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Posted: 10 years ago
aawesome n lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update. liked it.
taani is going to do suicide...
everyone loves her so much
she took promise from him.
swayam saved her.
all baccha party is so cute. their punishment to taani was so sweet.
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Awesome update
Taani trying to puch Rey away from herself and Rey trying to stop her
What will happen in those 4 days?
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Emotional update...😭
Was literally crying
Finally reyam found taani...
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seriously agar aap aur do din tak update nhi karte to aapka pm box mere msgs ...nhi dhamkiyon se bhara hota
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still...thanx fr update :')

Taani Suicide :0

ufff...ye paagal ladki...

loved whole chapter...

4 days... thode zyafa kardte

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dil se big wala thank you so much for all your likes and special comments. they really really really mean a lot n a lot to me

sorry not able to reply because of shortage of time , I hope u all will understand please but I will try to reply u all asap ,sorry as i m updating very late this time also but dont worry i m compensating it wid super long update 😆 sorry if i bore u or disappoint u

(do read till d end , at first its a little emotional but its end is not emotional , i really hope you all like it) 😛

HUM MAR JAYENGE

Chapter15 " MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI"

Last part e of this chapter

(sorry friends but m excluding all details , and ya gang will come soon in this story , ryt now I want to show taarey particularly )

They all reached home but rey was quiet all time in the car .. taani was feeling extremely bad seeing rey like that , she saw that his face was reflecting no emotion this time , neither sadness nor anger but his eyes were reflecting deep pain... she could read his heart through his eyes , she could feel the pain of his heart , rey was not looking into her eyes , he was trying his best to not look at her , but still they were locked in intense eyes locks numer of times .

She was also feeling damn hurt seering rey like this and at the same time she was angry on her destiny but she was helpless , she was also stopping her tears sticking on her decision of letting him go away far away from her ..

They entered their home , It was dinner time now

Kaka made the dinner and asked them to come for dinner

They all went for dinner but rey was going to the guestroom where he was staying , he was going as he was not being able to control himself now

As he was going taani gather her strength and call him controlling her tears and pain " reyy " he stopped there but didn't turn and face her

Taani - rey kahan jaa rahe ho aap? dinner nahi karoge hamare saath ?.. plz aayiye na

Rey answer without facing her " nahi , I am not hungry but you have your dinner ok ,

I know If I will be with you then you may not be able to eat because you don't want me near you. you don't want me to be with you anymore hai na taani ?

Tears roll down taani's cheeks hearing his reply .. he also had tears in his eyes while saying that but he couldn't control his emotions anymore ,

Before tani could say anything , rey went upstairs in his room

Taani wipe her tears and then she say to swayam , ma and her tauji - please you all have your dinner and then go to sleep I know you all are tired . don't worry about me , I will have dinner with rey , I have to talk to him , and ya I will take my medicines too, ..please

All nod in yes and then taani take her and rey's food to his room , she go inside but was so shocked to see him so angry .

he was punching the punching bag so furiously , so angrily in an effort to let out all his anger and pain on it ..

she stopped to hear what rey was saying in anger

rey was saying a little loudly and angrily (with some tears in his eyes but there was more anger and pain in those eyes remembering taani at d edge of terrace and thinking of its consequences , he was scared if he would have lost her , the mere thought of loosing taani was scaring him )- she don't want me in her life , she want to die

how can she forget that its not only her life ...her life is my life as well ,

how can she forget that her rey cant live without her ? how ... Howww can she even think of dying ? ... her life may not be precious for her but her life is precious for me, for her and only her reyyy ... why is she not understanding me ? why cant she understand her rey ,

my taani's life is the reason of my existence , how can she forget that rey live for her , she is keeping me alive , she lives in my heart and my heart beat for her only , how can she forget me so easily ? usne ek baar bhi mere bare main nahi socha aise step lene se pehle , she didnt even thought once about me before trying to ...suicide ... how can she ?? how can she ?? how can she even think of it damn it , she has no right to do that , she has no right to take away my life which is her life ... Agarrr ..agarr usse kuch ho jaata to (his heart sank with this mere thought of loosing her)

what if... what if ... something happened to her noo nooo nooo nothing nothing will happen to my taani .. NOTHING (saying this he punched hard again )

taani was crying , her tears were falling unstoppably listening to rey's words and feeling his pain .. but she control herself and wipe her tears and knock on the door to get rey's attention

knock knock .. she again knock the door

but rey didn't hear and continue saying while crying but still angrily " how could she do that ?? this is not my taani , my taani was strong , she was not weak that she take such a horrible step , and whyyy ?? ( he gave a strong punch on the punching bag and continue while tears were flowing from his eyes ) because .. because .. she don't want me in her life anymore , my taani can die but cant live with me , my taani can die but cant accept my love ... (taani s heart was piearcing into uncountable pieces hearing him )

he punch again and again and again saying NO NO NO ... this is not my taani , my taani used to love me immensely , my taani was strong , but she is not my taani , she don't love me anymore , she wanna leave me alone forever n ever ... she don't love me anymore

She couldn't take it and just go inside but he didn't even look at her , he was continuously punching the punching bag . she kept the tray with plates of food on the side table and turn to him and say "rey " ..

"rey " ...

" reyy listen to me please"

but he was not even looking at her and just punching the punching bag letting out his pain & anger ,

Rey say very angrily " you want to get rid of me na taani then kill me at once , don't punish me & kill me again and again by punishing yourself , hurting yourself and try to ... kill youself , I am nobody for you , I am nobody for whom you should live , I am nobody or whom you should love and care I am nobody for you na so just kill me damn it (saying that he punched hard again on the punching bag , taani was standing on the left side of him but at a little distance , she was crying real badly by now seeing him in this condition and she was nodding in no that no don't say like that , she want to explain but not getting any word to explain her action, his every word was piercing her heart more and more but he was also not in his senses and was deeply hurt by taani's attempt to suicide )

She say slowly in between her sobs " stop it plz stop it reyyy , plz stop it "

Rey look at her with teary eyes and was even more hurt to see tears in her beautiful eyes because of him

He punched again with all his strength on the punching bag which result in blood coming out from his hand , he was angry on himself for being the reason of taani's tears

Taani got a little scared and was even more scared when she looked at his bleeding hand - reyyy

She just go and hug him from back while crying to stop him ,

Rey was going to punch again but taani hold his arm from back , he look at her from his side , she was nodding in a no , to not punch again , some tears fell from his eyes seeing the tears of her beautiful eyes , she say while controlling her tears " ruk jaiye rey plz ruk jaiye , I cant see you in pain "

Rey hold the punching bag from one hand so that it won't hit back and keep his other hand on her hand and tilt his face to her side and say " so what do you think ? I can see you in pain ?? even I can't see you in pain taani"

They kept looking at each other for some minutes trying to heal each other's wound by the love visible in their eyes

Then rey turn and raise his hand to wipe her tears

But he forgot that it was his bleeding hand only

He was hurt not because of his hand but because of tears in taanis eyes , because of what taani tried to do...

Taani looked at his hand and remembered that his hand is still bleeding, she forgot that while looking in his eyes

She got worried and say "rey , reyyy aapka hand , aapka hand , u need first aid "

Rey say "its ok taani ..leave it dont worry "

But She don't listen to him and go and get the first aid box and made him sit on the bed and she sit beside him

She took the cotton and started cleaning his blood while scolding him and she was listening to her like a kid while adoring her and feeling her love and care

Taani " see what you have done to your hand , bahut maza aata hai na khud ko takleef pahuncha ke aapko ? dekho kitna bleeding ho raha hai , khud ki parvah to kabhi karni he nahi hai , kaabhi mat sunna apni taani ki baat (she didn't even realize that she said herself as his taani and kept on scolding ) , ye bhi nahi sochte ki aapko dard hoga to mujhe bhi dard hoga , na jaane kab sudharoge aap , mera gussa khud pe nikalne ki kya zaroorat hai , gussa karna he hai to mujhpe karo na , khud ko kyun takleef pahuncha rahe ho , acha ab samjhi main aap indirectly mujhe takleef pahunchane ke liye he khud ko takleef pahuchate ho hai na ? aur itna sab karne ke baad first aid karne main bhi dramien janab ke , hadd hoti hai (she put the ointment and bandaged his hand )

Ho gaya , pata nahi main nahi hoti to aapka kya hota ??

Rey came out of trance and say " vahi to taani agar tum nahi hogi to na jaane tumhare rey ka kya hoga ?? "

Taani look at his teary eyes , but immediately look away to not get lost in his eyes again while hiding her tears but rey hold her chin and made her look at him

As she look at him a stubborn uncontrolled tear fall from her eye , rey wipe her tear with his other hand and she just close her eyes while feeling his touch of love and care , she just let some tears fall so that her pain be healed a little by his touch of love and care . he caress her face and wipe away her tears and say " you have no idea how I felt when you left us and when you tried to commit suicide , you have no idea how much you hurt me by doing this , I was scared to lose you again . I was hurt being the reason of your such step. My heart was sinking even with the thought of loosing you , and suicide ,... how could you taani to even think of that ? how could you

My taani was my star , my taani was not a looser to take such a step , you don't even know what you mean to me , if you are alive only then I am alive , I BREATHE WHEN YOU BREATHE , MY HEART BEATS WHEN YOUR HEART BEAT , I SMILE WHEN YOU SMILE , I LAUGH WHEN YOU LAUGH YOU ARE MY HAPPINESS , YOU ARE MY LIFE , MY SOUL , MY EVERYTHING TAANI , tumhe yaad hai tumne uss ladki ki jaan bachayi thi jo sirf ek breakup ki vajah se suicide kar rahi thi aur tumhi ne usse life ki value samjhayi thi aur tumhe ne kaha than na ~' SUICIDE IS NOT ONLY KILLING YOURSELF BUT ALSO KILLING YOUR LOVED ONES WHO LOVE YOU IMMENSELY AND CARE FOR YOU FROM THE DEEPEST CORE OF HEART , IT IS THE INSULT OF THEIR LOVE AND CARE , IT IS THE INSULT OF YOUR MOM WHO HAS GIVEN YOU THIS BIRTH, IT IS THE INSULT OF EVERY PRAYER OF YOUR LOVED ONE FOR YOUR LONG LIFE AND HAPPINESS . LIFE IS ONLY ONE AND IT IS REALLY VERY PRECIOUS . LIFE IS A BLESSING AND SUICIDE IS THE INSULT OF THAT BEUATIFUL BLESSING OF GOD '~ to phir ab khud ye kaise bhool gayi hmm ??

Taani says( still crying and closing her eyes) "sorry .. sorry , sorry rey I m dil se very very very sorry i know i hurt you a lot by that , don't know what happened to me I just couldn't control my pain I am sorry please forgive me ...I am sorry

Rey was caressing her face with one hand and wiping her continuously flowing tears and say " I will forgive you only on 1 condition that you promise me that you will never even think of it again , come on promise me now ( he hold her hand with his bandaged hand while caressing her face with other hand.. taani's eyes are still closed she just wanna feel his healing touch of love )

Taani sqeeze his hand and hold it firmly saying

" promise rey , I promise , dil se vala promise that I will never even think of suicide pakka promise rey"

Taani say in heart " aapke paas hone main kitna sukoon hai rey , kitna sukoon hai , ki dil chahta hai ki hamesha aapke paas rahun , aapke pyaar ki chaav main rahun , par shayad hamari kismet main he judaai hai to mere chahne , na chahne se kya faraq padta hai "

Taani say while closing her eyes tightly " but remember you also have to go away after 4 days rey "

Rey (with teary eyes and shaking voice) - noo taani no ,... please no .. I don't want to go away from you , please taani no please no nooo

Taani- sorry but you have to rey , you have also promised me that you will go back after 4 days

Rey - when you couldn't leave me alone in my little pain then how can I leave you and let you suffer all alone ?? if you have the right to heal my wound then shouldn't I have the right to heal your pain ? I know that I cant take away your disease , your pain your .. cancer but at least I can share your pain and try to lessen it by my love and care "

Taani open her eyes immediately and remove his hands from her face and say
" no rey , this is my disease , this is my pain , this is MY suffering , you will not suffer because of me and my disease , I cant let you suffer , I cant "

His anger again rose a little and he say " that means you can share my pain but I cant share your pain WHY ?? "

Taani - because I cant see you suffering reyy

Rey (with teary eyes ) - so am I sweetheart , even I cant see you suffering I also cant see my love suffering alone with this horrible disease

Taani - why don't you understand rey ?

Rey - why don't YOU understand taani , agar mujhe aise koi bimaari hoti to kya tum mujhe akela chod deti ??

Taani say immediately - nahi rey nahi , aise bimaari kabhi kisi ko nahi honi chahiye , kisi ko bhi nahi ..and Krishna ji aapko har pain , har disease , har problem se duur rakhein , aapko kabhi koi choti se bimaari bhi na ho yahi dua hai meri , krishna ji aapke saare pains and problems mujhe de dein and meri share ki har happiness aapki life main bhar de , meri bachi hui umar bhi aapko lag jaaye

Rey couldnt say anything , he was so touched by her pure love , he just hug her while some pearls of tears were flowing down his cheeks and falling on taanis' shoulder , and so was with taani she was also crying in reys embrace

After sometime rey say still hugging her in the sitting position on the bed " why do you wanna take away all my pain taani why ?? you r already suffering so much but still you want all my pains n problems ? please think for yourself also at least once , you want to fill my life with every happiness but what about your happiness ?and how can you forget that you are my happiness , I smile when my taani smiles , I laugh when my taani laugh , my heart gets happy by seeing you happy , and are you mad or what ? , I don't want your life , I just want to spend the rest of my life with my taani , with my love . main jab tak bhi jiyu meri taani sang jiyu varna mere jeene ka koi matlab nahi hai ,. Krishna ji tumhe jaldi se thik kar de aur tumhe bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut lambi umar de taaki tum hamesha apne rey ke saath reh sako , Krishna ji tumhari zindagi main pyaar aur khushiyon ka har rang bhar de .. aurr agar ..tum mujhse itna pyaar karti ho to khud se duur kyun kar rahi ho taani ? kyun khud ko aur mujhe doo ko hurt kar rahi ho

Taani break the hug and says while crying

" kyunki ye zaroori hai rey , ye zaroori hai , I know rey ki aap apni taani ko cancer se fight karte hue uski last stage main nahi dekh payenge , main aapko sirf pyaar ke aur khushiyon ke ehsaas dena chahti hun , khoobsurat yaadein deke jaana chahti hun , dard bhari tadapti yaadein nahi de sakti aapko , ki aap kabhi aage he na badh payein , I want you to move on in life , apke saamne aapki puri zindagi hai , you have a whole life , which unfortunately I don't have . lots of love , happiness and success are waiting for you rey ,a beautiful life is waiting for you which you shouldn't waste on me , so you have to forget me and move on rey

Rey - ye kabhi nahi ho sakta taani , kabhi bhi nahi ,

Taani say while tears were still flowing down her cheeks - hoga rey , waqt lagega par dheere dheere aap mujhe bhool jaoge , plz rey mere liye apni zindagi kharab mat kijiye , life ek he hoti aur bahut precious hoti hai , so plz you have to go away from me and move on in life

Rey - main tumhe kaise samjhaun taani , kaise samjhaun , ki taani aur rey ek duje ke bina adhoore hai aur hamesha adhoore rahenge ,

This rey is yours and yours only , and rey can forget himself but he can never forget his taani , his love , his soulmate

Rey is incomplete without taani and I know taani is also incomplete without rey , taarey ka wajood ek saath hai , alag alag nahi ..Rey aur taani ek duje ki bina nahi jee sakte

Taani - par jeena hoga rey , aaj nahi to kal jeena hoga , rey ko apni taani ke bina , aur taani ko bhi duur jaana hoga rey se, ye mera nahi destiny ka decision jisse chahkar bhi change nahi kiya ja sakta

Rey's teary eyes fell on the guitar and he think to manofy her by singing one of her favorite songs ..and also expressing his feelings and letting them reach from his heart to her heart .. by way of a song ..

He go and take the guitar while taani was seeing him confusedly

He was holding the guitar with his wounded hand and playing it with other hand and he start singing the song

(Song - mujhe teri zaroorat hai from ek villain movie )

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8HeRvbeuCc

as his voice fell on her ears .. she raise her teary eyes and look at him ..

he start singing looking into her eyes ... with eyes full of tears and pain

and all those words were perfectly conveying his heart's feelings .. his words .. his song .. his feelings have so much truth in them .. that taani could feel it in his song but was feeling bad at her helplessness

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein
Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2)

(he sing these lines while coming forward to her where she is sitting , he had tears in his eyes because of her wish of their separation. he was trying to ask by singing these lines that why do my heart live alone ?? why do we live apart inspite of loving each other so much ? I am living but I am incomplete without you , I am saying every moment that I NEED YOU taani , REY NEEDS TAANI TO LIVE .. he come and sit on the bed and sing further )

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

( he sings while telling her indirectly that he was living in darkness means there was no love and happiness in his life before , but its taani who brought the light of love and happiness in his life, he learnt the meaning of life from her, the meaning of love from her , now if he have to leave her then he will be back in that darkness again , the darkness where there will be only pain and pain , there will be no happiness and love in his life without her , now the loneliness is also angry on me , in loneliness also there are only taarey memories in his heart , no one can love me like the way you do , living without you is like a punishment on me , I need u , I just need you )

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai
Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai
Aaa..

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai
Sunkar isey aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain
Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon (sadaayein: awaaz)
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

( he was trying to tell her by these lines that her fragrance is still alive in his breathes, he feel suffocated because he cant live without her and she is asking him to leave her , how can he forget her , how can he forget the beautiful moments spent with her . all the memories of her , her fragrance , the jingling sound of her bangles , her cute antics , her hugs , her kisses , her love, her care all those memories are still alive in the room of his heart , all those memories still echoed in that room of his heart , all those memories can never let him move on . she should remove those memories from his heart first if she want him to move on , he cant move on with those beautiful memories . he is saying it again and again that he need her and only her , he need her to hug him , kiss him and shower her pure love on him always.)

Taani was hearing his song with closed eyes while tears were flowing down her eyes , she could feel all his unsaid words by that song . she could feel all his emotions and pains in that song but at the same time she was feeling helpless on her condition

He keeps the guitar and comes close to taani and says sitting beside her with no distance between them " I NEED YOU TAANI .. I AM INCOMPLETE AND SOULLESS WITHOUT YOU , I JUST CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU ANYMORE .. I NEED YOU AND YOUR RELIEVING LOVE JAAN .. don't ask me to leave you don't ask me to forget you .. as I WILL PREFER DYING INSTEAD OF LEAVING YOU OR FORGETTING YOU ... I WILL BE DEAD THE MOMENT I LEAVE YOU ... I WILL BE KILLED IF I FORGET YOU EVEN FOR A SECOND ... nahi jaa sakta tumse duur .. nahi jaa sakta apni jaan se duur .. kyuki mujhe aur mere tadapte dil ko tumhari zaroorat hai taani ... mujhe tumhari aur tumhare pyaar ki zaroorat hai jaan

TRUST ME TAANI , MY LOVE , MY SWEETHEART MY JAAN ,

~ MY HEART WILL STOP BEATING WITHOUT YOU.. MY LIFE WILL BE MEANINGLESS , INCOMPLETE AND LIFELESS WITHOUT YOU ... MY SOUL WILL BE RESTLESS WITHOUT HIS COMPANION HIS LOVE TAANI ,

I LOVE YOU INFINITELY AND MY LOVE IS IMMORTAL , NEVER ENDING & BOUNDLESS ..

MY LOVE IS TRUE & PURE SO STOP RUNNING AWAY FROM IT

Saying that he just kissed her forehead , taani's eyes are still closed , she was just feeling this beautiful moment of love and then he kissed her cheeks making her cheeks turn red by blushing , he was coming closer and closer to kiss on her lips but taani remembered her disease and move apart and nod her head in a no while crying

Rey - kyun taani why you keep pushing me away from you , kya tumhe mere paas hona acchha nahi lagta ? kya tumhe acchha nahi lagta if I love you , if I hug you , if I kiss you

Taani say "nahi rey aisa nahi hai , it's the most beautiful feeling of feeling your love , there is solace in your hug , I feel so relieved and safe in your hug , so much so that I wanna spend the rest of my life in your embrace feeling your love .. but no rey its not possible , I am sorry rey but you have 4 days and after that you have to go back please for me , its my last wish from you

Rey's eyes filled with tears again and he said controlling himself " ok fine taani if this is your wish then I will fulfill it anyhow , your wish is my command and I promise you that after these 4 days you will yourself come to me forever n ever "

Taani look at him in suspicion that whats he actually gonna do in those 4 days " nahi rey aisa kuch nahi hoga "

Rey " aise he hoga taani aisa he hoga "

Taani " nahi hoga , nahi hoga , nahi hoga , bilkul nahi hoga "

Rey " hoga , hoga ,

hoga , aur zaroor hoga "

Taani " nahi hoga, nahi hoga aur

Nahi hoga "

Rey "hoga "

Taani " nahi hoga "

Rey "hoga "

Taani " nahi hoga "

Rey "hoga "

Taani" hoga" (by mistake she said that , rey gave a victorious smile ) Ok fine we will see

Rey - yes we will see but for these 4 days , we will live as best friends since you will not let us live as girlfriend boyfriend and plz be that old bubbly taani for me who keep smiling ,keep talking , keep doing crazy things , who just do what her heart says ,who don't think much before saying or doing anything , who live life every moment , who make every moment cute , sweet and special , plz taani just live every moment in these 4 most beautiful days of our lives with me , please

I promise to not cross my limits but you will have to do whatever I will say ok best friend ?"

Taani smiles a little and say " ok best friend "

Rey " now lets have dinner best friend because you know my best friend is very careless and never take care of her , she forgot that she also have to take medicines "

Taani- " haww you are saying bad about your best friend very bad , very bad "

Rey - " arree I meant that she is careless about her only otherwise she cares for everyone so much, she is so caring and loving..i just love my best friend so much

Taani smile and say " reyyy "

Rey - " taaniii "

Then they smile together and then they had dinner , rey feed taani and taani feed rey

After that rey gave her medicines and go with her to her room (as he knew that taani is very weak because of her disease and sometime she even faints suddenly )

They reach her room and He hug her tightly , she also hug him back and then while breaking the hug rey kiss her cheek making her blush

to hide her blush she say that " reyy what was that ?"

Rey says innocently "what what ? best friend ko hug aur kissy to de he sakte hai na (make a cute puppy innocent face and then smile after seeing taani smile )

he says " you can also give infinite hugs and kisses to your best friend , I wont mind pakka "

he then wink at her . she was shocked and left open mouthed realizing the hidden meaning of rey , then she shook her head while blushing and smiling )

Rey says " good night and sweet dreams my sweetheart best friend "

Taani says smilingly " good night my adorable best friend "

Rey made her lie down on the bed and then cover the quilt over her

Taani - now go rey plz

Rey - I will go once u sleep ok

Taani shook her head and close her eyes acting like sleeping so that rey will go , but he knew her so well that she is acting

Then she open her one eye to see whether rey has gone or not , oppss caught , he is still looking at her while smiling , she open her eyes and again says " aap jao na main so jaungi "

Rey just nod in a no smilingly looking at her cute antics

she again close her eyes trying to sleep but she was not feeling sleepy now

she says with her eyes still closed " rey, best friend apne best friend ki har wish puri karta hai na "

rey say " haan to ? what do my best friend want me to do and by the way you should sleep now "

taanni open her eyes and say with her cutest face" par mujhe nini nahi aayi to aap plz mujhe ek pyaara gaana gaake sulao na plz , pata hai aap bahut acchha gaate ho , your voice is very soothing n loving , abhi maa so gayi hongi varna ma se kehti , pata hai jab bhi mujhe nini nahi aati to vo mujhe lullaby gaake sulati hai ya koi pyaara gaana but abhi aap gaake sulao na "

rey smile at her cute and adorable antics and bent down and says while pulling her nose softly"awww my best friend is sooo adorable "

he didn't realize that they were so close but when he realize he just got lost in her beauty , innocence , purity and cuteness , taani's heartbeats also got faster realizing their closeness , taani's hair were coming on her face because of the wind coming from window making her look even more beautiful and angelic , the wind was also playing with her hair and kissing her cheeks ,

rey bent a little more and tucked her strand of hair behind her ear and just kissed softly on her forehead , she closed her eyes feeling the beautiful moment with her love

but both came to his senses by the sound of the movement of window which caused because of wind outside

both look in other direction to avoid awkwardness again , taani looked outside the window and saw the moon shining and say cutely " best friend mujhe na, yoon shabnami pehle nahi thi chandni vala song sun na hai plz sing it for me na plz "

rey look at her smiling " ok but can I sit beside you while singing the song please "

taani nod in a yes and move a little right side on the bed so that rey can sit

rey sit there and holds her hand , she also hold his hand while smiling and adoring her love , her rey in front of her eyes, he starts singing the song " yoon shabnami pehle nahi thi chandni "

(here is the link to that song , just open it in other tab if u wanna hear it )

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1yzFMUBhOhg

he was singing while admiring his lady love , his taani , he was also caressing her face in between.

taani soon fell asleep , actually after holding his hand she felt that her love her rey is with her so she was relieved and fell sleep feeling the deep love and care hidden in his song , in his every word , in his heart , in him just for her

rey kept looking at her until she fall asleep , rey kissed her hand which he was holding , and slightly removed his hand from her hand , taani smiled a little in sleep feeling his soft kiss on her hand , unwantedly he got up and smile after looking at the sleeping beauty , his adorable lovable sweetheart one last time and went to his room to sleep (but he didn't switched off the little light because he knew taani may get scared in darkness)

he also slept after planning something in his head and saying " I love you taani I just love you so very much jaan I know you also love me so much that you also cant live without me , just wait and watch , you will come to me on your own I trust ur Krishna ji , I trust our love , I trust TAAREY'S LOVE "

~~~~~~~ end of chapter-15 ~~~~~~~

Avoid mistakes , I have not proofread it

I know friends I have promised to give you that surprises updates but couldn't , I felt this part was needed before starting that , so finally the end of super long ch-15 ,

Promo for ch-16 & ONWARDS

meri zindagi ~ tere sang ..

living every moment of my life with my love in 4 days

ch-16 DAY- 1 bachpan 😛~ childhood the most sweet as well as precious phase of our life { living my childhood again but this time with u ..

living love in the childhood😳}

...😛😳

just walk into my life kahe dewanapan 😉

~~~( please don't ask any logical questions as love is logicless and my stories are completely logicless)~~~

Friends there are very less no. of likes and less comments so I m little confused whether to continue this story or not as I also have shortage of time , but still writing it for the readers who actually read it , like it and give their precious and special comment on it but plz tell me if u r not interested then I will discontinue it .i am sending pms to 280 friends and receiving hardly 30 likes and only 2-3 pages of comments , i know very few readers are interested in this story so plz tell me whether I should continue it or not , sorry but am really very disappointed

if u r really interested in this story or read it then please hit like and give your special and precious comment , I know I m not able to reply anyone but plz friends and my dear story readers all your comments make me feel really very special and worth writing it ,

so plz if u r actually reading it then hit like and give a bada wala comment from heart , remember dil se wala big comment plz ,

Thank you so much, Take care

Keep smiling always 😊

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Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES 😊
UNRES

Me First !!!! :)
Wow :)
Amazing update :)
The emotional turmoil of Taarey was very beautifully described :)
Superb :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
Edited by sumana.shesha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res /unres :)
oh god so beautiful and emotional update.
Full of taareylicous update
loved to extreme
oh girl how you write such beautiful and awesome lines :)
rey and taani extremely good :)
i liked how rey determined to get taani and taani to stuborn
y can't she understand dear that rey cannot breath without his taani
rey was cute and adorable he sang lovely song for her :)
at last atleast she gave him 4 days as friend.
But for naughty rey kissed her and teasing awww
i loved completely dear :)
pls update soon i know you are busy but still looking forward.
And pls don't discontinue yaar mahi pls :)
thanks for pm :)
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago

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