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Posted: 10 years ago

Part = 69

After the party Geet gets ready to go home with Pinky as usual...

Papaji will be accompanying them, they'll drop Geet at KM and go home then...

Geet is till thinking about Maan and their puzzled relationship status...

She is all the more confused now, are they only friends? And what about her feelings for him? Does she have any rights over Maan? What about Maan? His passion, his possessiveness, his looks, and his hunger...

Geet is packing her bag and still thinking ...

Pinky: Geet

Geet doesn't respond...

Pinky too knows what's wrong with her...poor girl...she should be embarrassed after that dance, Maan sir just took control of her and she had no other go...

Pinky: Geeet jaldhi kar yaar, hummed her ho rahi hai

Geet: haan Pinky

Geet hurries...as she turns towards the door she encounters Maan...

Pinky leaves seeing Maan...

Geet starts shivering...ye yahan phir se kyun aaye hai? aaj ke liye toh itna kaafi nahi hai kya?

Geet tries to ignore him and leave...

Geet: Pinky, oye Pinky, rukh jaa, mein bhi aathi hoon

Maan blocks her way...and Pinky had gone...

Geet becomes nervous as it's obvious that Maan knows what's in her mind and that she has literally become his deewani...she tries to make up for that and behaves as if she is not that Geet who just melted in his arms and danced with him...

She looks at him like a stranger, but little did she know that she can only fool herself and she can't fool Maan...

Geet looks into his eyes and stares...

Geet tries to make way but in vain...

Maan looks staright into her eyes and her eyes could never lie to him, they just keep conveying her love to his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Maan keeps moving forward and Geet keeps stepping back stil she hits the wall...

Geet stammers...: woh Pinky Pinky chali gayi

She is scared and her voice sinks...

Maan closes her mouth with his hand...

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet blinks...Maan looks into her beautiful eyes and keeps staring them...

Geet somehow manages to get away...

She looks worried...no how will she go home alone at this hour of the night...

Ye Maan ne toh Geet ko hamesha pareshaan karke rakha hai...

Maan notices her worried face...

Maan: kya hua Geet? tum itne pareshaan kyun lagthi?

Geet gets angry...all this happened only b'coz of Maan and he pretends as if he is not even here!

Geet: kya hua? Aap samajthe kya apne aap ko?

Maan blinks...Geet tries to put the blame on him...

Geet: aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan doesn't know what to say...

He just steps back...: woh mein

Geet: kya mein mein? Ab Pinky bhi chali gayi hai, babaji, mein kaise ghar jaaon? Aur akheli kya karoongi?

Maan: tum akheli kahan ho Geet? mein hoona?

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet panics and tries to stop him for she is afraid that she will lose her senses again and maybe cross her limits...

Geet tension ho jaathi...Maan sir

Maan is shocked...she was just now dancing with him with all the passions in the world and now she is treating him like a real boss as if she is just an employee...

Maan keeps staring Geet...

Geet: aapko ghar nahi jaana hai kya?

Maan: jaana hai, issiliye toh mein tummare paas aaya hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum mere saath hi aa sakthi ho Geet

Geet: aapke saath ?

Geet starts thinking hard to find a way to avoid him...

Geet bahut pareshaan ho jaathi...itne dher Maan ke saath akhele rehna jo hai...patha nahi Geet kya kya kar sakthi...ye toh ussko kudh hi nahi maloom haina?

Maan: toh ghar chalein Geet?

Maan starts to walk without waiting for her answer...

Geet had to follow him...

Maan wants to accompany her to the OH...

Geet: mein chali jaoongi sir, Gud night

Maan won't leave...he keeps coming...

Geet is afraid...what's wrong with him today? Babaji, inhe achanak kya ho gaya?

Kahin Maan sir ko bhi meri bimari lag gayi hai kya?

This love fever is highly infectious, isn't it?

You never know when you will get infected and when the other person gets affected by your infections...all that happens without your knowledge and you will only know when you become serious...and when there is no cure...

You will never be able to get well and who needs a cure? You just want to stay love sick for ever, haina?

As she opens the door she finds the lights missing...

She is afraid to step in but she knows Maan won't leave is she doesn't get to her room...

Something is wrong with the electric lines and Nakul has called the electrician...

Maan knows that and that's why he wanted to accompany Geet...

Geet prays to babaji and tries to get in before Maan could switch on the torch...

Geet takes a couple of steps hits something anf falls...

Maan holds her and stops her from falling...

Maan: itni bhi kya jaldhi thi? Ek min rukh nahi sakthi, andhere mein kahan bhaagthi ho?

Maan lights the torch and looks into her scared eyes...

Geet fumbles trying to hide her anxiety...

Her heart starts thumping hard unable to bear his hotness, that too with Maan almost touching her she would burn anytime...

Geet: woh mujhe jaana hai

Geet tries to run away again but Maan stops her and pulls her closer...

Maan pulls her towards him and their eyes meet in the light of the torch...

Maan reads her mind immediately...

Maan: kyun Geet? mere saath akhele rehne se dar lagtha hai kya?

Geet aur darjaathi...

Geet tries to deny it...she won't let him know her feelings...

Geet: mujhe andhere se dar lagtha hai

Maan knows she is lieing ...

Maan: darne ki koi baat nahi, chalo mein tumme tummare kamre tak chodtha, isse pakdo

Maan gives the mobile to her...

Geet takes it from him immediately and tries to move forward...

But Maan lifts her in his arms and takes her in...

Geet keeps staring Maan...

Maan takes her to the room and lays her on the bed, covers her up and waits for her to sleep...

But how could Geet sleep when Maan is with her?

She pretends to be sleeping for Maan won't move from that place till he knows that Geet is comfortably sleeping without any fears...

After watching her for a while Maan leaves...

Geet then keeps thinking about Maan for a long time before she could sleep happily...

Yes,Geet is very happy tonight...

Maan then sleeps peacefully...he is also happy know...

Next morning Pinky comes to take Geet to college...

Dadi is surprised that Geet is still asleep...

Maan is ready to go to KC...

Maan is also looking for Geet only...

Pinky: dadima, Geet kahan hai?

Dadi: Geet abhi tak neeche nahi aayi beta, aap zara jaakhe dekho ki kya baat hai, shyad unki tabyat teek nahi ho?

Maan just runs towards OH and Pinky and Dadi just keep staring him...

Pinky realizes that she need not wait for Geet as Geet has got company now...

Pinky: teek hai Dadima, ab mein chalthi hoon

Dadi too knows that Pinky is right and she smiles...

Dadi: bye Pinky

Maan is worried about Geet and so he himself went to check her...

As Maan rushes into her room he finds her sleeping peacefully...

He just stops and he keeps admiring his sleeping beauty...

Maan gets closer and bends to looks at her ever so lovely face...

Geet feels his presence and wakes up...

She gently opens her eyes and finds Maan...she thinks she is dreaming and she smiles at him and covesr her face to continue her beautiful dream...

Maan whispers in her ears...: gud morning Geet

Geet then realizes that Maan is really here and it's not one of her dreams...

She just gets up quickly and hits Maan...

Maan: sambalke Geet

Geet looks at the clock and it's already 9'o clock...

Geet: babaji, ye kya ho gaya? Aaj toh mera seminar hai aur mein itne dher tak kaise so gayi?

Geet bahut pareshaan ho jaathi...

Maan: relax Geet, tum jaldhi tayaar ho jao, mein tumme drop kartha hoon

Maan tells Pinky that he'll drop Geet and Pinky eaves...

Geet gets ready fast...

She hurries to the door where Maan is waiting for her in the car...

She gets in and looks at the watch...

Maan smiles...: don't worry Geet, hum 15 minute mein college pohunch jayenge

Maan starts off fast and keeps driving faster...

Geet is then relieved that she can get to college in time...

Then she finds her tummy making noise...she is hungry...

Last night she couldn't eat after that passionate dance as she didn't feel hungry at all...

But now all that nasha has gone and she could feel her hunger...

But she had no time for breakfast and nor does she have time to go to the canteen and have a vada paav...

How is she going to manage her seminar? What if she faints?

Geet looks at Maan and stares...she is really angry with him for her sleepless night and being late...

Maan understands why she is upset...Geet had taught him know, you get angry when your stomach is empty...

Maan takes a parcel and gives it to Geet...

Geet is surprised...

Maan: kholke khao, phir tummara dimag tanda ho jayega

Geet pretends not to be hungry...

Geet: nahi, mujhe nahi chahiye

Maan: mujhe patha hai Geet, tumme bhook lagthi hai, khalo

Maan looks at her and smiles...

Geet makes a face and opens the parcel and starts eating...

Maan just keeps admiring her as she enjoys her food like a child having his favorite ice-cream...

Maan had asked Nakul to pack her breakfast so that she could eat in the car...

After Geet finishes eating Maan gives her water to drink...

Geet drinks the water and turns towards Maan...: thank you Maan sir

She smiles and thanks him...

They have come to the college and Geet is about to get out of the car...

Maan stops her...: rukho Geet

Geet is puzzled...

Maan finds a bit of the sandwich sticking above her lips...

Maan wipes it off with his long fingers and Geet feels embarrassed as it's her college campus...

Geet blushes...

Maan: ab jao Geet, all the best

Geet runs off as she couldn't wait there fearing more trouble infront of her friends...

Part70


Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Full of maneet n their love..loved it..
N maans care for herhe even parceled food gor her
When will they express themselves than playing hide n seek
Awesome part
Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dear ...geet trying to hide her feelings from maan .. but maan already knows geet condition ...lets see what will geet do next..

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Posted: 10 years ago
geet sahi mein jhalli hai...

nice update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part .. full of Maaneet .. Geet trying to hide her feelings .. wow Maan got food for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 69 - geet tries to hide her feelings from maan but maan already knows about it
kab ye dono apne pyar ka izahaar karenge..
loved the way maan took care of her each needs
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Posted: 10 years ago
loving and caring side of maan for geet awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely cute superb update..te way geet trying to avoid my maan but he is hell bend on teasing her and te way my maan can see her love for him wat ever she try to hide was lovely..te way my maan ki concern and taking her to her room even after her deny was lovely..my maaneet ki hide and seek love game was lovely cute..i love te update
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part

geet ka kuch nahi ho sakta
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome parts
loved it dear

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