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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!!Loved it❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely cute update..te way my maaneet back to delhi and geet-dadi ki nautanki making my maan to roll his eyes was lovely..te way my maan want his geet to do elwl in her studies and to learn business too, but maan babu i know abt ur heart who wants his geet to be with him all te time..te way geet was busy with dadi and adi-pinky and my maan ki frown was lovely cute..opps gete baby dont know how to start and my maan drooling his geet and his gussa but maan becarful with ur sherni..te way my maan ki love for his geet and more over he want her to know abt tis world and helping her was lovely..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was such a refreshing part
now Geet is getting serious with studies and Maan too wants her getting involved in KC
Geet now has to handle the Aashram project and this is very important its vital need for the girls so here I'm sure if Maan actually had made Geet understand the importance and need of this project .
the good thing in all this Maan still sees the respect Geet holds for him.
and he'll do anything to see his Misti

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part dear...maan scolding as well as drooling on geet...

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Posted: 10 years ago
maneet ke gadi dheere dheere patri pe aa rahi hai,,,geet is smart...msk ke kahar se bach gai...i wish dadi ko jaldi maan ke dil ki bhanak lag jaye as these guyz to good for nothing lagte hai,,,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya hoga inn dono ka...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 66

Maan gets up to come closer and take a look at the file...and also his Mishti...

Geet thinks that Maan got angry with her and is leaving...

Geet : kya hua? Aap kahin jaa rahe ho?

Maan: haan, mujhe bahut bhook lagthi haina? Issiliye canteen jaa raha hoon, tum bhi aaoge?

Geet: haan haan, ab toh vada paav ka time bhi ho gaya

Geet looks at the clock...it's 11'o clock...it's Geet and Pinky's snacking time...

Pinky must be munching her chips and waiting for Geet...

Maan stares her...

Geet: nahi, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Maan: Geeet mein tummare paas aaraha tha

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, mujhe yahan kuch dikhayi nahi detha, ya toh mujhe file ke paas jaana hoga ya phir file ko mere paas aana hoga, mujhe nahi lagtha ki file mere paas aana chahtha, issiliye meine socha kyun na mein hi file ke paas jaatha

Maan meant Geet when he said file...ye toh hum bhi jaanthe hai...haina?

Geet pretends to be looking into the files...

Maan comes and sits beside her and enjoys the proximity...

Geet wants to finish the job quickly and move from that place as soon as possible...

She gets on her feet and looks for a file...

Maan is just staring her and waiting for her...

Geet spots the file near Maan and tires to take it still standing at a distance, away from Maan' reach...

Maan keeps watching her and keeps admiring her expressions...

She hurriedly takes a file but Maan is keeping his hand on it...

Maan won't let it go and Geet tires to pull it hard...

Maan takes off his hand and Geet looses her balance and is about to fall backwards when Maan catches hold of her hand and pulls her...

She swirls and falls on his lap instead...

She stares Maan for pulling her and Maan was just trying to stop her from falling...

Geet gets up and gets angry...

Maan loves her more when she is angry...

Maan takes the file himself from the floor but Geet is also reaching for it...

Their heads collide and Geet gets irritated...

Geet: aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: mein toh tummare madat kar raha hoon Geet

Geet: meinne aapse madat manga tha?

Maan shakes his head...

Geet: nahi na?

Maan: nahi

Geet: toh kyun mujhe pareshaan karthe ho?

Maan: kya? mein tumme pareshaan kartha hoon?

Geet: aur nahi toh kya?

Maan: Geet tum mere keemthi waqt barbad kar rahi ho? aur kitne dher lagaoge?

Geet: aap mujhe kaam karne dethe toh abhi tak meinne katam bhi kiya hoga

Maan: what? meinne tumme kab rokha?

Maan is still holding on to the file...

Geet looks at his hands...

Maan gives the file to her...

Finally they decide to do some work...

As they start planning for the new block they come up with their own ideas...

Geet starts thinking seriously...

Maan keeps staring her...

After a while...

Maan: Geet, kya hua? Tum so gayi ho kya?

Geet gets angry...

Geet: mein soch rahi hoon

Maan: achcha soch rahi thi? Par sochne ke liye toh dimag chahiye Geet

Geet stares Maan...

Geet: issiliye aap mujhe disturb kar rahe ho? aap ke paas dimag ho toh aap bhi sochthe

Maan: mein ne toh pehle hi sochliya hai

Geet: kya? phir mujhe kyun bhulaye ho?

Maan: woh...

Maan keeps drooling...

Geet: ab mujhe yahan koi kaam nahi hai, mein chalthi hoon

Geet gets up to go...

Maan holds her hand and stops her...

Maan: hare Geet, kahan bhagthe ho, kaam chor

Geet: aap kya chahathe ho? aaise toh mein teek se soch bhi nahi sakthi, mein apne cabin mein jaake aaram se sochthi hoon

Maan: kyun? Mere cabin mein kya problem hai?

Geet: hmmm...kya problem hai?

Geet looks at Maan...

Maan: meinne kya kiya?

Geet: aapne kuch nahi kiya?

Maan: mein yahan tumare madat karne ki koshish kar raha hoon aur tumme lagtha ki mein tumme disturb kartha hoon?

Geet: chado, mujhe bahut sara kaam hai

Geet leaves...

Maan: aur mera kaam?

It's been an hour and there is no sign of Geet...

Maan couldn't wait... he goes to see her...

Geet Pinky ke saath snacks break le rahi hai...

Just as Maan enters Pinky leaves...

Maan keeps standing at the door and staring Geet...

Geet's mouth is full and she hurriedly swallows seeing Maan...

Maan: ye achcha hai Geet, toh yahi tummara kaam tha?

Geet: woh hum

Geet tries to speak with her mouth stuffed...

She struggles to speak...

Maan takes the water and gives it to her...

Geet drinks it and is relieved...

Geet: aap galat samajthe ho

Geet tries to explain...

Maan: tum logon ne toh mere office ko hi canteen banakke rakha hai

Maan gets angry...

Geet: aapko toh sirf aapka kaam se matlab haina? Meinne apna kaam kardhiya hai, ab mein jo chahoon kar sakthi

Maan: achcha? Ab meinne bhi apna kaam katam kardhiya hai, toh mein bhi jo chahoon kar saktha hoon, haina?

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet steps back...she hits the wall and is struck...

Maan keeps admiring her...Geet is embarrassed...

Geet: woh mera matlab

Maan: kya hai Geet? ab toh office ka kaam katam ho gaya haina?

Geet: nahi

Geet takes the file and holds it inbetween them...

Maan steps back...

Geet: ye meinne kuch plans banaya hai, aap dekho

Geet couldn't look into his hungry eyes and she escapes into the file...

Maan: beitjao Geet

Geet sits on her seat...

Maan sits infront of her...

Maan snatches the file from her and looks into it...

Maan is impressed...it's quiet innovative and fresh...

Maan: attached bathrooms?

Geet: haan, ye girls block haina?

Maan: good

Geet: aur ye recreation room hoga, aur yahan ek badiya TV hogi aur Sundays ko salman film dkeh sakthe hai saath beitlke

Maan looks at Geet...

Geet: hare yahan sab nache gaaye aur khel bhi sakthe haina?

Maan: ye teek hai par meinne socha ki yahan pe library cum study room hoga, aur yahan kuch systems with wifi honge jisse woh apna knowledge improve kar sakthe, aaj ke competitive world ki tayyari jo karna hai unko, isse unko achche jobs milega aur woh independent bhi ho jayenge

Geet: haan, par entertainment ke liye bhi kuch hona chahiye haina?

Maan: you are right, hum aaise karthe hai, hafthe mein 3 din yaha entertainments honge

Geet: ye achcha idea hai

Maan: aur ye kya hai?

Geet: ye toh terrace hai, open terrace, yahan chandhini raat ko sab moonlight dinner bhi kar sakthe, haina?

Maan: par humme iss ko bhi utilize karna padega, ye open terrace nahi closed one hoga, they can use it for their aerobics and other exercises

Maan is known for his fitness regime, haina?

Geet: girls kya six pack banathe hai? nahi na, hum yahan pe ek choti si stage banayenge jahan pe girls apne talents showcase kar sathe, aur Sunday nights ko entertaining bana sakthe, haina?

Maan: tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet: aap pagal ho gaye ho, ye aap ke KM nahi Khuranaji, ye girls' hostel hai, aur aapko kya patha ki ladhkiyon ko kya pasand hai? aap ladhkiyon ke barein mein kya jaanthe?

Maan: mein ladhkiyon ke barein mein jaanna bhi nahi chahtha, ek ladhki ko jaanne ki koshish mein hi mein bar bar har gaya hoon

Maan looks at Geet...

Geet: kya?

Maan: kuch nahi Geet, tum ne sahi kaha hai, uss ladhkiyon ke pasand ko hum kaise jaanthe? Kyun na hum unse hi pooche ki woh kya chahathe hai?

Geet likes this idea very much...she knows that the girls will support her only...

Geet: toh teek hai, hum unke sala bhi lenge

Maan: toh kal tayyar raho Geet

Geet blinks...

Maan: kal Sunday haina?

Geet: haan, toh?

Maan: hum kal hi ashram jaa sakthe hai

Geet is also happy to go and meet the girls for whom they are going to build this home...

Geet: teek hai, mein kal jaldhi tayaar ho jathi hoon

Maan has a big smile on his face...he's excited to spend the day with Geet...

Maan: thank god, issne pehle bar mere baat ko mana nahi kiya hai

Geet: mein toh sirf uss bachon ke liye aarahi hoon, samjhe aap?

Maan: meinne kab kaha ki tum mere liye aarahi ho?

Geet shows fake anger and leaves...as she turns to the other side she blushes and is also equally excited...

Maan knows that she is blushing even though he couldn't see her face...

Part67

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
maaneet ki nok jokes superb :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 66 - kitna tu-tu-me-me chalta hai dono me...both decided and agreed for some points...but still they disagreed and fought for some points...geet is right maan doesn't know more about girls' needs...so they decided to visit the place and ask the girls only so accordingly they accommodate their needs...

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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely superb omg update..te way my maan ki naughtyiness to be with his geet and geet baby to hide her dhak dhak faking gussa was lovely cute..my maaneet ki romantic nok jhok was lovely..opps even though geet was annoy with my maan ki nagging but she love it was lovely..te way my maaneet ki Sunday out, omg geet ki blush and my maan smirking was lovely..i love te update


Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago

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