varya ff ...TERI MERI KAHANI!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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so guyz basically im a very bad writer 😭..i im just in 8th grade n i dont know how to use all tht discriptve words , grammer n all so if a all u guyz dont enjoy it plz 4give me n ths is my 1st ff 😕 soo im really nervous...so i wiill stp my bashan n srtff...thank u...as u know the plot of the stry now maya is sharing room wth vardhan...nght 10 pm ..maya took her bath n came out of washroom she was wearing a red coluored simple kurthi wih black leggings vardhan had already finished his bath ...maya enterned the room vardhan was workin on his laptop m: vardhan i tnk iz time for u 2 sleep v: ha bus ye dream team ka kaam khatam karloo...so maya went n sat on the bed..m:vardhan yaha pe toh sirf ek hi bed hai aur koyi sofa bhi nahi hai aur hum dono (she paused as she was a little uncomfortable sayin it..vrdhan took his eyes of frm the laptop n glazed at maya..) v: maya agar tumhe koi prob nahi hai toh hum ye bed share kar sakte hai..sirf agar tumhe koi prob nahi hai toh m;teek hai(but she was a little nervous)...maya got on to the bed n pulled the blanket towards herself , vardhan offed his lap n wen 2 bed) 12:15 at nght maya was still awake she turned towards vardhans side n she ccould see his face clerly as moon lght hit his face through the open windows 4 a sec she tought how vardhan repect women infact respect her helped her inspite of wht she did to him thinkin abt ths she fell a sleep! morning 6:30 maya woke upp vardhan was still asleep she tried 2 get up but her tangled her got caught in button of vardhan t-shirt she tried to pull it suddenly vardhan woke up he saw maya struglng wth hair he alsoo helped her as he tried to remove her hair thy hav an eyelock ) v:hogaya..m:hah ..kya main wash room pehle use karloon v;teek hain..maya went to freshen up by the time she came uot of the washroom vardhan was not thr in the room..she tried o lock the room but lock was broken m:vardhan ki aane se pehle change karti hoon washroom ki floor toh geela hai aur ye lock bhi toota hua hai...maya started wearing a light blue coloured saree but while she while she was abt to hook her blouse she saw the door opening n thr was vardhan! 😳😳😳😳 so ths is the 1st part so guyz r still alive aftr readin ths thn u can handle any torture😆😆im so sorry if itz bad all ur comments n bashes r welcomed ...plz do give u r review shld i conti or not..😕n sry 4 ma bad hindi coz im south indian n i only know basic hindi!!😕 soo plzz share u r views😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey that is good for start👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi dear, my name is Prishi...
and that was awesome...
I will gladly reply to the coming updates... Please just send me a PM...
Anyways I have the same problem as you I know only basic Hindi, because I live out of India.. anyways... Loved the update.. Continue Soon...
Love
Prishi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start. if possible thn plz include cute fights nd lines full of their attitude. keep updating 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow wow wow very nice good start and don't worry ur writing is nice now coming to story sharing bes and all uh cool so sad of Maya no lock maybe vardhan wantedly broke the lock who knows so now he came inside waiting for both of their reactions hehehe plz do continue soon I'm jumping in my seat and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What was that
Sharing same bed
Wowie
You left it at the moment I wanted to know what will happen
No problem
The update was mind boggling
Do update soon
Thanks for PM
And yes VarYa ff likhne ke liye saari galatiya maaf hai
I will add this to the writing corner
Love Manu :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Actually i am a silent reader but i was just eager to read so can you update the next part ...and great work 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
please watch ...varya vm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_IQDBOWWj10😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
please read varya os 😳
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4337959#p120823295

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