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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dear...enjoyed maaneet cute fight...update soon..
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very nice update
maaneet still fighting

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Part - 67

Next day...

Maan is ready and is waiting for Geet...

But Geet is not at home...

Maan gets angry for he had told her to be ready by 10 am...

And this girl has forgot it completely and Maan is even more angry for he had been waiting for this for a long time...it's been many days since their Hoshiarpur visit and they havn't got a chance to go out together...

And this stupid girl doesn't understand Maan's feelings and his yearnings...

Poor Maan, he had to control himself for he doesn't want Geet to get affected and hence get distracted from her studies...but this girl is so stupid that she won't understand him even when he openly flirts with her and expresses his love for her...

Maan is not good at expressing his love and Geet is very bad to understand anything easily...

Babaji only knows what's in store for their love...

Maan finishes his BF and keeps waiting for Geet...

Dadi: Maan bete, aaj koi meeting hai kya? aap itne jaldhi tayaar ho gaye?

Maan: nahi Dadi, par koi aur kaam hai

Dadi: aap lunch ke liye toh aajayenge na?

Maan: patha nahi Dadi, mein lunch ke liye wapas aatha ya mein lunch ke badh hi jaatha

Dadi: what?

Maan: ye Geet kahan hai Dadi?

Dadi is so excited...so Maan is taking Geet out...on a date? Balle balle...

Dadi hides her joy for she knows Maan would drop the plans if Dadi talks about their relationship...

Dadi: Geet toh subhe subhe shopping chale gaye

Dadi thinks Maan wanted to take her for shopping and Geet has gone alone...

Maan: shopping?

Maan gets angry...

Dadi: kya hua bete? Aap Geet ke saath jaane wale the kya?

Maan: nahi Dadi, Geet mere saath aane wali thi, kuch zaroori kaam hai, hummare naye project ka, aur ye ladhki subhe subhe shopping chali gayi? I don't know when she will become responsible

Dadi is disappointed...KC ka kaam? Patha nahi ye Maan kab apne kaam ko chodke bahar ke duniya mein aayenge?

Dadi wants to save Geet...

Dadi: aap hi kehthe haina ki Geet abhi bhi bachi hai

Maan: iss ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardeghi

Maan becomes restless as he is losing his precious time that he wants to spend with his Mishti...

But his Mishti doesn't even bothered to inform him about her shopping plans...else Maan would have taken her for shopping too on the way...

That would have been so much fun...and Maan would have got the chance to gift her something...

Now when will this girl return...Maan keeps looking at the entrance...

He is getting impatient and his anger is raising high...

Dadi has to cool him down... or he will start shouting at Geet again...poor Geet, kam se kam aaj toh Maan se bachke rahegi...

Dadi: hare bete, aaj toh Sunday hai, Geet ko kyun pareshaan karthe hai aap? aap ka kaam ko aap hi sambaliye

Maan: par Dadi meinne toh ussko kitne bar samjaya ki aaj ussko mere saath aana hoga, aur ye ladhki toh kabhi nahi sudhregi, jab dekho apne manmarzi karthi rehthi, dusron ke baat ka koi kadar hi nahi kaas karke mere baton ka

So Maan wants Geet to give importance to him and his words...that's a good sign...dadi is happy...but what about this girl? Why doesn't she take Maan seriously ?

Dadi calls Geet...

Dadi: Geet bete aap kahan ho?

Geet: Dadi mein aashram mein hoon

Dadi: aashram mein? Wahan kya kar rahe ho beta? Maan toh yahan aapka intrezaar kar rahe hai

Maan: aahsram? Geet aahsram chali gayi?

Geet: Maan sir abhi tak ghar mein hai?

Dadi: par beta Maan toh aap ke liye wait kar rahe hai

Geet: sorry dadi, unse kahiye ki mein aahsram pohunchgayi hoon

Dadi looks up to inform Maan, but Maan has already left...

Dadi warns Geet...

Dadi: Geet bete, Maan bahut gusse mein hai, sambalke beta

Geet: ye DD toh hamesha gusse mein hi rehthe, aap fikar mat kijiye Dadi, mein sab sambloongi

Dadi: all the best beta

Geet: thanks Dadi

At the aashram...

Geet has become friends with those girls...

She had bought them chocolates and small gifts, girlish gifts, bands, ear rings, bindis and other goodies...whatever Geet could afford from her pocket money she gets from dadima...

Maan just becomes a mere spectator and he keeps admiring his Mishti thru out the day...

All the girls like their small gifts and they love Geet very much...

She is just like one of them and Geet tells them that she is also dependent on Maan for her studies and that she is lucky to be here studying...

She says that babaji will always show you the path if you are willing to fight for your life, your rights though you are a girl just like Geet...

The girls are inspired by her story and they wish Geet successfully graduates and settles down in a good job...they also want to dream, and work hard to make their dreams come true...

They now know that they are not that unlucky for they have a place to live and the little oppurtunities to study and stand on their own...

Geet is very happy that she could bring a smile on their face and give them hope...

Maan then wants them to have a look at the plans for they had come for that only...

Geet had come early and joined them for BF itself...

The food was good but they had problems with water...

The tank was empty and girls had to carry water in buckets for cleaning and also bathing...

Geet felt very bad and she decides to tell about this to Maan...

Geet: Maan sir

Maan: hmm Geet

The girls keep looking at Maan and they have noticed him staring Geet...

They know that Maan likes Geet and they start talking among themselves about it...

But Geet doesn't seem to understand this...

Geet: pehle inki water problem ko solve karo

Maan: sagarji ye kya keh rahi hai?

Sagar: haan ji, yahan pe pani ki problem hothi hai

Maan: aap ne borewell lagaya kya?

Sagar keeps thinking...they don't have that much money...

He is silent...

Geet: inke paas itna pasia hotha toh ye aap ki madat kyun mangthe?

Maan calls Adi immediately...

He arranges for the borewell...

The girls are very happy...they thank Geet...

So Geet came early and has easily mingled with them and they have told her their probems without any hesitations...had she come with Maan they wouldn't have opened up so much...haina?

Maan had to appreciate Geet...

Maan looks at Geet in admiration...

Geet shows them their plan and asks them their suggestions...

They girls eagerly surround her and join the discussion...

Geet explains them every detail and Maan keeps watching her...

She is so concerned and caring and she considers them as friends and not any strangers...

They like the attached bath idea and also the study cum recreation room...

But they don't know if they deserve all these luxuries, for these are unnecessary burden on their budget...

The caretaker Mr.Sagar also feels that they can't afford all those luxuries...

Maan agrees to finance the whole project...

The girls clap to appreciate his kind offer...

Geet then thinks that they could make it big as there is no budget as such now...

Now they can think about the little luxuries too...

First thing that comes to her mind is the cold water bath in Delhi's winter...

She tells Maan that they can go for solar heaters...

Maan likes the suggestion and he further proposes total solar power...

That way they won't have the monthly bill burden...

Then coming to the terrace, the girls want that to be converted into a working place...

Where they can help earn a bit for themselves...

They have learned sewing and they would like to have a sewing unit to stich their own clothes and may be earn from their sewing skills...

Geet likes that idea and she immediately supports it, she says she'll help them start a little business of their own...

And the baking team asks for a little baking area where they can bake their own breads and cookies and sell them in the local shops...

Everything decided Maneet leave with satisfaction...

They promise to come and meet them every weekend...

Maan is the happiest person for he can spend the weekends with Geet now...

Part68

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely superb touchy update..te way my maan was waiting for his geet but geet baby went to shopping was lovely..te way my maan ki restless to be with his geet and dadi teasing him was lovely..opps geet went to asrhram but she is right she want to mingle with girls and want to know abt they problems and with my maan ki help she clearing they water and current problem was lovely..te way my maaneet helping te girls and my naughty maan planning to spend his week end with his geet was lovely..i love te update
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part dear...geet mingle with girls and helps them to open up and share their views...maan also appreciate geet efforts in his mind...

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice updates
3 ud were due i finished now
maan loves geet company
he don't want to distract geet
from studies so he hold his desires
and geet also have some months
to clear hr graduation maanhaving eye
on geet studies and time to time giving
hr projects to learn practically
now ashram project and geet drama
maan want to take hr to ashram but
she went alone firstly shopping and
than ashram and she successful in
hr mission to know girls view
daadi in another world fr thinking maaneet togetter
some day hr wish comes true
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 38
Awesome...
Poor Geet...
Maan yelled at her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 67 - lovely part...geet left to aashram without informing maan...and maan got very furious as he lost his chance to spend more time with her...dadi informed geet about his anger...but when man saw her interacting sweetly with the girls he forgot his anger...both liked each other's suggestions and they promised to meet every weekend...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update loved it...
maan is angry bcoz geet leave ashram without informing him...poor maan lost chance to spend more time with geet 😆
but when maan saw geet with girls he forgot all his anger...

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