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Posted: 10 years ago
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manans new journey:::: part 3:: nxt day nandini wakes up late n ams asks hr hw cn u be so late..hv u forgotten my teachngs..she said sry n leaves to get ready..she reaches colg n manik ws waitng fr hr..manik angrily luks at hr n says u r late nandini murthy..nandini luked at him surprised n asked hw u manage to wake up so early..n more dan dat u evn reachd colg..manik replies yes i hd to cm na coz i wantd to see u..nandini mocks at him..n they both laughed..they cms to the music room n no one was dere..manik ws lyk see whole universe wants us to spend smtym alone..nandini luked at him surprisingly n said wat a dialog mr. malhotra...den pandit entrs n asks nandini to cm wid him..manik ws lyk why u want hr alone i ll also cm..pandit tells him fusion cncrt is ovr nw n u shud practice on ur own nw..asks nandini to follow him..nandini luked at manik n she winked..manik goes aftr them coz he didnt trust pandit..pandit brings nandu to anothr rum n tells hr nandini dnt u think u shud concntrate on ur music..fusion concrt was a success bt its nt enough..u hv to go vry far..hv u evr thot hw u ll make ur ams feel proud of u..nandini has tears in hr eyes..pandit leaves d rum n manik entrs..manik saw hr cryng n said i wont leave dat pandit...hw dare he..n nandini stops him n askd him to calm down..she tells him evrythng wat pandit said..manik ws listning to hr bt yet angry at pandit..nandini to divert his mind tells u r nt spendng ur tym wid ur frnds anymre..they mst b cursing me dat i hv stolen u frm dem..manik smiles... Manik drops hr home..ams saw dem frm window..nandini entrs d house..ams ask hr u dnt hv any grl as ur frnd..nandini ws lyk shockd to hear dis..n smhw she managed to ask hr wat r u sayng ams..ams tells hr i always see u both(manik n nandini) togethr..today also he came to drop u home..nandini undrstood wat ams is tryng to say..so she tells hr its nt lyk dat ams..i ws nt gettng auto so i asked him fr help n he agreed..suddnly chachi cms n unknowngly adds fuel to d fire..by sayng bada shona munda hai...ams luked at hr surprisingly n asks hw u knw him...chachi tells hr he has visitd our home many tyms..now nandini ws clueless n she ws thnkng hw to answr to hr ques nw..she luked at chachi to shut dis topic...chachi undrstood n tells nandu dat u mst b tired na..go n get freshen up n cm fr dinnr..nandini luked at ams n askd fr d permission to leave n she nods...nandini came to hr rum n sighed in relief...manik calls hr bt she was in d washrum..n den nly ams entrs n recieves d call..manik ws abt to say smthng bt she intrfered n said nandini is doin sm work..if u hv anythng to say u tell me n i ll convey ur msg..he jst replied she forgot hr notes in my car n i thot she mst b worried so i thot to tell hr..ams replies ok i ll tell hr n cuts d call..nandini came out of d washrum n saw ams ws standing wid hr phone..she hesitantly asked was dere any call ams..ams tells hr abt wat manik said...nandini says to hrslf wat a timing manik..perfct...ams asks hr to sit wid hr..as she has to ask smthng..nandini is sure dat she z goin to ask hr abt manik..bt still she says wat u want to ask ams..ams asks hr is dat guy(manik)knows classical music or is he interestd in dat...nandini ws laughng at hrslf he evn dnt knw c of classical..bt nandini to change topic askd hr y u r askng abt his intrest in classical all of a suddn...ams replies i had a chat wid pandit abt manik bt d response was nt gud..pandit told me dat manik doesnt knw c of classical..he z a rock singer..sings nly modern songs...nandini ws lyk so what ams...ams says to hr dat why did u lied abt him den..nandini felt herslf in trouble nw..bt she asked wat n wen did i lied ams?? Ams replies u told me dat he is fond of my singng n listens to my song..was dat nt a lie??? U hv nw learnt to lie also?? Nandini tells hr its nthng lyk dat ams..he likes modrn song bt it doesnt mean ki he is nt interestd in classical...n to change d topic she tells plz ams dnt talk abt him anymre na coz m feelng jealous nw...u r my ams na so instead of askng abt me u r askng abt my frnd..n she startd makng faces..ams smiles n asks hr do u want head massage..n nandini ws lyk hw cm u knw ams i really need it...so ams startd laughng...nandini texts manik y did u calld me?? manik::jst to hear ur voice... nandini::'smiles' bt u heard ams voice.. manik:: shut up nandini cnt u keep ur phone wid u nly..nandini:: i ws doin smthng na..she tells him manik i hv to tell u sumthng... .Manik:: yes go ahead m listening.. nandini:: no let it b we ll discuss it in colg... manik::ok..as u say.. Next mrng pandit cms to nandini's house..nandini opens d door n ws shockd..she asks him to cm inside..n he smiles...ams asks him to sit n he asks hr is evrythng ok u called n askd to cm...ams replies no i jst wanted to introduce u to my family...she introduced him to evryone n said he ws one of my best studnt n he requestd me to cm to mumbai..evryone was shockd...chachi askd to pandit y u wantd hr to cm here all of a sudden...he replied guru maa i want u to help nandini in hr career..as she is vry talentd bt still she needs ur guidance..nandini luked at him surprised..he asks nandini u r nt goin colg today..nandini replies i ws abt to leave..he tells hr so lets go m also goin to colg nly...she resists bt den agrees..they both reachd colg..manik saw dem..n leaves frm dere angrily...nandini follows him..she holds his hand n stops him...n askd wat happnd??? Manik asks hr wat wer u doin wid him??? Nandini replies he came to my home today n i ws leavng fr d colg so he insistd me to cm wid him n i agreed...manik ws surprised hearing dis n askd hr wat he ws doin at ur home...dnt he hv any othr wrk...nandini replies ams called him..as dey hd to discuss smthng...manik ws lyk listen nandini u stay away frm him..or else...she teases him n asks wat u ll do...manik says i wont talk to u.. she laughs n says wen u r jealous u luk vry cute..n he ws lyk wait i ll tell u hw i m feelng nw...he goes to a grl n strts to flirt wid hr..dat grl is a guitarist so he asks hr do u want any help...dat grl happily says will u really help me manik..manik replies ofcourse i ll help u n luks at nandini stealthily...na ndini is nt reacting to it...so he starts teachng her hw to play dat note...nw nandini is burning in jealousy...nandini goes to him n drags him aside..n asks wat wer u doin wid dat grl?? Tryng to make me feel jealous...so u see m jealous..r u happy nw..n she leaves angrily..manik goes behind hr n holds hr n says i m feelng d same wenevr i see u wid pandit..she is still angry at him...n says to him u wer toh enjoyng na so go n hold hr hand...i wont trouble u..manik holds his ears n says sorry baba i wont do dat again..nw smile...n lets go to d canteen...she smiles n they both leaves...manan r at canteen nw..cabir calls manik n ask him to sit wid dem...manik is lyk yes ofcourse n he brings nandini as well...mukti taunts nw our majnu manik dnt lyk spendng tym wid his frnds...manik replies no yar its nt lyk dat..n evrybdy strtd laughng...jst den nandini's phone rings n its pandit again...she excuses hrslf n recieves d call..pandit asks hr wen u ll leave fr home...she replies aftr smtym sir..n he says ok i ll drop u home..she replies thnk u sir bt i cn go by myslf..so he replies its ur ams ordr...so she hd to say yes...n she cuts d call..she joins dem again..manik asks u luk worried..wat happnd??whose call ws it?? She replies pandit...n he ws lyk wat d hell...y did he calld u?? She replies he wants to drop me home..i resistd bt he said its ams ordr...so i hd to say yes..cabir said wat.. dat pandit hs nthng to do..n tells manik to chill..bt manik leaves frm dere angrily...cabir startd singng "jali to bujhi na kasam se koyla ho gya apna manik "...n evrybdy laughs...nandini goes behind him...she z searchng fr him bt he ws nowhre...so she thought of goin on terrace...n she found him dere... (to b contd...)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Can u give the link of the second prt
I missed it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I read all prts..
Awesome work
Superb..
Bechare manik😆

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