#FF doo jism ek jaan updated on pg 9

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doo jism ek jaan







jineke jab maan naa milte teh tab milithi kismat aur nasib ki woh lakire . jab maan tha mila tuh naa mila tha taan

par jab mile taan aur maan tab

DooriyoN Ke Saaye MeN Kabhi Paltti Nahi Mohabbat
HaathoN MeN Haath Ho To LakeereN Mil Hi Jaati HaiN



Tera Mujh Par Bas Itnaa Sa Ek Ehsaan Rahe..!!!
Jabhi Dekhun Tujhe,Tere Chehre Par Muskaan Rahe

Tujhe Koi Gham Kabhi Chuu Bhi Naa Sake..!!!
Tu Chalte Rahe,Har Raah Tere liye Asaan Rahe

Milli Jab Tum se Nazar,Bas Gaya Ek Jahaan...!!
AankheN Keh Uthi,Umar Bhar Qaid Yeh Mehmaan Rahe

Woh Dilkash Si AdayeN, Woh Madhosh Si AankheiN
Tujhse Milne Ko,Dil MeN Na Jane Kitne Armaan Rahe

Inn Faaslo MeN Ishq Ko Nibhaa Paana Bhi Asaan Nahi.!!
Haaye Re Mohabbat..Bebas Kyun Iss MeN Insaan Rahe

Mile Teri Zulf Ki Chaau Mujhko,Aisi Bhi Koi Raat Ho
Yuh Mujh Se Mil Ke Ab Hum, Do Jism Ek Jaan Rahe

"Khwahish" Ki Yeh Dua Hai Ke Teri Har Dua Qubool Ho
Khuda Tujh Par Har Kadam Har Raah Meharbaan Rahe..


In this story salim and anarkali do exists but as small children's and maan singh have gone for the battle against the mirza hakim

So since jodha was in trap of that mysterious disease

Jalal have totally shattered and he decides to turn the table by doing good deed that in turn will work as a medicine for jodha

Day by day jalal condition also started get wrost he started feeling worthless sad and depression

With all jalal hard work praise and effort jalal was able to bring jodha to her feets

a fine day jodha was walking on her on feet jalal got this news and and he went running to jodhas room and was so happy that he started crying and went down on his feet and thanks god for giving this beautiful day to him he want to hug jodha he cant as she is not yet in good health jodha was able to see that worthless depression tension and sadness that jalal had in this passing days that regrets and guilt that jalal have in his heart and jodha knows that solution of jalals bad condition. That is a beautiful relax night to jalal but her hands where lock too. Due to her health but she was firm to her decision that she will give her husband a beautiful night that he deserve

After some months jodha was totally fine and she made a plan to give a beautiful gift to jalal and one fine morning she went to jalal and asked him for

A grand jashan for her recover and since that mysterious illness have vanish

Jalal in one blink said yes

On Friday the jashan was announced a grand blast. jalal too had a surprise for jodha on Friday night jashan the whole agra was dressed like a dulhan every one was happy since jodha have done preparation the jashan started jalal had a royal entry every one was waiting for jodha and then silence the payal sound of jodhas started moving like air in whole jashan and the jodha entered

The beauty of jodha was shining like bright sun every one present in the jashan stood up looking at jodha jalal looked at jodha and was mesmerized

He stood up went towards jodha bent down on knee and kissed on jodhas hand and like a royal couple shining like a star they went to royal seat during jashan jalal announced jodha as mallika- a-hind and jodha was stunned with this gift and jodha was so excited to gift that special night to jalal .

at the middle of jashan jodha stood up and went without saying anything to jalal with a unknown expression on her face

jalal looked and wanted to move and follow jodha but was engaged with some special guest but all his focus was on jodha where she have gone what happen to his wife

Jashan ended and jalal was furious. furious jalal went running to jodhas room but she was not there he become more furious and then salim comes and pull jalals clothes makes him down and say in jalal ear that "ammi-jaan apka intezaar kar rahai aapke kabgaa mi "

Jalal thanks salim and kissed salim on his forehead and went running to his room but when he reached to his room everything was dark no candles the only sound jalal can hear was jodhas payals and that beautiful smell of jodhas body she was singing a beautiful mesmerizing song that was working as alcohol to jalal and then jodha light a candle and moved towards jalal and jalal was able to see that beautiful mesmerizing amazing speechless flawless magical face of jodha with those fabulous depthfull so magical eyes with open hair

...continue

will continue on responses this is my first #FF so pls do response

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lovely update do continue soon...
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awesome ff ..i havent been watching the show 4 a while ... good to read something this beautiful...keep it up ..thanks 4 pm
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Congo on new story
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awesome update just like a khoobhsurat gazal it was... loved it...
superb title n banner... plz continue soon... plz do pm me...
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Originally posted by: avika444

Congo on new story
Nice start
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sure dear and thanks too.
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Originally posted by: RamziMeriJaan

awesome ff ..i havent been watching the show 4 a while ... good to read something this beautiful...keep it up ..thanks 4 pm

how r u dii and hows ur son miss u a lot and thanks

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