~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added)

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.
Aww di... <3

It's awesome... <3
Read two parts in one go ;)
Sanyukta too luves him..^_^ <3
Wow. Great ^_^
Post the next soonish <3
Thankiess for the pm <3

Luv u :*
Chandu

Thank you Chandu

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

awesome update and thanks for pm 😃

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: shivika838
Awesome update di👏
Loved it😳
Sandhir hugged awww n den dat dance😉
Rocking it was !!

Thank you Shivu

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85
Luvly..👏
Do update other works of urs soon...
update next ASAP

Thank you

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi
awesome update tamanna oh rd is safe n sanyu has understand one thing that rd is not his Freind he has bcm her life. without him she ll die. n I know she ll realize her love very soon. u hv penned down so beautifully that we can't stop ourself to read it many time. marveloi piece of writing. do update soon. n thanks for d pm

Thank you So much
😊

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
awesome update and thanks for pm😃

Thank you

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

~Chapter 11~

Sanyukta was lost in her thoughts(in Randhirdreams) and going towards the forest.. Randhir was also following her... but Sanyukta was just unaware that she is going towards the forest & Randhir is following her.. She was just waking and then Randhir noticed a board saying 'DANGER' and he tried to stop Sanyukta by calling her name but Sanyukta was just lost in her dream land.. and then Randhir runs fast and tried to stop her bt it was too late...

There was a small trench which was covered with leaves and Sanyukta fell in it... Then Sanyukta came out of sandhir land and then-

S- oouch

R- Sanyukta r u ok?? Tumhein lgi to nhi??

S- ek to mein gir gyi aur upar se tum puch rhe ho k lagi to nhi ... ofcourse lgi h,tum mujhe bata nhi skte the

R- wah lady hittler ji,ulta chor kotwal ko dante mein to kb se chilla rha tha par tum hi thi pta nhi kaunse sapno mein khoyi hui thi

S- oye joker ab mera dimag khana band karo aur bahar nikalo mujhe..

R- chalo apna hath do mujhe

Randhir tried hard to take her out but he failed and he too falls in trench and Randhir fells on Sanyukta,there was a cute eyelock

Kabhi jobadal barse,
Mein dekhoon tujhe akhein bharke,
Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki dua

Sanyukta was first to break the eyelock she feels embarssed and there was an akward silence
to break the silence Sanyukta spoke 1st

S- dekho mujhe nikalne k chakar mein khud hi gir gye..

R- han dekhlo fasa dia mujhe

S- oh hellow puri galti tumhari h,

R- oh please glti tumhari h..

S- ab batein hi krte rhoge ya bahr bhi nikloge mujhe

R- chlo mein niklne ki koshish krta hoon fir tumhein nikalunga

S-ok Randhir tries to go out but fells Sanyukta starts laughing

R-yar try krna ka koi faida nhi h,raat bohat hogyi h,raat yhin so lete h,subh try krenge

S- par yahan(sadly)

R- hmm

Both agreed..

They tried to sleep but failed,then they starts talking and while talking they falls asleep..

I hope you liked it
press like & comment

Also u might be thinking that this story is going on too fast like they fell for each other so fastly
But guys,this story has so many twist & turns,that why i have made it fast 😉
bcz i just lovvveee twists & cliffies 🤣

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Now, this update is small but sweet nevertheless...
Wah re maiyaa tera kamaal!! In the previous chapter Sanyukta was the superwoman so I thought that maybe Randhir will get his fair share of being the superman but he also fell in the pit instead.. Kamaal dhamaal bemisaal!😆😆
Ohho! So Sanyukta is all head over heels for Randhir but is yet to understand her feelings... Good, it's good!!
Ah! The pace of the story is praise-worthy!
Do update soonish.

Regards
Keya