OS AbhiGya - Dilemma - Letting her go

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

AWESOME just AWESOME... I loved the way you have written it.. :)

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Diahh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Loved it Aafrah! 👏 For a minute I thought you are going to let Pragya die! Abhi's dilemma, their shock, pain, well portrayed!⭐️ Hoping to see something similar in the show!!

Thank you for the awesome story Aafrah! 😃

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

This was so lovely and beautiful Aafrah !

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Arbitrator.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow. The story plot was really amazing. You showed the dilemma and options so precisely, suits the title perfectly. Great job.

Do write more and pm me.

Tc.

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Amazing os...loved it!!

Nicely written😊

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Thank you, aafrah!! That was fantastic 👍🏼!!!! Had such an effect on me that I was just as frantic as Abhi in my reading ... I'll have to re-read slowly now 😳!!!! I loved it ... especially Abhi's moments of fear/dilemma/ indecision!!!!

Edited by indi - 11 years ago

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

What an adorable story
Great idea
Let's see how the show unfolds
Thanks for a great read
Please pm if you have other stories

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sam

@sam78

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome os. Abhi was in pain what if he lost his pragya.

Edited by sam78 - 11 years ago

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

U/R

Aafrah, I really like this alternate, expanded take on the drowning scene! AbhiGya play fighting, his new nickname for her, calling Andi for new dress and accessories just made me go AWWW! He's still a bit mean in his pranks, but their relationship seems to be that of friends and I like the easy relationship they have. My heart really went out to him when he was fighting to decide who to save and though he started out saying he didn't love her, by the end, he realized that she was necessary and regretted all the wrongs he did. The best part of the story...

As for Pragya, she looked at Abhi in tired embarrassment - it had been a long night that opened doors to a new future, only Pragya didn't know it yet.

Abhi noticed her awkwardness. "Fuggy, I guess whatever I do, you were destined to be photographed in Bulbul's wedding in a drenched attire!" and Abhi's grin was back.

"From next time, we ll ask Andy to always bring three-four extra outfits ready" laughed Pragya, as their heads gently bumped into each other's.

That last scene where they laughingly bump their heads together... It was so beautiful and the ending, so hopeful! Wonderful OS! 👏

Edited by Fanaah - 10 years ago