Originally posted by: canapoem
Kiran, hearty congratulations on the completion of your first story. 👏
Kudos to you for having selected such a complex story to be your first story. Every character showed so many layers of emotions and growth and you did full justice to all the characters.
Take for instance Arnav, you showed so many layers of emotions in him right from losing his parents to the betrayal he felt towards his own relatives, to living and growing in the friendship of NK and Rashi, to the guilt of being responsible for Rashi's death, to falling in love with Khushi and living in a fear that she might reject him due to her sister's death and finally to destroying all the demons in his mind and accepting a future life full of happiness and love.
Similarly I loved how you showed NK's character. Falling in love is one thing but dealing with the death of a loved one and marrying someone who was almost responsible for your lover's death to save your friend takes so much courage and you portrayed those emotions so nicely that it was tough to say that you are a first time writer.
Coming to this update, it was indeed a sweet sweet update.
It is said that opposites attract each other and it turned out to be true in case of the bubbly Sheetal and the silent Aman. 😆
Loved the wedding decorations and their dresses. Khushi is still the naive cute girl who did not know the meaning of "Bachelor's party".
Finally Arnav did find his love, his Khushi and thus ended his quest for love.
You are indeed sweet to mention my name in your thank yous and Pandu, I will always be there for you whenever you need me. 🤗
A song dedicated to Arnav and Khushi on their wedding.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oCWoL4o4Kn4[/YOUTUBE]
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