FF - A Rude Awakening COMPLETE STORY PG 145

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Suvika.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ikhlass
assalamu alaykum Suvika

Beautiful ending ! I liked the fact that Sahir and Arzoo have had a daughter whom they will be able to give all the love and affection that Arzoo and her sisters didn't have had from their father. In Islam, to have three daughters is a Allah's blessing, Sarfaraz was a ignorant man don't know if has 3 girls and gives their a good education and a lot of love they can be the path of paradise for him... Stupid guy he lost the chance to go to Jannat...

Thank you to have share with us your talent as a writer. For me, it was a real pleasure to read you. hope I would have the opportunity to read you again maybe in another show Insha-Allah :)

Barak-Allahu fiki !

Thank you very much. Yes, that was precisely why I showed SaAz having a daughter.. not son. The last of Arzoo's ghosts from the past laid to rest. I think a woman is considered and looked upon with highest regard in every religion. People like Sarfaraz are neither bound by religion nor by any kind of moral code. SAC's way of dealing with him in this FF is the only way to deal with people like him.

I am really glad you enjoyed this story. And yes, hope to see you all again some time in the future. Don't know where and when par Allah ne chaha toh raasta banjayega.

Khuda hafiz.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1092

Originally posted by: IMAnam

I meant coming back with a new story OS or FF or anything !

oh OK. Understood. For now I have no plans for another story in any forum. Will let you know if I do plan something of that kind in future. 😃

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true2heart

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1093

I guess I crashed into this party really late. Wow Suvi you write so fantabulously. I know I was supposed to read your FFs much earlier when you had emailed me your first seven chapters. The only reason I hesitated was that I was scared that I might end up liking your version of HS more than the 4 lion vision and then I would go off the screen version completely. Binu kept raving about your writing and I was really tempted but I resisted.

But yesterday night I couldn't stop myself and decided its time I read it as the serial was off air and I didnt need to compare anymore.I must say I couldn't stop reading till I finished them all in one go. I was totally immersed and could visualize so many things as I know Sahir's thought process, reactions and body language so well now.

I will write in detail about what I felt and the things I connected with and discuss the ones I had gripe with,but being a sunday, its pretty chaotic at home so will write aaram se tonight.