~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added)

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

~Chapter 2~

Sanyukta &Kaustuki reaches class nd Randhir&group also reaches, while searching for seats,one of their classmate intensionally tries to make her fall,but she doesnt fells ,two manly hands stops her from falling ,and those hands were of Randhir's...

Randhir-hey miss r u ok?? by d way i am Randhir..(it was lyk luv at first sight for him & now Randhir was in luv vid Sanyukta)

Sanyukta slaps Randhir.

Sanyukta- i knw u guys very well,u all r samecheap(Sanyukta is thinking That randhir amd that guy are friends)..

Randhir gets angry,but doesnt says even a word to her. Amd class starts so they had to sit together

They kept on studying and randhir was stealing glances
In mid break,Kaustoki goes near sanyukta and asks her about what happened in morning,but Sanyukta says to ignore(she says so bcz Randhir wasstaring at them)as

Randhir was a guy of friendly nature so Randhir & kaustoki becomes friends and other group memeber also became friends

After that class ends nd when they were about to leave for their respective hostels.

Randhir-u did wrong..

Sanyukta-oh hlo dont act lyk an innocent child,i knw k wo tmhara frnd hi tha jisne mje girane ki koshish ki thi,i knw ye tm boys ki tricks pta h tum phle aisi situations create krte ho k girl tmhare pyar mein pagal ho jaye nd phir usey ditch krte ho aur marne k liye chod dete h..

Randhir- (politely)look miss please mind your language,u r crosing your limit,mujhe to us boy ka name tak nhi pta.

Sanyukta- oh to ab tum meri limits btaoge (nd laughs) just get lost,mujhe koi intreset nhi h tumse bat krne mein..

Randhir-me too huhh...

then kaustoki comes nd says by to whole Randhir group..

In hostel-

kaustoki-yar Sanyukta those guys were nice na,especially dat jiggy,nd Randhir was also gud,wt u say.

Sanyukta-ye boys kuch nice nhi hote,all boys are same cheap,loosers so u dont think about those guys nd just do study...

then they studies and goes to sleep,bt koustoki was thinking abt jiggy nd she asks

Sanyukta-Sanyu tmhe jiggy kaisa laga

Sanyukta-pehli bat to ye agar kisi boy k bare mein bat krni h to leave me alone nd 2ndly
mera naam Sanyu nhi h.

kaustoki-bt maine to as frnd bola tha

Sanyukta intrupts- ab kya mein so skti hun..

kaustoki-okk gud nyt..den both kaustuki & Sanyukta falls asleep..

In boys syd-

Randhir is lost in dreams of Sanyukta& jiggy is lost in dreams of kaustoki..nd parth got irritated bcoz of their strange behaviour bt as they were best frnds so he doesnt says anything.. He tells them to sleep but sleep was away from Randhir's eyes how Sanyukta fell on him & how she slapped him..

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Shivika Agarwal

@shivika838

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

ohh it was quite amazing !!
Hmm , Randhir is misunderstood

i liked it😃

update soony 😛

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Awesome update👏

Sanyu misunderstands randhir😲

It is like role reversal of rd & sanyu😉

Update soon

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ritika

@ritikaagrawal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Wowww.randhir is in love with sanyu at first sight ...read both the prts at one go ...such a lovely concept. ..😉

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Shivangi garg

@gargpurvi85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

What??

Slap??

hey bhagwaan... 😲

Fab update as always...

do keep updating..

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Sanyukta

@Mystic_Aura

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome

Yaar sanyu ko ppyar me pagall kar do

Iska naam (ff ka) alterverse hona chahiye tha

'Alternate universe'

Gr8 yaa

Conti soon!

Ps- sorry for chotu cmmnt but exams sar ppe hain...hope u understand

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Anushka

@anudoll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Sorry...Main late ho gayi...

Coming to the update

It was awesomeee!!!!

Loved it

Randhir dreaming about Sanyu

Too good

Update the next soon

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praneeta

@pd786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

thanks for the pm

loved the story

pls pm me whenever you update

i'll try to reply asap but till monday i'm busy due to board exams

i'll if i can't comment

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cardcaptor

@cardcaptor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

randhir is not an attitude king

now this is something new

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Thank you so much for your likes & comments,cant reply to each comment, vl rply later till then,enjoy this chapter

~Chapter 3~

In morning,kaustuki tries hard to wake sanyukta,but sanyukta ignored and continued to sleep .. Finally kaustoki started getting ready thinking that she might wake up untill she will get ready,but when she got ready and sanyukta was still sleeping,then she thought that its high time now,sanyukta should wake up now

K-wake up Sanyukta otherwise we will be late

s-oh god kaustoki its already late,tum ek kam kro tum vidushi k sath jao nd mere liye achi si seat reserve krlena

vidhushi is their classmate and living in the same hostel

boys hostel-

R-oh shit itna time hogya and tum dono ne mujhe uthaya bhi nhi tum log niklo nd mere liye seat le lena,mein cls mein milta hun..

After getting ready,both sanyukta and randhir goes out of hostel out of same time .. Their hostels are on same road and oposite to each other so
Sanyukta and both are waiting for auto richaw but any auto doesnt comes..

After waiting for sometime,one auto comes and they both runs towards auto and collides with each other,just then they noticed that they colided with eache other , They both started fighting for auto richaw then auto wale bhayia offers them to go thogether as they have to go to same place ..

R- i think bhayia is right,so lets go

S-oh hlo mr. mein tumhare sath nhi jayungi

R-oh madam apko yahan koi aur auto nhi milne wala chlna h to bolo warna chlo bhayia ise nhi jana.

.Sanyukta thinks that Randhir is right,so she agrees

S- ab agar tum itna insist kr rhe ho to theek h,mein chli hun..

R-itna insist to kia hi nhi maine

Auto wale bhayia- bhayi sahab ab chalna h ya nhi

both-chlo bhayia..

They reaches at their destination Ofcourse their clases..When they were obout to go out of auto,sanyukta waa about to fall,but randhir saves her from falling by holding her from wrist
Sanyukta makes an angry face..

R-aise mat dekho warna tumhein mujhse pyar ho jayega,ab frns bn hi gye h to..

He was intrupted by a voice of slap,which was ofcourse on his face itself and the person who slapped him was sanyukta

Randhir gets angry and goes towards class as he didnt wanted to create a scene on road

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