Akdha ff: Nahi Jaanta hu tum kab mujhse milogi.......

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CHAPTER 1

It was a fresh new morning.Jodha got up early.it was the first day after her and jalal's marriage.she was not so happy about this new relation but at some corner of her heart she believed that jalal won't leave her.she remembered the last night's incident..

FLASHBACK

Jodha was sitting alone in the room in her bridal attire.it was her first night of marriage.she waited eagerly for jalal to come.she wanted to say that she doesn't want him to touch her till she knew him completely.her thoughts broke when she saw jalal entering in the room.he closed the door and locked it.he came closer to her which left her shocked.she said "Ruk jaiye!ek baar humari baat suniye".jalal said "Kya hua jodha?tum itni dari hui kyu ho?"she kept quiet "bolo jodha,kya hua?" "vo...vo... Vo hum yeh kehna chahte hai ki...aap ko hume vachan dena hoga ki aap tab tak hume nahi chuenge jab tak hum nahi chahte"she said. Jalal was shocked.he had heard about jodha very much and he knew what type of girl she was but this was the first time ever any girl rejected him.he was infuriated. He didn't say a word but jest left the room.jodha could see how angry he was.she felt sorry for what she said.she was in tears. Suddenly she heard a voice "tumhe iski saza milegi aur mai dunga tumhe saza."

FLASHBACK ENDS

Precap:jalal burns jodha's hand purposely.after a while his heart melts seeing her in tears.

Sorry guyzz this chapter is so small but I will try to post next chapter by 30 03 15

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nice chptr
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fabulous chappy but it was too short
jodha rejected jalal so he was angry😕he should respect jodha's decision
precap is interesting
ssems like jalal is violent
plz update soon and pm me
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