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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja

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sab wait kar rahe hai rashmi
please update do na ..
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eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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Hello everyone,
Sorry that I could not reply on the comment of last update of PV and thans for understanding my POV to make maan decide to marry Geet urgently ans show her the surprise of Yash..
My one reader has forced me to reply on her comment ..
and she is my one of the good friend on GF.. She is Kiran
here my reply for her comment

Kiran..

Don't worry yaar jo bolna hai khul ke bolo..

At least tum bolti to ho..

it's only a clash between you and Me .. I mean between a writer and a reader.. You think what you have experienced and I write what I have experienced In my life seeing people around,, and you will not be disagreed to me that I have seen more life that you

One of my GF friend told me that her MIL died when her hubby was very young.. and her FIL got remarried..and now he even does not remenmer clearly that in which year his first wife died.. So I have these kind of experiences..

But still I like your spirit that you say what you think.. tum bindaas bolo jo bolna hai.. I m here to reply you whatever best I can...

I can see that you are against Maan you are only seeing what he said.. but you did not notice that yash too compared Geet with arpita telling Maan that he is lucky to have a mature wife..Do you think he insulted Geet by comparing Geet with Arpita? .. Not at all.. Same was the case with maan.. they were twin brothers .. got married at the same time and Not only maan but everyone liked Geet's chirpy nature. In such case It's very natural to compare two people

And here in India in arrange marriages life starts with physical relations and couple get to know eachother slowly later..Same was happening with maan and Arpita

Kiran..if you remember I never made Maan to say that he never loved Arpita... He always said that they could not reach to the level of love as time felt short.. .

..har kisi ko mukammal jahan nahin milta ...humein ussi jahan ko apne jeene layak banana padta hai..

I completely agree with you but maan too never said that he disliked arpita.. they were progressing at a slow pace as Arpita was always busy in getting the tag of a great bahu from Taiji .She never wanted to be scolded by her for her carelessness Like she scolded geet. Once she even criticized Geet for behaving immaturely in front of Maan and That Time Maan did not say a bad word to arpita for criticizing Geet.. If he had liked Geet over Arpita he might have scolded her.. he just said ki har koi ek jaisa nahin hota ya aisa hi kuchh aur kaha I don't remember now...

And about arpita"feelings were mutual..If you remember when Maan was going abroad she was worried for packing his stuff not for being away from him for so many days. She was so scared for her good image in front of taiji that she never came near to maan or touched him in front of all

And Maan only wished Arpita to behave openly ..He never forced her or demanded her to change herself...

Onte thing I like here about him..Hetold Geet what he thought about Arpita.. If he wanted he could lie to her that he was missing her..and in that case it would be a cheating to Arpita,ki dil me Geet hai aur Arpita ko yaad karne ka natak kar rah hai..

For your second thought that he used his wife for s##.. I don't agree with you ..If it was so then he should have behaved the same with Geet too after marriage.. Did he do that? No.. He waited for her...And if he had the mentality of only having sex with his wife then he must have forced Arpita.. but it was not so..Arpita never showed her displeasure about this thing..

And Yess ...I m saying here if Arpita have behaved like Geet behaved with yash that meant that she too was going to be as innocent as Geet was .. and I m sure Maan would not have forced her .. Did he force Geet after their marriage. He just waited for the day when she accepts him... He only became intimate with her after their confession as the situation was different till then,, With Arpita he was tied in an arranged marriage to being physical was not illogical at all.. Did Arpita show any symptom that he forced her?

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And he did not fall his deceased brother's wife instantly.. he was only fulfilling his promise to Yash that he would help Geet in his absence which he made him unknowingly when he said Yash to bring Arpita from her parental house..He and Geet were friends only and he did not fall for her intentionally ..Haalaat the jo wo aisa feel karne laga uske liye..

He never voiced his feelings out for her.. Even after marriage with Geet he never said to her a word about his love for her..

And Here It was Geet who confessed her love to him.. Though Maan too planned to confess his love on the same day..

And most important fact is that I did not bring arpita as one of the leads.. She was a medium to make this title PV worth as I wanted to show both Maan and Geet married to different partners..

Aur sabse badi baat..every fiction has some loop oles and obviously this story too has .. But please yaar don't trouble your heart for this FF.. if you will take it all on your heart then I must say tum to movie bhi enjoy nahin kar pati hogi as they are filled with so many errors... after all they are fiction too..and I m sure that my surprise related to arpita will definitely give you some satisfaction..😃

Ab main thak gayi tumhaare liye reply type karte karte..Next update likhun?😆😆

Who ever is confused to see my this big update size reply then I want you to see Kiran's comment..She is highly attached with this FF.. and She is simply putting her POV about Maan's character..Nothing is personal here..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120736864

But one thing I must say..Kiran you are the only one who are not only one of my my admirers but my best critic too.. Love you dear.. Keep commenting like this only..



@Sanjana (Braineaterowl)-Every good thing has to come to it's end and same is with PV.. But sharukh ne kaha na ,Ki Show khatam nahin hua..Picture abhi baki hai mere dost..😆😆



Now enjoy the update

Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago






Lovely SR Banner-By lakshmi🤗 Love You Lakshu.. wont say Thanks for this❤️❤️



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Part 86

Maan informed Ram about the status of the finished as well as new deal and also informed him that they had extended their stay in shimla... Ram had no Problem with that but he told Maan that senior Khuranas and senior Handas were planning to go on a short trip after Rahul and Anie come back from their Honeymoon..

After finishing his call Maan entered the room and the heavenly sight inside of the room took his heart and breath away..

Have a Look at the dreamy VM of Maaneet SR made by Valli 30..

https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x2kgapu_maaneet-baho-ki-darmiya_tv

Geet dressed up in that bridal dress was sitting in the middle of the decorated bed .. It was his dream to see Geet as his bride and that day had come..

He in the trance closed the door of the room and came near the bed but did not went near her. He was staring at Geet from a distance..

Geet as soon as he entered the room was flowing his moves.. She was playing with her dupatta in nervousness..and her tows curled inside of her feet.. Maan was standing almost behind her. When Geet found him silent She turned and looked at him

but swiftly turned back as he was looking at her with deep and dark eyes.She found herself unable to look at him at that moment. She gulped her saliva as she was feeling her throat dry ..Her chest was heaving up and down and her lips were moving in close and opening position..Her heart was racing too fast as if it was going to jump out of her throat..

She waited him to say or move but he was still standing there lost in Geet..

Finally Geet asked-Maan.. Why are you looking like it at me?.. Please... I m feeling very nervous..

Maan-Geet I m trying to believe if it is my dream or the reality?

Geet smiled a little and said-How can you judge from such a distance if it is dream or reality? You have to feel it by touching it.. and she forwarded her hand towards him..

He held it and came close to her and sat near her. His eyes was constantly staring her face only and this made Geet a little shy and she removed her eyes from him..

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan


Maan held her face on her chin and made her to look at him.. .He put his hand on her cheeks and caressed it with a soft touch and Geet felt her body reacting in different way at that touch.. She closed her eyes to feel it..

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

Maan-Geet..

Geet with closed eyes -Hmm..

Maan-Tumhen kya lagta hai .. Ye Sapna hai ya sach?

Geet Held his hand on her cheeks and looked in to is eyes- Don't know Maan..It's all new for me. I never thought of this day in my life but it has come.. so can't decide if it's dream or real..

Maan kissed on her cheek-till now it was a dream for both of us but today we will make it real.

He looked deep in to her eyes and said.I Love You Geet..

Geet too looked at him .. there was nothing but immense love in his eyes for her and she reciprocated his feelings in the same way-I love you too Maan..

Maan Kissed on her face every where.. On her forehead then her eyes and then he brushed his lips near her and Geet in a trance opened her mouth and Mann got the access in her mouth to tastes the sweetness of her wife

Khulte Band Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi
Khulte Badn Hote Labhon Ki Ye Ankahi
Mujhse Keh Rahi Hai Ki Badhne De Bekhudi
Mil Yoon Ki Daud Jaayein Nas Nas Mein Bijliyaan

He sucked her lips for few moment and then looked at her with bedroom eyes.. Geet too looked at him and then lowered her gaze as she could feel herself burning under that gaze.

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

Maan removed her dupatta from her head.. and kissed her temple again..Geet's all senses were tuning senseless with his every touch on her..After putting her dupatta on her back he moved his hand on her face and Geet was only experiencing anew feeling with every passing moment..

She moaned-Maan.. and Maan stopped her from saying a word-No Geet Not now.. I won't allow anyone even a word between us..Iss pal ka humne kitna intezaar kiya hai.. so don't bring anyone or anything between us..

Saying this he again kissed near her ear and took her earlobes in his mouth and nibbled them.. Geet held Maan's arms tightly to hold herself under his sweet torture..She was losing her control over her body..

Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand
Aasmaan Ko Bhi Ye Haseen Raaz Hai Pasand
Uljhi Uljhi Saanson Ki Aawaaz Hai Pasand
Moti Luta Rahi Hai Saawan Ki Badliyaan

He brought her hand and removed her Maang teeka and put that aside..

Geet was sitting there allowing him to rule over her..He while removing her jewelry did not remove his eyes from her

.He removed her jewelry one by one and cupped her face in his hands ..

Geet's facial expressions were changing in every second moment under his gaze.He could feel warmness between his palms. Her lips were trembling .Her body was shivering and Maan felt it..


He asked-Geet Are you ok?

And Geet could not hold herself and hugged him tightly-Maan Muje darr lag raha hai..

Maan hugged her back-Don't be Geet. main hoon na tumhaare paas. Just relax.and Maan taking her in his arms in that hugging position made her lay on the bed..

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Baahon Ke Darmiyaan Do Pyaar Mil Rahe Hain
Jaane Kya Bole Mann Dole Sunke Badan
Dhadkan Bani Zubaan

Baahon Ke Darmiyaan

and Kissed her eyes one by one..His hand was roaming on her body.. and Unknowingly Geet's hands too started to move on his back making him hard..

He wanted to feel her today without any hindrances.

Without any barrier.. Today nothing was there which was stopping them to feel each other .. every hurdle. Every promise ,every bit of their past was now open and their path to move on in their relation was clear ..His hand came on her exposed skin and Geet hold on Maan tightened more..They were so closed that the air too wasn't allowed to paas between them..

Maan held the string of her choli and pulled it.. and Geet's breath struck in her throat sensing that tug. Her whole body turned into jelly .. Her hold became more tight on him..And she hid herself completely in him..

Maan at her this reaction stopped his hand and looked at her her as if he was asking her if she was ready or not..Geet looked at him too and is if she understood his eyes.

She smiled a little and kissed lightly on his lips signaling him that she was ready to move with him in all senses..And Maan with her acceptance moved ahead and took her with him in to the new world of love passion and desires...

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And Far away ..Up in the sky a start started to shine brightly and then was twinkling very fast as if it was showing it's fellow stars that it was very happy today. As If he got it's desired wish fulfilled...It was shining so brightly that other stars lost their shine in front of it.. And in the next moment that star turned in to a shooting star and left the sky to reach to it's next destination...

Usually a shooting star fulfills the wishes of everyone but today it's own wish was fulfilled so it turned in to a shooting star itself. It started it's journey towards the earth as it had got it's destination...

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Morning was never this beautiful for Maan.. He always had a habit to wake up before Geet and to stare at her after their marriage..as It was always a best moment for him to find Geet this close to him.. But after their love confession it turned in to a passion to look at her in the morning..

Last night was the beginning of their new life as a couple.. they removed every distance whichever was between them..

Maan was staring at Geet with his tilted face because She was sleeping soundly in his arms with her head on his shoulder her face was very close to him... her koel and vermillion was smuggled all over her face still she was looking beautiful to him.. He caressed her face lightly to feel her and kissed on her forehead but that made Geet stir in her sleep... And after few efforts she opened her eyes and like always found Maan looking at her..

But today everything had changed for her and last night's memories made her shied.. and she hid her face in his soulder to avoid his gaze.

.Maan smiled to see her like that and made er to look at him by holding her chin- Good Morning Geet

Geet shyly looked at him and Said in a low voice-Good morning ..

Maan turned toward her and took her in his arms..and realized their position..Both one more time felt warmness in their bodies and soon they were floating in their world of dreams..

For Geet it was all over a new ocean of feelings. But she was feeling tired now.. and she slept soon after their love making.. Maan too slept for some time..

They woke up little late ..

Geet-Maan bhookh lagi hai.

Maan look at the watch it was 12 at noon.. He asked her to get fresh while he was ordering their meal..

Geet- wo mere kapde..

Maan-They are near you only ..pahan lo..

Geet gulped her saliva-k kaise.. I mean..aap dekh rahe ho na.

Maan looked at her with his eyebrows up.

Geet-Maan please aap udhar dekho na... Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai and she closed his eyes with her palm.. maan held her palm in his hand and kissed there and turned to the other side without making her more shy..

Geet wore her nighty and went in to the washroom.. Maan ordered for the food and he too put on his clothes..

some minutes later door of washroom clicked and like a strong fragrance hit the nostrils of Maan..He looked in to that direction. Geet was coming out of the washroom..she had taken head wash..and was appearing to Maan like any freshly bloomed morning flower with dew drops on it..

She was in bath rob and went near the mirror to get ready.. Maan in a trance moved towards her..

Geet who was picking up the comb in her hand felt Maan's arms around her waist..

and soon his face was between her shoulder and neck..

He was taking that sweet fragrance of soap and shampoo mixed with geet's aroma in to his heart and that feel was so heavenly for him.. Geet who was trying to hold herself from this sweet torture turned and hugged him.. Maan's arms too tightened around her..

After few minutes Maan parted her away from him and cupped her face in his palms..

He couls not hold himself any more and leaned on her face to taste those freshly washed patels.

.Geet lost all her hold on herself and her whole body turned in to a jelly to find herself unable to stand She held Maan tightly for support and Maan too held her tightly to prevent her from separating from him..

And Their sweet and passionate moment was disturbed by the doorbell of their room.. Maan heard that and left geet and found her almost out of her breath.. he made her sit on the bed and said kissing her cheek-Sorry sweetheart..You just relax here .. I will be back with food..

And Maan opened the door and took the food from the service boy.. and after closing the door kept the food on the table..and asked Geet to eat that But Geet said to her to get ready..

Maan-Are you sure you can wait till then..

Geet-Yess.. ab app jaldi karo Maan.. I m really hungry..

And Maan went to washroom saying -few minutes geet.. I m coming..

And Geet looked at him entering in to the washroom..Having a shy smile on her face she got up to get ready..

Untill Maan was having his bath Geet got ready and later both had their meal together..

Precap- Not decided yet.


Part-85<<prev/next->>


BLOG UPDATE

It was the toughest update for me to type..Sorry if anyone is disappointed with it.. this is my limit to write..

Eagerly waiting for your comments


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Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part .. Finally Maaneet stepped into next level of their life .. The update was full of Maaneet lovey moments and their romance
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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🤣tera final exam successfully complete hogayi hai😆😆shayad apne real exam ke waqt bhi itna tension nahi hotha jitna iss update keliye hua😆😆😆

finally sab readers ke saath saath maaneet ka intezaar bhi khatam karwadi tune🤣🤣sab kitna taras gaye thay iss pal keliye. Maan ne tho kitne din tande tande paani se nahana chahiye gaana gaatha hoga🤣ab jab sab ko patha hai ki tu kaise likhne waale ho sab ko yehi sabse jyaada pasand aayegi dekhlena.😳😳


sach mein the update was very nice aur saath saath valli ki dihui pictures aur vm extra asset bangayi hai update keliye, aur shayad tujhe thoda easy bhi kardiya hoga😉😆😆ab iss update ka adha credit valli ko bhi dena padega😳
Edited by priya111111 - 10 years ago
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Rashmi...

WOW!!! u updated ...

Update
finally they submit nd complete each other ..
very lovely start of d day ...
beautifully written ...
so calm nd romantic moments ,, Maan was very caring for her ...
it's end of their wait nd longing nd start of beautiful life ..
Love it ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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ONE THING I LEARNED AFTR READING DIS UPDATE...
DAT NEVER B IN A HURRY FOR ANYTHING...

AAP SOCH RAHI HOGI NA..YEH KYA BAK BAK KAR RAHI HAI...
OFCOURSE WEN I READ...NOTE FOLLOWD BY UPDATE...
I THOUGHT TO SKIP NOTE..AS AAPKA NOTE THINKING KAHI ...MUJHE MINI ATTACK NA DEY DEY😆😆😆😆

ND I THOUGHT D ONE IN BOLD ND RED IS UR NOTE..SO I STARTED READING FROM BELOW..
ND I WAS ..LIK..YEH KIRAN KAUN HAI...MANEET KE BEECH MAIN..😕
YEH DONO THO HOTEL ROOM MAIN THEY NA..

ND DEN WEN I READ ...WRITER ND READER...BATTI JAL GAYI😛😛😛😛

DI...AAPKA NOTE TO...UPDATE SAY B BADA THA...😆😆
ND AM SAD...😭
HUM B AAPKE ADMIRER HAI..AAP TOH BHUL GAYE😡
IS BECHARI NACHIS KO Q YAAD RAKHENGE

COMMING TO UPDATE...

HAAYE..DAT WAS 😳😳😳

PICS...ND D DESCRIPTION ...DAT GAVE GHOSE BUMPS
ND U KNOW.. BAHO KE DARMIYAN SONGS..ALWAYS MAKE ME REMEMBER RISHBALA
ND DER STUDIO NT..😳😳😳😳
AAPNE NAHI DEKHA HOGA SHAYAD-MADHUBALA...

BT MUST SAY DAT VIDEO BY VALLI DI...DAT WAS 😳👏👏
NEXT TIME FOR SURE ...IF I LL LISTEN DIS SONG...PAKKA MUJE YEH VIDEO ZAROOR YAAD AAYEGA..


LOVED HOW HE EASED HER TENSION...ND ASSURED HER HE WAS DER WIT HER ND WILL BE DER FOR HER..SO NO NEED TO WORRY..

ND WAT I LOVED MOST IS




HAAYE...MAIN B WISH MAANG LU KYA...
ITNA REAL TUTATA HUA TARA HAI...
DO TARE TUTANE CHAHIYE NA...EK ARPITA AND EK YASH KA🤔
OK..I UNDERSTAND...HE GOT A DESTINATION...😃😃

MORNING AGAIN ...MANEET MOMENTS ..HER SHYNESS..
I THOUGH MAAN LL TEASE HER ND LL B MORE NAUGHTY..

WEN HE TURNED ON GEET KA BOLNE PAY I WAS LK..😲😲 YEH KAB SUDAR GAYA...

LOVED D PART..VERY VERY MUCH...

ND HAPPY DAT I COULD COMMENT D MOMENT I HAVE READ..
WARNA MY BUSY SCHEDULE..IS LIKE...PATA NAHI KAB COMMENT KARTI HU

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON...

WAITIN FOR NEXT DASU UPDATE...

PS...WAISE AAPKA NOTE B ACHA THA...EXPLAINED UR POV ..I MEAN...MAAN ND ARPITA ND YASH KA STANCE DER THOUGHTS SO NIECLY...
👍🏼

Edited by Desire6 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Superb Osm
5naly maaneet became one :-) n their love is now blosm more
waiting 4 nxt

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