voice. It is true that he bound his love in the boundaries of 'dharma' which could not be broken. But at times, some boundaries have to be broken to accept and reciprocate love.

These are my thoughts, and I am not saying I am completely correct, but if this is not true I surely don't know what love is!

Anyways, wonderfully written.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago