manans new journey[:)] (part 8....23/03/15)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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manans new journey😊 ::::: part 8:: Manik reaches colg and waits near the parkin area...he sees nandini n panditji gettin out of car and says waah nandini ek din i didnt come to pick you up toh you found a new chaffeur...nandini says manikk..aur aap panditji teacher hoke students or i shud say studenttt mein itna interest?? Panditji gives a stern luk to manik and says chalo nandini riyaaz ke liye late ho rha hai...Nandini tells panditji that principal has an announcemnt to make so he has called all studnts to audi so i ll come for riyaaz aftr that.. pandit says ok n luks at manik and walks off..manik also walks off and nandini goes behind him...they reach the audi whr fab4 are already waitng fr dem..principal comes and says that i have a very important announcemnt to make...from nw on panditji is goin to b our official classical music teacher to promote classicl music in our colg..manik is furious and nandini luks at him..manik says dis pandit is gettin on my nerves..uska kuch krna padega..i have to talk to nyonika..nandini stops him and asks him to calm down..manik says guys i m done with these lectures lets go to the canteen..all manik holds nandinis hand to take her with him wen nandini says manik wait naa pls...lets just hear the announcemnts and den go...princi says i hv an another announcement to make..aftr d success of fusion concrt, space academy is recievng huge response frm music companies...i want to gve u all a gud news dat a renowned music cmpany wants to sign 2 studnts frm our colg..principal announces d name n its manik n nandini...Both cant believe dat they hv got a chance to make an album together...alya is irritated dat they lost their chance of making an album due to nandini and now shes making her album with manik...so she walks off...remaining fab5 members congratulate dem and demand a party...manik sees panditji luking at them and purposely hugs nandini to show him...Manik tells hr see i told u..u r my shining star and kisses her forehead...he gives a smirk to panditji and dey leave for canteen...Manik announces guys today's a good day for me n nandini so the treat is on me...every1 claps for dem...cabir says lets go n hv party today...nandini says i cnt stay out at nyt..manik says u dnt wry i ll talk to chachi..nandini says its nt dat easy manik...i ll hv to ask ams...navya says dnt worry i have a solution...nandini calls ams n tells hr dat navya has fvr n hr rummate is out of town..she needs sm1 to luk aftr hr..so i thot to stay wid hr ams..ams says bring hr home she ll feel bttr(nw nandini luks at navya wat to say nw)...nandini says i hv gvn hr medicine n she z sleepng so i dnt thnk she ll b able to cm to our home...ams says ok u can stay n puts down phone...navya tells the group you guys go and njoy ...i wont b able to join u coz m nt feelng well..nandini asks hr wat happnd??shud i stay wid u?? Navya says i jst need rest n i ll b fine..nw manik asks evry1 to get in d car..cabir says we wont b able to fit in one car...So alya says even i have my car...cabir says chalo den lets move...cabir winks at manik n whispers in his ears(u owe me bro..fr gvng u both privacy)..manik says ofcourse cabir n smiles..nw dhruv,alya,mukti n cabir r in d alya's car... Manik tells fab4 ill see ull guys der...nandini asks where manik he says sit in the car...she sits n says whr r we goin manik he says im kidnappin you...she says very funny manik say naa...he said we are goin to lonavla...i have a resort der..Fab 4 reaches the resort n aliya says manik was ahead of us but i cant see his car...cabir covers up saying let the lovebirds spend sumtime together aa jayengey...naya naya pyaar hai...They all go inside the resort...on the other hand manik takes nandini somewhere else and suddenly stops the car...nandini says why did you stop wheres the resort...he replies sayin i said we are goin to the resort but i didnt say now...she says so where are we what now...he tells her to come out of the car..Manik gets out and start walkin...she goes behind him and says are u ok manik what are we doin here...he replies this is my favourite place...wenever im sad or angry this place cools me down...This place is so quiet...lovely view cool air...Nandini asks him but why have u suddenly come here?? She luks at him and holds his hand...she asks wat happened manik...r u ok?? He replies yeah...i wanted this place to have happy memories with you so i brought you here...they are now facing each other and talking...you know nandini ever since youve come in my life i have never felt the need to come...you cool me down exactly the same way...aftr spendng sm tym dere manik says we shud leave fr resort nw..fab4 mst b worried..n they leaves...Manan reach the resort...cabir has specially arranged for 2 rooms next to each other for manan...manik and nandini enter the lobby area and see fab4 sittin der..aliya asks wat took u guys so long...manik luks at nandini and then replies we had some work...cabir coughs and says very important work...nandini blushes...mukti asks wats the plan now...cabir says abhi toh party shuru hui hai...manik says guys jus give us 10 mins let us jus check into our rooms freshen up and well b bck...fab4 says ok come soon...manan go to their respective rooms and come back dwn to the lobby...manik says so let the party begin...cabir removes the champagne bottle n opens it...he makes every1 drink but wen maniks turn comes he says no cabir m not in the mood today...cabir is shocked and luks at nandini...nandini smiles...aliya says ok guys lets play truth and dare...all agree and game starts...cabir spins the bottle and it points at dhruv...dey ask him truth or dare...he says truth...mukti asks him remember you told us bout ur first kiss wen was it...dhruv luks at aliya and then says in the jungle during the harshad plan...every1 says dat means tum logon ka tabse chal rha hai n u ll didnt tell us..dhruv doesnt reply and spins bottle and it faces cabir...he chooses dare...they ask him to go and flirt with the receptionist...he completes the dare and comes back sayin no girl can say no to cabirs charm...he spins the bottle n dis time it faces nandu..manik says if nandini chooses truth then ill ask her the question...so nandini gets scared and chooses dare...all laugh... (to b cntd...)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Love this... so cute! Great job!👍🏼

If possible do an index at the beginning of each update with all the previous parts links so people that haven't read it before can catch up... just a suggestion!😃

This will also be helpful coz of your post restrictions a as Newbie, so you can enjoy /comment on other posts... or update with new chapters much sooner!😉

You are doin a terrific job on this one though, I really enjoyed this...😆
Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 9::

cabir says ok nandini so ur dare is u
have to kiss manik now...shes shocked
and says wat here?? Hw can i do it
here in front of so many pple...manik
smiles and says a dare is a
dare...nandini luks at manik
angrily...manik says so nandini ur
scared?? She says no nandini murthy
is never scared n gets up and goes and
gives a peck on his cheek...cabir says
cheating this is not done...nandini
replies saying well cabir ull never said
where to kiss so...dare
completed...cabir says ok hard luck
manik... Nandini is about to spin the
bottle again when cabir says stop stop
stop...lets stop the game her and go
for dinner first m damn
hungry...every1 agrees and everyone
sits for dinner...after dinner cabir
says guys the food was awesome im so
full i need a walk lets go fr a
walk...mausam bhi bhut mast
hai...fab5 agrees...nandini says cabir
im too tired today ill jus go to my
room n sleep...manik luks at cabir and
says that actually cabir me too...the
drive was long n m also tired so even i
plan to crash...cabir luks at both of
them gives a smirk and says
ohh...theek hai ull go rest well see
ull in mrnin...chale guys?? Fab4 agree
and leave...nandini says goodnite
manik and starts walkin towards her
room..manik stops her and says hey
wait you are really going to sleep??
Nandini says yes..manik says
nooo..and he drags nandini and takes
her to his room..nandini says manik
what r u doing..manik says nandini
listen dont be so boring and with great
difficulty weve got to spend time with
each other dont spoil it..nandini says
ok manik so wat do u wanna do..manik
says lets watch a movie..nandini says
no manik m going to sleep..Manik says
fine i shud have watched the movie
with soha only..remember how much
she wanted to see the movie with me
that nite?? Nandini says fine ill watch
the movie..manik says listen shes not
even here now atleast now stop being
jealous..she says im not jealous..now
lets watch befre i change my mind, so
he plays the movie..manik asks
nandini which movie do u wanna
watch..nandini says put any movie
manik..so he puts on 50 first dates
and says this is 1 of my fav
mvies..she says ohh y wats so special
in this movie he tells her wait n watch
she says ok..movie starts.. after
sometime there is a scene where the
actress is wearing a super sexy short
dress..nandini puts her hand over
maniks eyes..manik smiles and says
arre nandini wat u doin..she replies
manik you dont need to see all
this..manik says arre nandini shes so
hot..i mean luk at her..n he moves
her hand frm his eyes n says see shes
sizzling hot!! Nandini says manik i
dont wanna see this movie.. manik
says but y i mean its such a nice
movie...the actress is also so
hot...nandini says ok manik den u see
the movie alone m going to my
room...before he can stop her she
gets up, shuts the door and goes to
her room...manik smiles and says god
this girl!! Gets jealous so fast!! He
says ab manik malhotra usko patana
padega..manik is thinking of wat to do nw...i
want to stay wid her...he asks the
hotel staff to shut that floors
lights...nandini is in her room talkin
to herself wat does he think of
himslf..coconut face si to shakl
hai..n hot ladki pasand
hai..hunhh..suddnly li8s go off n
sum1 knocks on nandini's
door..nandini asks who s there bt no1
replies so she says strange..again
some1 knocks..this time she goes n
opens the door sayin manik stop
troubling me n it is manik standing
there...Nandini says wat r u doin here
manik...manik says nandini its
dark...nandini remembrs manik saying
i hate darkness and says par ye light
kyun chali gai...manik says power
failure nandini says but how cm nly dis
floor manik says nandini tum sawaal
bahut poochti ho...cant u see im
scared and walks into nandinis
room...nandini says manik u cant jus
come into my room lyk dat
everytime...manik goes and sits on
the bed...nandini realises that he s nt
gonna leave so she shuts the door and
goes and sits on bed n says so manik
now that light chali gai n u cant see
ur that...that hot actress..so u have
come to me...manik smiles and says
ohh her she s really hot hai naa??
Nandini says watever...manik laughs
and says i just cant believe it...i
mean u r seriously gettin jealous over
a tv star?? Nandini says manik stop
making fun of me n throws a pillow at
him...he catches the pillow and
throws it back at her...she gets
angry and says manikk!! And starts
hitting him with the pillow...he says
arre nandini wat r u doin n picks up a
pillow n starts hitting her too and dey
have a pillow fight.. Manik pulls the
pillow and nandini falls on him...manik
says awww nandini ur so
heavy...nandini gets irritated and
gets up and says manikk!! Nandini
tells manik, par manik har jagah
lights hai den y only this floor r der
no lights...manik thinks wat to reply
and den says mujhe kya pata main koi
technician hoon kya...nandini says
manik chalo apne room mein jao mujhe
sona hai...manik says arre how can u
b so selfish...u know i hate
darkness..nandini says toh ab kya
karein...manik replies karna kya hai
jab tak lights naa aaye main yahan se
hilnewala nai hoon...Nandini taps her
hand on her head and says aiyappa this
boy...always finds a way to trouble
me...Manik says isnt it hot here...
phew!! And he removes his
shirt...nandini is like manik wat r u
doin??..he says arre its jus my shirt
relax!!...Sum1 knocks on the door...manik
opens the door...the waiter has come
with a bowl of icecream...he thanks
the waiter and takes the bowl of
icecream and is walkin towards
bed...nandini sees the icecream and
says icecream!! Manik sits on the bed
and is eating and asks do you want
and takes the spoon near her...before
she can say nytin he says ok dont hv
and take the spoon away...nandini
says manikk n taps her feet..manik
says wat?? Tumhe chaiye?? Pehle
kyun nai bola and says last spoon tha
n puts it in his mouth...she becomes
sad and says its ok..he smiles...again
some1 knocks..manik tells nandini plss
open the door...nandu opens the door
and sees a full tray filled with 12
different icecream flavours...nandus
eyes open as if poori neend udd gai ho
n she luks at manik and is very
happy...she takes the tray in n sits on
the bed and starts eating...she is
busy eatin and manik luks at her
lovingly... Nandini luks at manik and
offers him a bite...hes still lukin at
her and opens his mouth to
have...nandu asks waise manik...how
do u know that i love icecreams??
Manik says woh..do you remember the
nite you had vinegar...nandu says we
manikk...dont forget you too had
it...manik says that day wen i bought
icecream i saw u njoyng the icecream
so i ordered today also...nandu says
ohhh...so even during that period
wen you were torturing both of us you
still cared about me.. manik says
listen eat ur icecream
quietly...warna idhar do n he goes to
pull the icecream bowl from her
hand...and the icecream falls on
her..shes shocked...manik
laughs...nandini says ye tumne kya
kiya manik i dnt even have an extra
pair of clothes..wat ll i do
now...manik says dont wry give this to
the laundry jus now it ll come by tmrw
mrng...nandini says very funny
manik...den wat i wud wear now??...Manik says abhi ke liye ye pehen
lo...n throws his shirt at her...she
says yeh?? Main yeh nai pehen
sakti...are you mad...manik says ok
den sit like dis with the
icecream...nandini says aiyappa and
goes to the washroom to
change...manik gets up and is luking
outside the window wen the washroom
door opens and nandini cms wearing a
bathrobe and he turns n luks at her
from down to up...nandini feels
concious and jus stands in 1
place...Manik walks towards nandini
and cant get his eyes off her...shes
walkin backwards and reaches the
cupboard behind her..manik comes
close to her...nandini says
manikk...he puts his finger on her
mouth and says ssshhh...nandini luks
at manik...sawali si raat song is
playing again in background...Manik
goes closer to nandini...shes feelin
concious so she is luking down...manik
lifts her chin and says nandini...both
are luking at each other wen some1
knocks on the door...



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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Nice update...try to update more & more parts quicklyy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Loved the 9th update... Manik is up to his games, so cute... and I love her fighting back... such sweet MANAN moments, wonderful job! 👍🏼

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