~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added)

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Shivika Agarwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Cute update it was I wud say 😃

Sandhir toh sandhir hai 😆

Beautifully penned 👏

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Indhu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Nice update!!

Jyada clieffe mat Dena pls

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SIMMI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Moi kya bolu ab kya bolu ab aap hi batao 😆 Hamesha itne acche updates deke hamari bolti band kar dete Ho aap ab me or kya bol sakti Hu And aap ko to cliffies bahut pasand h na 😡 Jo hamari band bajate h... Ab off course I loved it Update soon ur twists and turns And do pm me

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payal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Hey
Nice concept
I read 9 part together 🤣
But i really love your story
Update soon
Waiting for next part

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Anushka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Lovely update👏

Too good

Next chappy soon

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kavya01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

nice one...waiting for the twists...i hope it would be exciting.. :)

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#377

~Chapter 12~

At night,Sanyukta & Randhir falls asleep while talking,they were in trench..

In moning,when Randhir woke,he was feeling strange because Randhir's head was on Sanyukta's lap, he was just lost in that movement,sun rays were falling on Sanyukta's face and her silky hairs,it was like his best morning because he saw sanyukta's face on first

He kept on looking at her face .. After sometime,he felt movement in sanyukta's body indicating that she is about to wake .. Randhir closed her eyes pretending to sleep as he was scared of sanyukta's slap 😆 .. Because the position in which randhir was sleeping,sanyukta won't leave him without slapping 🤣

Sanyukta wakes,she stretchs her arms and then suddenly she notices that Randhir's head is on her lap,she thought that Randhir is sleeping

S- haye sote huye bhi kitne cute lagte ho tum( and puts her right hand on
his right cheek) Randhir i know tha you loves me trully,ye bat to mujhe bohat pehle hi samajh a chuki thi,par i am not sure about my feelings and waise bhi jiski zindagi mein mein jati hoon,use dunia hi chodni padti h,pehle mom,phir kannu, isi wajh se mein
dad k zada close nhi hoon... aur mein tumhein khona nhi chahti because kannu k bad tum aise insanho jisne mujhe samjha hai aur mujhe tolerate kar skte ho (and then smiles)

R(To himself) -ab kyun na isse panga lia jaye,

He moves his body little indicating that he was slepping and is about to awake and due to their akward position,Sanyukta closes her eyes

R-Sanyukta u look so beautifull while sleeping too and aaj jab maine sabse pehle tumhara face dekha hai to i know k mera day bohat acha jayega,agar aise hi roz mujhe
tumhari lap p sone ko milega to mein to apna ghar yhin bna leta hoon

He knew that sanyukta is not sleeping,so he says everything .. He knew that if he will say this directly in front of her,then he will get a tight slap on his face from his lady hittler 🤣
he gets up and Shakes sanyukta's shoulder to wake her

r- uth jao subh hoghi

s( in a sleepyvoice) good moning

R- ab yahan moning good kaise ho skti h.. pura din kharab hogya... ab utho niklna h ya yahin ghar banana h.. Sanyukta was trying hard to control her blush but unable,she was blushing, Randhir was looking at her from corner of eye...

s- han chlo niklte h yaha
se..

Sandhir got up and tried to go out of trench...they tried so many times but failed,so many times they fell down and got up,

Meanwhile Randhir got an idea but Sanyukta refused..
The idea was Randhir will pic her up from waist,then she will try to go up and will put her feet on Randhir's shouldersand then she will go out and after that she will take Randhir out.. She was refusing but Randhir insised so she agreed..

He held her from waist,both felt curent in their bodies,both fallen down... Sanyukta fell on Randhir and there was a cute eyelock..

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa
Is dard-e-dilki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa depoori tarah

R- waise tum itni halki bhi nhi ho

S-yooouuu ( and softly hit her hand on his shoulder)

R- ab khadi hogi ya???

S-han han ho rhi hoon I dont think k this plan is good

R- arey yahi plan theek h beacuse phone mein network bhi nhi hai,kisi ko bula bhi nhi
skte so chlo

S- haan par dhyan se,mujhe haddian nhi tudwani apni..

Again Randhir pics her up she was feeling uncomfortable but anyhow Sanyukta came out...

S- chalo ab mein chlti hoon,byby

R-are bdi selfish ho tum,mujhe bhi to bahar nikalo

S- acha?? Mujhe tumhein bhi bahar nikalna h

R- dekho Sanyukta mujhe bahar nikalo warna(showing his
indexfinger)

S (showing her tounge and thumbs down) byby Randhir

Randhir made a sad face but he knew that she will take him out
after few minutes,Sanyukta came with and rope and tells him to come out,
Randhir holds it and comes out by holding Sanyukta's hand.

S- toh chlein wapis??

R- haan chalo

S- mera hath

R- haan tumhara hi h,maine kaunsa sath lekar jana h,mere pas hai mere wo bhi do

S- uuggghhh Randhir i vl kill u

R- u cant sweet heart

S-shut up Randhir chlo yaha se

R(in mind)- Sanyukta i knw that you too loves me par tum bol nahi rahi aur ye baat tumse bulwa kar rhunga,mujhe kuch sochna pdega, u just wait &watch switiie heart

They goes back to the gang,every1 was tensed for sandhir,but sandhir insured that they are fine ... After that,they goes back to houses.

Press like & leave your precious rewiews
I hope it was long enough to get long long cmnts 🤗😆

Also guys,i am sending pms to 236 people and i am getting only 30-40 Likes & 20-22 comments
is this fair?? Guys it tooks alot of time and brain to write a story ... So please for silent readers,at least you can press a like button na
Its very discouraging when even after posting daily + Sending pm's, we didnt gets the response which we had expected
so try to take out at least one second for pressing the like button

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago