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Posted: 10 years ago
di update dedo na aapne ek vivah ka bhi nahi diya
waise bhi aaj to guni parwah matab new year haina isliye happy new year update plss
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for the update 👏 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent part ..
Maneet finally Married..👏
Maan and others pampering rather say spoiling Maansi..
But guess she deserves it.
Both Geet n Maansi faced alot..
So its time for them to get everything they deserve..
Indeed they both are Khuranas princesses.. Oops now Geet is promoted as Queen..😛😉
As everyone knows that this Coronation is not going to run smoothly..😕
so eagerly waiting to see What you have planned!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Don't you guys want the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maansi baby put all on fix !!
So funny ... loved the update.

She knows her way out.

Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
And finally their marriage.

Life is so unpredictable .. so Geets' fear is understandable !
She doesn't want Maansi to undergo what she gone.

Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago







The crowd was getting thicker and thicker and each pair of eyes was trying to get a glimpse of their Princess. The coronation was a big affair coz ever since this tradition started it was decided tat the coronation would be public and everyone would be a part of it.

The stage was nothing less than royal and Maansi, she looked cute sitting on her big throne tat was especially made for her by Ranjeet Singh Khuranna. Maan and Geet were dressed as the new royal couple and seeing Maansi look like a true beautiful princess dressed in red, they could not keep their tears inside. Geet was living the dream she never thought off and Maan was having the biggest smile seeing his daughter being coronate as the Princess and she was the only girl born with their family birth mark.



The stage



Throne



Maansi's dress

Wat is all these Daddy? Maansi asked folding her legs on her throne. She flashed the sweetest smile at Maan. Say na Daddy wat is all these?

Maansi Geet glared at her daughter but Maansi pouted and then grinned looking at Maan. Daddy who this takla... Vicky chachu say he is big big guru.. who guru Daddy.

Maan and Geet had their eyes wide while the rest who were on the stage muffled their laughter hearing Maansi ask about their Mahaguru who was chanting something.

Say na. who this.. why this big nangu pungu man don't have dress... is he poor. Dadima burst into a laugher and hearing her others too laughed while Mahaguru he was shocked. Dadaji glared at his wife and others but Dadima murmured at him we can't jt stop.. aapki Maansi bahut khatranak hain..

Who knows better than me? He said to himself and glared at them to shut and concentrate on the rituals. Maansi you need to be quite ok.

Na big Dadu.. Maansi pheeling bore.. so no quite ok.. Maansi want know all this.. tell me wat is this. Geet quickly stepped closer and kneeled next to Maansi and said softly. Baby.. you remember Daddy and Mumma said you are a princess. Maansi nodded cutely and you also know na Princess should be quite and hear big people.

But Maansi baby bore Mumma... you see I want to play with Chikku, siya, savi and all. Maansi pouted but then suddenly her eyes glittered seeing something shiny and then her eyes turned wider and wider seeing so many things are being placed in front of her. It included a set of diamond jewelry specially made for her and other things but then she grinned and almost jumped seeing something tat caught her eyes.

Maansi's Crown


No moving baby... Princess just sit here.

No Mumma.. Maansi baby go there.. see so pretty na. Geet just shook her head and looked for Maan's help who was grinning and enjoying his daughter's excitement.


Its for you baby.. just for you. Maansi clapped her hand hearing but then being the question bank and to make sure she heard right she asked the same in more excitement. Is these all for Maansi baby? Maansi asked twinkling her eyes. She was in awe seeing everything tat was in front of her but the most she loved to see was the crown tat was studded with diamonds and it shone. Daddy is this for me? She questioned Maan raising her voice so tat he could hear her. Daddy.. Mumma say this all for me.. is these all for Maansi baby Daddy.. say na.. is this for me.. me so happy.. see this looks so good good beautiful na.. I will play with it ok. She said pointing at the crown and everyone laughed at the excitement and crazy words.

Why you all laugh haan.. Maansi baby play with it.. not you all. She frowned with anger seeing them laugh. Oi... don't laugh na.. Maansi baby get angry now.

Maan make sure tat your next baby does not have any genes tat belong to you.. aur ek Maan ko nahi jhel sakthe..Geet dyan se baby making karna next ke liye. Badi Bua commented and with tat everyone laughed louder while Mahaguru glared at them.

Don't laugh ok.. I tell Big Dadu to shoot with his big old gun. Maansi warned the family who continued laughing at her while the Mahaguru who was performing the rituals for the coronation almost choked on his laughter hearing the smallest princess of the Khuranna family threatening to kill. He had hard time concentrating on the rituals but then suddenly he burst into laughter hearing Maansi give warnings. You.. takla guru nangu pungu..You don't laugh ok.. Big dadu will shoot you also. Mahaguru's eyes wide in amusement while Dadaji who sat with Maansi just burst out into a loud laughter shutting others who were shocked to hear Maansi and Ranjeet laugh like this without caring where was he.

Aapki per poti sach mein bahut badi hain Ranjeet.. Aapse bhi badi. Dadaji just shook his head. He knew Mahaguru was making fun of him as no one, not even he ever dared to say a word to Mahaguru and today Maansi threatened him to kill. Abhi se marne ke baat kar rahi hain.. tho badi hoke kya karengi... Ranjeet aap ki bolti band karne koi aa hi gayi ab.

Sach kaha Mahaguruji. Mahaguru smiled and quickly concentrated on the ceremony as he did not wanted to miss the auspicious time. He chanted the mantras while Maan kept his daughter busy when suddenly the head security tat belonged to the palace came and whispered something in Maan's ears making his eyes turn read. Yash and Vicky along with few more family boys instantly reacted seeing Maan turn angry but Dadaji's one stern look stopped them from doing anything and this wasn't unnoticed by Geet. She kept looking at Maan and feeling his Jaan's eyes he quickly smiled and continued chatting and playing with his Princess.

Maa..

Ranjeet. Geet's words stuck in her throat hearing the Mahaguru calling out Dadaji. Betiya ko ab taaj pehna do. Ranjeet smiled. His wish to have a true princess after ages was finally reality and now he would have the honor to crown the princess for the first time. Haan Mahaguru ji... ishe badi Khushi ho sakthi hain kya.

Mahaguru smiled and forwarded the crown to Ranjeet. Maan and Geet made Maansi to stand and the moment she was crowned she started to dance and jump in excitement. Ranjeet and Savitri had tears in their eyes while others tried hard to fight theirs. They never had a princess with the birth mark and today they were bestowed with it finally. Maan he just admired his daughter seeing her follow his Dadaji words and taking blessings from each person by bending and touching their feet.

Had told you. Maan pulled Geet closer and whispered in her ear Maansi is our daughter and she knows everything. Paise ki chamak ushe andha nahi karegi Jaan. Geet smiled wiping her tears. She could see it but being a mother she was bit scared but now she was sure tat her daughter would never ever get blinded with materialistic things.

Chalo... ab Maansi baby ko sab gift dedo.. aaj mera new wala happy birthday na. Mahaguru smiled patting her cheeks and he was the first one. He eyed one of his pandit who came forward and handed him a small box.

For you. Maansi grinned but then she pouted sadly. Kya hua... why are you so sad.

Maansi baby say you talka and nangu pungu na... so Maansi baby very sorry haan... but you see Maansi baby no wrong.. you no hair and no clothes so Maansi baby call you takla and nangu pangu but now Maansi baby so sorry to you guru ji. There was pin drop silence and Mahaguru was now confirmed tat this girl would surely make a difference and would only bring happiness in the Khuranna's family.

Tats ok Maansi baby.. now open your gift. And Maansi instantly opened and was shocked to see a beautiful Lord Ganesha.

Yeh tho baby gannu bappa hain guru ji. Mahaguru laughed. He never ever gifted anyone but when Ranjeet told him about Maansi he was happy and he wanted to give something to the princess and he instantly knew wat he had to give to he bought a small gold Lord Ganapti (baby) for her.

Haan.. just like you.. yeh aapka friend hoga ok. Maansi grinned and Ranjeet folded his hands in front of Mahaguru as getting something from him, it was a true god blessings. Maansi was then soon showered with more gifts and then she was taken to serve some panditji's who were performing the maha pooja inside while the coronation took outside. This was followed with a lunch and distributing of clothes, gifts and sweets for the poor's who showered their love and blessings on Maansi.


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You need to be calm Maan... just calm. Maan snarled as he strode towards the lone corner of Haveli where no one was allowed. It wasn't used and hence only the servants were allowed to use it for some emergency but today it was a place where Maan wanted to be in no time.

Maan. Dadaji tried to stop him but he was the wounded tiger who wanted to finish him enemy. Maan wait I said. Maan..

No Dadaji not today. Maan snarled. He was raged and anyone coming in front or trying to stop him would die. His anger was at peak and tat was the only thing keeping him sane right now.

Maan you need to..

I said nooo. He growled and tat scared Dadaji, Yash and Vicky and they almost backed seeing the furious tiger in front of them.

Geet.. Maansi Yash tried to calm Maan but one look at Yash was enough for him to shut hi mouth seeing the Devil son of his.

Not even them Dad.. not even them and his body shook with tremble anger seeing the one whom he wanted. He clenched his fists wanting to kill but then he would not give such an easy death for Rajveer Chopra.

Bro.. please aisa kuch mat kijiye Bro.. Geet aur Maansi ke baaremein sochna please. Vicky stepped forward trying to make Maan understand. He knew his brother was furious and knowing his anger now he knew tat Maan would not think even once before doing something tat he would regret later. Please ...

Maan Singh Khuranna. The voice echoed. Rajveer looked fearless though he was tied but there wasn't a scratch on him. Maan had laid this trap as he knew that knowing about the coronation Rajveer Chopra would finally come out of his hole and he did but unaware tat Maan and the Khuranna's were all prepared. They had their men's in each corner and any slight movement or suspicious man was asked to be arrested and lucky the one who was arrested was Rajveer who had entered being sardar but soon his real face was revealed.

Well planned to get hold of me Maan.. bahut acha plan banaya tumne. Rajveer spoke without a tinge of fear and he was fearless coz he was the predator here instead of Maan. But poor you.. zinda nahi rahoge.

Meri chodo Rajveer Chopra aur apni socha.. sher ke bill mein khud chale aaye ho tum. Maan said taking very cautionary steps not wanting to miss any change of expression on Rajveer's face.

Not a good trait of being Khuranna Maan..not very good. Maan arched his brow in anger and Rajveer smirked. Itne saare admiyo ko leke mujh akele ko marne chale aaye ho.. not very good for you.. Khuranna ki izzat tho rakho.

Rajveer. Dadaji growled hearing him say tat. Don't you dare forget with whom you are talking? Dadji's eyes were on fire. He himself wanted Rajveer dead and for tat he had planned everything and he only prayed tat Maan does not make a mistake. Khuranna's hain hum..

Pranam Dadaji.. bahut khushi hui aapko dekhkar... Waise meri beti Maansi..

Maannn Yash and Vicky ran to pull Maan who was now strangling Rajveer. Maan was so close to Rajveer tat the moment he took Maansis' name he dived on him and grabbed him by neck. Maan leave him.. Maan chodo Maan.. Maan.

Bro please.. please Bro..

I will kill you b******... I will kill you. Maan roared and with each roar his grip tightened making it difficult for others to pull him.

Maan... tumhe Geet aur Maansi ki kasam. And Dadaji's word did the trick. He instantly backed but Rajveer laughed trying to breathe. He enjoyed seeing Maan in distress and tat was his goal coz he knew tat his one silly mistake would make him to cost.

Kyu.. maar nahi sake Khuranna.. waise meri biwi... woh kya kehte ho ushe haan Jaan... kaisi hain.. mast hain na... maine tho..

*THUD* Rajveer fell along with the chair hitting his head but even though he did not hiss in pain. He continued ranting his words making Maan angrier who kept kicking and hitting him the way he wanted.

I will kill you b*****. Maan grabbed the gun tat one of the guards was having and he pointed it at Rajveer. Aaj teri kahani yehi khatam karunga Rajveer Chopra.. you played with my life... you hurt my Jaan and my daughter but today.. you will pay for each tear they shed.. you will pay for it.

I know you are scared of me Khuranna. Rajveer smirked still on ground with blood dripping from his mouth. Itne darthe ho ki mujhe ab tak aise bandkar maar rahe ho.. come on shoot me.. shoot me and prove wat a coward you are.. prove it... MSK the coward.. bloody coward.

Untie him. And tat was wat Rajveer wanted. He wanted one chance and he had stuck the right chord of Maan and now it was his game. MSK dushmaan ko bhi barabar ka chance detha hain Rajveer and here he threw his own gun shocking the others. Shoot me before I shoot you.. gun Maan ordered for another gun but it was too late as Rajveer was the bloody coward b****** who shot Maan before his gun was in his hand.

Maannn a painful cry echoed along with the gun shot.

Ja..ann Maan turned holding his bleeding arm tat was hit by the gun shot and was bleeding profusely. Ja..ann *THUD* Jaannn Maan cried and rushed over to a fallen Geet now while Dadaji had quickly ordered his men's to grab Rajveer Chopra.



Precap: We are Family...

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I'm tired of asking for likes so from now onwards I will update when I want as you all just read and don't bother to like and comment.. so you do your laziness and I will do mine... And if you don't want to wait then give my 200+ likes and 20 pages of comment soon.. warna wait karte raho as I enjoy it.



NEXT : PART 17

Edited by sdlife19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
me first.. and for you to know i am kkmouli and this is my alternate id
well i dint even read the update..😛
so let me do it first then i will comment..😉

Finally Coronation happened.
I thought you will not let the coronation done without any drama.😛
but you surprised me with its completion peacefully..
But atlast you have given the twist even though something like this is expected.
I know nothing can happen to Maneet..
But is this the end of Rajveer or there is more?!!!😕
Looking at the precap it seems to be the end of Rajveer but what about the SS..😕
Is there someone else with Rajveer?!
Please update the next part soon..
Eagerly waiting..😃
Edited by moulika_MG - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank u so much for the update
my maansi baby crowned as princess
omg she is so cute said sorry to guruji
omg omg rajveer shot maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update loved the maansi antics
ooops rajveer ...
waiting for next update

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