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Mansi

@Mansi98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--

OMFG thats horrible
I m ssooo sorry
I didnt know 🤗
I feel bad now :(

dont be dida

after ur exms u r starting a swaron ff n tat 2 hot

n tas final😆😆

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Mansi98

dont be dida
after ur exms u r starting a swaron ff n tat 2 hot
n tas final😆😆

:)
No fudging ways :O
I aint n i wont :|
Work wd my ongoing swaron ff i can make it hot for u thats it nothing else :|

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Mansi

@Mansi98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--

:)
No fudging ways :O
I aint n i wont :|
Work wd my ongoing swaron ff i can make it hot for u thats it nothing else :|

strret fighters???

kk😃

Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Mansi98

strret fighters???
kk😃

Yeah will make that hot for u :)

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

It was beautifully written FF..😊

Read all the parts in one go...

Amazing work..😃

All the characters wer beautifully portrayed..😊

Sam's character was amazing...😊 Vei Protective for Sharon.

Bari Ma -Sharon relationship was vei sweet.😊

Finally Ganga's Mystery was cleared.. 😊

Swaron bond was beautiful... 😊

Hope u write more on Swaron.. 😊

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AMAR_LOVE

@AMAR_LOVE

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

nice ending...i like swaron also that's y i like ur this work

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gsk4

@gsk4

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

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I just read this FF back to back from yesterday. I have immensely enjoyed reading it.

Excellent writing. Out of this world. Background description, relationships between son and mother, daughter and mother, best friends, etc.. So clearly and cutely explained.

Why I didnt comment before is one the whole story is over long time ago plus two things that i didnt like. One is Swayam is described as a flirt. thats fine. Flirting in parties or at collages or clubs are fine. But i draw the line when he brings girls home to sleep with. thats very cheap even for swayam's character. And you brought in a very beautiful gaav ki ladki to stay in a bachelor pad!!. Who has a bad rep of bringing girls home and in his bed. I know this is FF but still we are writing about very famous tv character. And may be because i was reading all chapters together i felt this descripency. It just kept coming back at me. A boy whose is always drinking and bringing girls home before ganga. and he is very careful around her and now i find that ganga is same person as sharon. How could she tolerate it. how can you fall in love or trust with such a loose character. No female can tolerate another woman sleeping with her guy. and ganga didnt react.Hey this is just my conclusion. I still cant tolerate this line of characterization beacuse after that he is very caring and sweet to ganga and then later on with sharon. second was bringing in a character called ganga another girl against swayyam.

But that mystery was solved in your epilogue so beautifully. Yours was the best epilogue i have read recently so beautifully penned. So many things explained. You are a wonderful writer. Please keep on writing.