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Posted: 10 years ago
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manans new journey:::: part 4:: manik was playng his guitar in anger n his eyes wer closed...she ws standng n listening to him...he opened his eyes n saw hr dere...he tells her y u r staring at me..go na ur pandit must b waitng fr u...she came closer n hugged him..he too reciprocatd...she tells him i ll nt go anywhre wid him..i ll make sm excuse..dnt wry..manik smiles.. .on seeing him smiling nandini says finally i got ur smile back..manik asks hr to sing a song fr him..she says ok i ll bt u ll hv to sing wid me..he nods..she starts to sing "tum jo aaye zindagi me bat ban gayi"..manik teases hr by sayng did u really meant wat u just sang..she ws lyk dat song ws nt fr u n she smirks..manik came closer n askd r u sure..she ran frm dere n manik runs behind her...she trips over the electric guitar wire and is about to fall wen manik catches her...he brings her up n she says how do u manage always to hold me wen i am goin to fall...he pulls her closer to him n says coz u are so attractive that troubles just cant stay away from you..my trouble queen... I shud b asking u hw do u manage to fall so often...or...do u fall only so dat i can hold u...she pushes him away n starts to walk away n he tries to stop her by holding her dupatta...she asks him to give it bck...he shakes his head n says nope...she gets a lil awkward widout dupatta and so she turns her bck towards him... so he goes towards her n wraps the dupatta around hr n hugs her frm behind n turns her towards him..lifts her chin n gets his face close enough fr a kiss n her phone rings n manik sees its pandit..he sighs n moves away from her...she luks at manik bt he luks away.. She recieves d call n pandit asks whre r u??shall we go now..she tells him sir i wont b able to go wid u as i hv to go to my frnd navya..she z nt well..pandit replies ok as u wish..manik tells hr i didnt knw ms nandini murthy cn lie so well...nandini shyly smiles n says its jst becoz of u mr. malhotra...u made me to lie...he z lyk oh really..dat means u wanted to go wid him n i stopped u..she laughs n says stop it manik..y u r being so insecure..i wont go anywhre...n den he drops hr home...she entrs hr rum n ams ask hw ws ur day nandu?? Nandini replies day ws gud ams...ams ask hw z ur frnd nw..nandini asks hr which frnd ams...ams says u told to pandit na u r goin to ur frnds home as she z nt well...nandini tells hr she z fine nw...ams says oh dat gud..nandini tells hr m vry tired nw..ams massages hr head n makes hr sleep...Nandini is sleepng..she feels manik's presence..she opens hr eyes n manik is sittng holdng hr hand..she asks him r u fr real or m dreaming..n she extends hr hand to touch him..and she falls frm hr bed..wen she opened her eyes she realised dat she ws dreaming..n she was laughng at herself...she is gettng ready fr d colg n is thinking of manik...shud i tell him abt wat i dreamt today..bt den she says no i wont he ll laugh at me n ll say dat m always thinkng abt him nly...manik at his home lukng at a pendant which he has bought fr nandini(he has designed dat pendant by himslf wid deir initials 'manan')..nandini gets ready n cms down..n sees pandit is sittng n talkng to her ams n on seein nandini ams says pandit has invited all of us fr dinnr tmrw..nandini say ok n leaves fr d colg...manik arrives colg n is lukng fr nandini...Nandini ws walkng in d corridor n meets cabir...cabir asks hr wat date is tomorw nandini..she says 11th march..so wat is wrong wid d date?? Cabir says lyk seriously u dnt knw...nandini says plz dnt create suspense cabir..jst tell me directly...so he says its ur maniks bday...she says wat?? He never mentioned his bday..so hw m i supposed to knw...cabir says nw u knw na toh dnt u want to make his day special..she says ofcourse i will n asks him fr help...he says dnt wry whole fab4 ll help u..she says thanks..n he leaves..nandini is sittng at d stairs n thnkng hw to make manik's bday spcl.. she gets an idea n she msgs cabir n fab5 to meet hr at d canteen..manik cms frm behind n sits wid hr..he asks hr to close hr eyes n he makes hr wear dat pendant..she tells him dis pendant is so beautiful..n hugs him..he shows hr manan written on it..Nandini tells him i wont b able to cm to colg tmrw..manik ws lyk wat? Why? Wat happnd?? R u ok?? Nandini says yes m fine..so he says den y u ll nt cm to colg tmrw..she tells him tmrw me n my family hv to go smwhre..he says cant u lie fr me..she says u knw na manik nandini murthy doesnt lie...den manik says ya ya like u hv never lied bfre..she replies its only a matter of 1 day manik n wats so great in tomm im sure u can spend 1 day widout me..he luks at hr angrily n leaves frm dere..she cms to d canteen where fab4 n navya r waitng fr hr..they ask hr so wats d plan..she tells dem tmrw none of us ll wish manik..they r lyk wat..she says yes..nw listen to me tmrw m nt cmng to d colg n u all will make urslf busy in ur activities..manik ll thnk no one remembrs his bday..n i m planning to throw a party at my place coz my family is goin out fr a dinnr party n i ll make sm excuse n ll stay at home so dat we cn celebrate his bday..evryone agrees bt alya says i dnt thnk its a gud plan coz ur house is small n it will b lill uncomfortable..so lets party at my place..n dere we cn enjoy too..dat too without any disturbance..nandini says i agree wid u alya bt i want to celebrate his bday at my place coz its his 1st bday wid me...i hope u guys will undrstand..cabir says ofcourse mrs nandini manik malhotra..nandini n evryone lukd at him surprised..he ws lyk y u all r starng at me i jst said ur future name..nandini blushes n he says guys jst luk at hr she is blushng..nandini says stop it cabir..cabir says so wat we hv to do nw..nandini asks them to come tmrw at hr place at 7 in d evng..evryone agrees... nandini is searchng fr manik n she finds him in d music rum playng his guitar..she cms to him n says manik i want to spend sm tym wid u...coz i wont b able to see u tmrw...manik holds hr hand n says toh plz dnt go na...tmrw is a spcl day fr me...nandini asks him wat so spcl abt tmrw...m i missng smthng...he luks at hr surprised n says no its nthng lyk dat..u jst go n enjoy..nandini says ok manik we ll meet day aftr tmrw..he says cm i ll drop u home..she says ok..nandini in hr rum thinkng abt sm excuse..den hr chachi cms wid coffee..nandini tells hr chachi i need ur help..chachi asks help fr wat?.nandini says its manik's birthday tmrw n i want to celebrate his bday here.. jst a small party wid nly few frnds.. bt d prblm is pandit hs invitd all of us fr dinnr tmrw..chachi says wat? Wat r u sayng nandu? If ur ams ll hear den u knw na wat ll happn..nandini says dats y chachi i am askng fr ur help.. u knw na he has always helpd me n evn rishabh...so i want to do smthng fr him..plz chachi help me..aapko shahrukh ki kasam..chachi say u r blackmailng me by using shahrukhs name..n she says ok i ll do smthng..bt jst fr 3 hrs..nandini hugs hr n says u r d worlds best chachi..chachi smiles n says give my blessngs to ur shahrukh..nandini blushes n says its nthng lyk dat chachi we r toh jst frnds..chachi says i undrstand evrythng beta..sayng dat she leaves..manik in his rum thinking abt nandini..he says hw cn she do dis to me..dat too on my bday..bt wat to do she dnt hv any othr choice..she hs to obey hr ams ordrs..manik waitd fr d whole nyt bt none of his frnds wished him...its mrng nw..chachi cms to nandini's rum n wakes hr up..n asks hr dnt u hv to go colg today..she says yes chachi n gets up..n starts walkin... she acts like she is feelng dizzy n chachi holds hr n makes her sit n asks wat happened...nandini replies i dnt think i ll b able to go to colg today..as m nt feelng well...chachi tells hr to take rest n she ll bring hr brkfast here nly..n she leaves..nandini smiles n says to hrslf ki wow nandini u act so well. ..ams cms to see hr n nandini says aftr takng rest i ll b fine ams..ams leaves..nandini is thnkng of surprisng mukti by callng abhi fr d party..so she calls abhi n says evrythng..he says wow..dats amazng..n she asks him i want u to join us if u feel lyk cmng n if it is ok wid u..he says bt wat if mukti finds out..she says u dnt wry abt dat..he says ok my swt sis.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
Awesome...
Jst loved it.. Manik's bday.. Yay..
I just hope panda na mms dnt disturb thm..
Plz.. Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey... Loved ur updates... I read it in one go... U write well but just a suggestion y don u continue in dis thread itself y make new threads and just update the title tellin part so and so updated at dis page with d date... So everyone will read it... Coz now it becomes difficult to search d previous parts and neither can we understand did u update or NT... Anyways loved ur updates do continue

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