No Title till now...FF Part2 pg2..REAL UPDATE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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**** Plz suggest a decent title to this post...***

Hi friends 😉
Iam PAVAN ,new to the forum ..Some of U might hav just came to know me..I hav posted a topic describing "MY JOURNEY INTO SSEl",I hope I shall continue that post(on any holiday)...I was told to read few FF in the forum ...I hav seen FF of some of you guys(not all, only few) ,I was spellbounded.,Hence waana test my writing skills ..Hope u like it...😊


Both Yuvraj and Suhani has agreed for divorce...And both meet in a court ...

After One Week :
Its raining heavily ,Its pouring heavily-+

A small boy sees his dad after long time
SON:Daddy, May I ask A question
DAD: What my boy ?
SON : How much you earn per one hour
DAD: With little angry eyes,300p.h
SON: Can U give me 150
DAD:Looks furious and scolds if the reason you asked is to buy a foolish toy,then go straight into the room and sleep..THE BOY GOES TO BED
Dad cools after 30 minutes and wants to know ,do the little boy really wants to buy any imp thing
Dad goes to the room
DAD: Son take this 150
Then the son takes the money and keeps under the pillow 😊
The boy already had some money, which made father angry..
DAD ; Why u ask me if u have money..
SON:Innocently says ,Take this 300rs And spend 1hr with me,I want to play with U..😭
The father was crushed. He put his arms around his little son, and he begged for his forgiveness...And he promised the boy ,he will share his every joy &sorrow from hereon...
Yuvraj slowly realising the story is between yuvraj and his late father..
Yuvraj :Dad where r U?
Yuvraj :Dad where r U ?
Dad : Iam in ur eyes,Iam in ur soul , Iam ur friend ,Iam in ur happy
Now Iam in ur sarrow..
Yuvraj : Why u leave me alone in this foolish lonely bed..
Dad : Why r u worried,my son
Yuvraj : Do U know Suhani ,my wife
Dad : I do know her..
Yuvraj :No,U dont know,u r lying..says yuvi childishly
Dad :ok Tell me who she is ..
Yuvraj :***She is not MILK but she is PURE
She is not GHEE but she makes me FIT,
She is not HONEY but she makes others HAPPY ,
She is not SUGAR but she is so SWEET ,
She is not CURD but keeps me COOL...

Dad : Then why u dont love her ..Yuvraj remains silient again & again
Dad :Yuvraj.,Do u know symbol "?" gives more answers than Ur heart😕...
Can I say something about my son?
Yuvraj : Yes dad
Dad:***My son is not the EARTH but carrying immense PAIN,
My son is not the SKY but no one can Reach his FEELINGS
My son is not FIRE but he is BURNING inside ..
My son is not WIND but he wants all to be REFRESHED
My son is not WATER but he is SHOWERING for his wife love...
( Guys feeling sorry to say ,copyrights reserved for both ***...😉)
Yuvraj feeling sad with pain ..Suddenly the sound of the thunder makes Yuvraj to wake..He sees no one near him...He goes outside to see his father thinking it to be true...He searched hard &sits in the garden..😭
Yuvraj searching for every answer in the pouring rain...

Suddenly Yuv feels someone talking.,
I thought someone will search for me, nd its U...
Yuvraj says who r u..?
Iam the one who can see the whole world,
Iam the one who falls from any height without fear,
Iam the one who can kiss the Earth with my legs..
Yuvraj sees everyone ..
U cant catch me..There exists no little hand to catch me,..
Then who U r?
IAM THE RAIN,IAM THE RAIN...😲😲


U may ask me, Do Yuvraj father & rain really speaks...
Friends when U r in pain ..U will speak to all non living things expect with whom u r living..😆😆


Frnds U R free to comment if U like...
...See U Later...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing work must say Pavan..
Good job keep writing... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb article. i love it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I liked it a lot, pavan. Not sure about the title until we have more info. Do update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting work. Start is awesome again describing Yuvraj's emotions after he got separated with Suhani with typical Pavan style!

I first wondered who that boy and father are, but it's Yuvraj and his father.

Coming to the title, it made me remember one telugu movie many years back with no title. We can only suggest after the story progresses a bit more.

Iam thinking to write a FF too, story after Yuvani's separation.


Edited by -LovelyLakshmi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is just WOW...u are an amazing writer
It's really good
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi all friends...😊
Thanks for ur much needed appreciation... I wanna continue my article today ..Hope so ...

Title : I too believe,U can hav a take on title, if I move ahead...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -LovelyLakshmi-

Interesting work. Start is awesome again describing Yuvraj's emotions after he got separated with Suhani with typical Pavan style!

I first wondered who that boy and father are, but it's Yuvraj and his father.

Coming to the title, it made me remember one telugu movie many years back with no title. We can only suggest after the story progresses a bit more.

Iam thinking to write a FF too, story after Yuvani's separation.


Thank u so much

And the title of telugu movie u r refering is 'pape naa pranam' Baby is my world...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pavan4u

Thank u so much

And the title of telugu movie u r refering is 'pape naa pranam' Baby is my world...



Yes, i know. It got it after the release and it released with a big '?'.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭Part 2 was deleted due to my own mistake ..I wil bring back soon...Feeling sorry that I didnt saved it...
😭

I will try to update soon...
Edited by pavan4u - 10 years ago

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