Dil Ka Ristha...(Fan-Fic) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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no prob u can cont wenever u want ...cuz we all u that u can't ignore writing the ff ucz u'll always b cuming here and we'll haunt u till u continue... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Dil Ka Ristha...

Part #1

It's 8:30 a.m... a normal day for Nahar, well actually a late day. Nahar gets up and realises that he late. Yes, late for college -- that to on his first day. He had promised to meet Chandani at the gate at 8:45 a.m. He quickly gets dressed and has a ceral bars and rushes in his Toyota to college. He reaches there are 8:50 a.m. Chandani was surprised that Nahar had made it on time..well close to time. Chandani and Nahar walk in and meet the rest of there friends. Nahar-Chandani;s friends come jumping to Chandani and Nahar like there seeing them after a long timee. Everyone goes to classes and enjoys there first day of school.

It's 5:30 p.m. Nahar drops Chandani at home. He goes home and notices his father's face. He touches his feet and asks whats the matter? His father (with a serious face) says Nahar this is your last year in college and after this we will run the business empire with your brother Brijesh. Brijesh is a successful business man because of his wife, your sister-in-law Tara. Your mother and I want your life to be the same. Thats why we have looked a girl for you. Her name is Saloni and she is a rajput. (shows a picture) Nahar is hurt and upset. He couldnt stop thinking about this, what would he say to Chandani, the girl he loved all his life. He decides to go tell his father about Chandani. Nahar goes down the stairs and sees a family (I know the guy is suppose to visit the girl but im changing it 😳) He walks up and his father introduces him to Saloni. He asks Nahar to take Saloni outside and have a chat. Saloni and Nahar sit on the swing and have a sweet/cute conversation. They become good friends. Saloni in heart keeps telling herself that she must tell Nahar the secret... the secret of her liking him but yet she didnt say anything and kept her mouth sut. Nahar liked Saloni as a friend but decided to tell Saloni about his gf, Chandani. Nahar explains everything to Saloni . Saloni is shocked, she has no words. Saloni tells Nahar that they should get engaged because if he says no then his father would want him to get married to someone else. She tells him that she totally understands what he's going through and she will help him in every step he takes. Nahar is happy that Saloni had accepted him the way he is. They go back inside and the engagement date is set in 2 weeks.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Next Day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nahar goes to college and sees Saloni, he introduces Chandani and Saloni. Nahar explians everything to Chandani about His and Saloni's plan. Chandani agrees but gets frighten that Nahar will move away from her. Nahar reaches home and takes enough courage to tell his father about Chandani. He tells his father the truth about him and his gf. His father smiles and says why didnt you tell me this earlier. Nahar is surprised and explains his reasons. Nahar's father and Chandani's father make the engagement 2 weeks from now. Nahar's father calls Saloni's father and lets him know about Nahars decision. Saloni is hurt and cries as she was losing her love. Saloni takes the truth and prays to god for her love.

College friends all decide to meet at the park and have an evening picnic. Saloni - Nahar - Chandani are also there. Saloni is talking to Seema. Nahar and Chandani are behind. Games are going to begin and Dhruv needs a partner. Nahar says he'll get Saloni. Saloni tells Seema.. " I was so close to getting himbut yet I am starting to loose my love ... " Nahar is stunned to hear this.

Will post the next part soon. Hope you all enjoyed it..its my first time 😳 Do post what you liked and what you didnt like 😊

Thanks,

Gurprit 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey I am the first one to read and comment honey. very well done. excellent. can't wait to read the next part. 👏 👏 kya baat hai pahele hi try me bazi mar lee. proud of you.
love from yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great start 😉 😉 cant wait for the next one
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part loved it 👏 😃 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was great! can't wait for the next part! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ur story is really good. The idea is good. Ur style is different then mine, totally, but i liked ur style too. Less jhak jhak and more story. Will wait for the next part.

Aisha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this fanfic sounds great and the first part was awesome, why did u stop writing?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes...gurpz...why did you stop writing?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww gurpreet writing ff is a great surprise usse bhi bada surprise guys will find out after reading her first part gurpreet u rocked great job write fast so dat we can read jaldi jaldi i like dur storyline 👏

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